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Opening_Intro_animatic_update_2

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Fair enough, I suppose. I suppose you may have to come out with guns blazing in order to garner attention, eh?

TJ

I love it. Your character designs and fluid body language make this so unique.

Tuume

Intriguing, can't wait to see how this develops.

Michael Vaccaro

Since everyone in this world is their own unique creature with their own special power, it's very similar to The Amazing World of Gumball. Only replace the humour with a lot of sex.

Matthew Chambers

This opening is so amazing, I can’t wait to see this in a full animations, great work pink

Count Golden crown

OMG wow, also Brall at Prision with collar is extra sus.

Miy Eterp

Wow, thank you for paying attention to these small details. I didn’t think anyone would point that out. I understand your concerns. Before creating this opening, I shared my ideas with my partner, explaining which scenes I planned to include. She had the same concerns as you. She was worried that I might reveal too much of the story and wasn’t very supportive of the approach I took. On this point, I have a different perspective from hers. I believe that the scenes I chose for the opening reveal the story on a scale similar to many movie trailers. Many films disclose about this much in their trailers. Honestly, I’d love to keep some parts as surprises, but I’m not in a position to hold back the intrigue like Marvel did with the Avengers: Endgame trailer, because my project doesn’t have that kind of attention. Moreover, I’ve set a goal for this project to attract more supporters and potential backers who can help me produce a pilot episode. If I were to hold back too much content, it might make the project less interesting and fail to catch their attention.

Wiriya Tumme

You seem to be on track to tell a lot with a little, if you take my meaning. Very efficient; quite nice. Though I suppose a concern could be: do you think you’re spoiling key reveals for the story in the opening, or no? I haven’t the context, so I’m not sure. Just a consideration I thought prudent to share with you.

TJ

I mean I know people like celebrities and models DO tend to have run ins with the law. But I'd expect Brall to have a good enough lawyer to get her out of prison. What REALLY surprises me is the COLLAR though. What has she gotten herself into?

ThatDarkDude

Yeah It's complicated...

Wiriya Tumme

Brall...in prison...with a collar?!? OK now I'm concerned....AND curious about where this is going

ThatDarkDude


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