A Ride to Remember - Chapter 3
Added 2025-01-31 18:01:02 +0000 UTCAnother 31 pages of the Ride to Remember Series!
(And 2 bonus cut pages)
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A Ride to Remember is now on hold, help make it happen sooner by sharing your story ideas in the comments.
The next chapter will be for a new series!
Comments
Wow thanks for the detailed analysis! You point out some very good flaws! Not sure if I can plug all of those holes, but I'll try to close a few with Ch4 (likely the final chapter for R2R).
Su Voon
2025-04-09 15:18:06 +0000 UTCWell, here's my two cents on the story so far, tell me if I'm overthinking things here since the story may simply be, shall we say, more for the art than the literary plot. Ok, so the main character doesn't really have a name - actually, none of them seem to have names so far; you should consider changing that if the series is going to continue because the characters may become hard to keep track of over time. The main character is feminized in the first chapter and starts immediately behaving in a manner abnormal to what they typically exhibit by their own admission. We see further erratic behavior in this chapter where the main character not only engages in sexual activities with even greater eagerness as a woman, but it seems to have been strengthened by whatever solution the suspicious researcher poured onto their head. Whether the main character's mental changes progress further to match their physical ones and their permenance definitely needs to be explored in a future chapter at some point. Additionally, how the company deploying the feminizing spray on trains has the ability to basically perform human experiments in broad daylight, completely upending people's lives as a result, is another mystery that lacks an explanation. I'd love to know what exactly led to these sort of countermeasures being considered 'necessary'. If you can freely alter an individual in any way you choose, well, I can think of all kinds of ways that can be weaponized, and I know I'm not the only one that has the opinion such power could potentially destabilize or outright collapse society if deployed at a large enough scale. The woman in this last chapter seems to know the main character somehow. What is their relationship, and where does it go from here? I'd guess that to be the primary focus of the next chapter if you don't want to delve too deeply into the details of the setting. In any case, I apologize for the wall of text and hope it proves at least somewhat useful to you and I look forward to seeing what comes next in this story.
M4C1
2025-04-09 03:13:01 +0000 UTCDefinitely enjoying this series though felt a great scene and moment was missed to pun the title during the sex. As they went to have her on top, could have had him ask her to try riding his tool on top of him get more results which she'll remember from him later cumming in her. She could have thought that "riding" moment was to remember.
Silvershadowdrakes
2025-02-23 06:27:40 +0000 UTCLooking forward to seeing more
cool
2025-02-15 23:32:11 +0000 UTCThat short hair and seifuku suit her
MI_Malecki
2025-02-03 09:45:57 +0000 UTCI love this storie !
Paladin Roanne
2025-01-31 20:45:38 +0000 UTCI'm excited to hear your ideas! FYI: I'll be away for work from the 2nd until the 12th without access to my computer, so won't be able to make anything during that time. Hopefully, I can make a sequence or two to schedule so there isn't too large gap.
Su Voon
2025-01-31 18:07:28 +0000 UTC
