ReVoB 17.08
Added 2021-06-05 02:45:52 +0000 UTC"sloppy joes were my favorite lunches in the mess, though"
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Ahaha general pew-pew bang-stick shapes go - goes to show any sketch can look convincing if it's rough enough? Man, those landing poses - it's like playing Twister with live ammo. I'm glad the shots look convincing there, too, because what & where are legs, even. And lmaoooo bless you spinning my laziness on action lines and onomatopoeia into something remotely artistic. I mean HEY I'll take what works - sometimes ya gotta shrug and move on, let whatever's on the page speak for itself. Ahahah BOTH our relationships with these gals gettin' complicated, I love it.
Myshu
2021-06-09 16:50:11 +0000 UTC[spits out sloppy joes] gdu HAW I still dunno why ya said them guns shit -- look jus' fine to me! Love your last two frames, these two crazy red-haired bitches lookin' right on point. Those expressions are *chefkiss* for real. Love 'em, in combination wit' them poses. The action bein' silent minus the action-words is nice. I dig it. It carries more weight that way, lets us focus on the action itself. LAWD that blood out the nose is a GREAT touch for Dead Fella:tm:. I like that a lot. Like it's not clear if he fell, was shot, punched, stabbed -- it's just a good This Guy Is Super Dead image, I like that for whatever reason. Kudos on that choice. HEH yeah we all know these the two ladies I both HATE :rhys: But. BUT. They growed on me. Hell, guess EVERYONE has at this point, fuck all this writin' I done. I'm lookin' forward to the continued interaction, you do that light-but-fierce friends-but-rivals thing SO well. Very much enjoy seeing it in action. Keep goin', yo.
Pony
2021-06-06 02:12:41 +0000 UTC
