What have I done...? 3 #2
Added 2018-01-20 16:01:00 +0000 UTC
„What Have I Done?“….
Life can play a difficult game with winning conditions and loss conditions… situations that happen in every family, every relationship, everyone‘s life~ situations that create a person and form it over the time. Still, when something gets destroyed, something new gets the chance to enter the game…
This is the story about Chess and her family. What makes them special? What makes them weak, what makes them strong? What happened, what will happen? Find it out for yourself.
Find the first page of Part 1 here: fav.me/d8mz5tp
Find the first page of Part 2 here: fav.me/d97v4uj
Find the first page of Part 3 here: http://fav.me/dbzw183
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It's time to let this old story live on, again. Yes, "What Have I Done?" is back and better than ever- expect more information, more pages and more feelings~
I hope you enjoy the last part of it.
Comments
Ah that's alright, hopefully we can edit for next time xP
TwoTailedD3rpy
2018-01-24 10:22:52 +0000 UTCGaaah, all the stupid little mistakes XD Okay, there were some things I did on purpose, but other than that thank you for the criticism Taily. i will learn from it^^ Too bad I can't change them, now since it's traditional :/ ...
LupiArts
2018-01-22 07:11:25 +0000 UTCTime for me to don my editor hat! *Dons it* x3 Panel 2: There should be a comma between "long" and "tough" due to it being 2 adjectives back to back. Bottom left panel: "Heros" -> "Heroes" and "I threw them away, into the fire and didn't pay attention..." would sound better as "I threw it into the fireplace while not paying attention..." and bigger bottom right panel: "I feel sorry" -> "I'm sorry" and "I just want to forget about all this, look forward" -> "I just want to forget about all this and look forward" Hope this helps! And wonderful job on this page! xP
TwoTailedD3rpy
2018-01-21 20:26:24 +0000 UTC
