Breakfast WIP
Added 2022-09-30 04:03:59 +0000 UTCSo for this one I kind of worked up the sketch, not actually knowing what story was going on (I have a bad tendency of that. I don't even know how it happens) and then tried to shoehorn in a story as it went on. Whatcha think? Too pervy? Not pervy enough? Send the feedback!
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I still have it on the list of things to finish! I think I just get cold feet when my stuff gets too kinky, like people are going to think I've gone too far or something. But I gotta drop that already!
2023-05-13 18:07:06 +0000 UTCFuuuuuuck, did you never finish this? Insanely hot premise, plus that back arch is fucking hot. He needs it. Fuck your roommate's brother, holy shit.
Teaf Sochi
2023-05-13 09:33:26 +0000 UTCWell, the story fits the characters and their expressions, no matter if planned from the get go or added later in the process. And that matter of fact face and statement of the older brother makes me feel like he never expected anything else to happen, despite the agreement. Regarding the pervyness: There is always a spectrum and that leaves enough room for some more kinky / pervy scenes next to other more lighthearted and yet pervy scenes. :)
graypaw
2022-10-02 08:02:01 +0000 UTC
