Chapter 13 | 07
Added 2024-04-18 08:00:00 +0000 UTC
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I swear I feel like youβre someone who understands and thinks about the layers of this story in the way I want readers to think about it, reading between the lines and everything (idk how to say it better, i hope you get what I mean haha. Itβs a compliment!)
alissacolors
2024-04-21 15:07:07 +0000 UTCOkay 1) Gilbert is totally right about how Leon is talking a big game and abandoning him where it matters, and 2) the way Gilbert totally turned the tables on Leon here, when Leon wanted to find out more about who is hurting Gilbert, was masterful. Also I am *very* curious about whatβs going to happen in the next few panels, how Leon will respond, cuz being an anxious, perpetually horny adolescent crushing on your roommate is difficult enough, and itβs very possible his crush is going to be painfully obvious any minute. π«£π«£
Violeta
2024-04-21 00:22:05 +0000 UTCThe character interactions in this series are so raw and real. You're so good at keeping characters true to themselves and their established personalities. And the way you're handing Gil's plotline, its such a delicate yet unflinching way of talking about abuse that I really admire. Your writing regularly confronts the audience as much as it does the characters, and gives the reader a lot to think about. tldr: i love your work
Kappathefish
2024-04-19 15:51:17 +0000 UTC
