[Please Read before Voting! <3]
Added 2025-02-19 01:46:02 +0000 UTCSince I have just finished the last page of a long sprint of exposition, I wanted to get a readout on you beans on how well the story keeps your attention! attached in this description is a link to the pdf file from pages 1 to 22. if possible, please give a read through then come back here and pick one of the answers below on your engagement levels on the story.
Feel free to elaborate in the comments if you are not a fan of the multiple Choice method.
Looking forward to sharing the partnership to come with you all.<3
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1vzvUVG5lOP64j0gqOg3B6yNgzr5AQPGz?usp=sharing
Comments
Thank you so much for this honest reply Maren, I really appreciate the truthful experience! Yeah I had a feeling that this would be the case with some, deff made me a little nervous posting consecutive action pages lol. It almost feels like the action sequence is going on FOREVER due to the time between each page lol. However I decided to opt for the rougher page by page release, to aim for the higher chance of an entertaining end product. I am thrilled to hear it came together during your pdf read <3. and it excites me that you enjoy the landscape! ive been working to improve these to better immerse readers into the world. Thank you again!!
Spoogiehowl
2025-02-21 03:47:46 +0000 UTCI hate to admit that when the pages were being released individually on Patreon, I wasn't enjoying the comic post-shower. But I tried re-reading it all as one PDF just now, and I grew a lot of appreciation for the pacing and story. I really like the use of the wide shot at the end in particular because it's a perfect moment for the reader to take a breath and start asking themselves questions about this mystery. (Plus it's a beautiful landscape.)
marenoodles
2025-02-20 12:31:59 +0000 UTCThanks a million Foli Seriously <3. I'm so grateful to have your kind words and support! So glad you enjoy both aspects to the tale so far, and I so look forward to sharing more your way
Spoogiehowl
2025-02-19 18:31:39 +0000 UTCYour porn and story are booth awsome^^ no need to worry go by your own pace my friend we be supportin u
Foli
2025-02-19 17:46:38 +0000 UTCIβm so happy you feel this way Akira π₯²! At the end of this I want to have a tale that adds a level of 3Dness to these characters that will embellish a desire to see them naked and being spicy. I think back to a lot of the characters that get me going from other properties, and that attraction always sat on a flatbed made up of sfw narrative themes that made their personality shine through!
Spoogiehowl
2025-02-19 03:32:26 +0000 UTCYour porn is nice but having a story that isn't completely porn is great! I want to see what kind of world you can weave up.
Akira Kitsune
2025-02-19 02:23:23 +0000 UTC
