Dalvir's Divergence - Episode II: Restructuring
Added 2021-04-09 04:27:59 +0000 UTCEpisode II is here! It's a much more involved chapter than the first, I can say that much XD As always, I hope ya'll enjoy, and please lemme know your thoughts by liking and commenting!
Comments
I feel like Dalvir is better than all of them and after maybe squishing Sanj he will try to change their hearts about this crazy family dynamics! Also does he have a shot with Marissa now? ;)
Molerboy
2021-04-10 21:48:25 +0000 UTCYeah no I feel ya there XD I'm glad you're feeling it though! It's fun making these chapters like this, like I usually don't have so many characters interacting at once, so it's more ambitious than the usual!
Guireyart
2021-04-09 17:30:56 +0000 UTCThe part of me with a massive Sanj bias is a little sad, but I'm loving this story so far. Familial drama and inner conflict wrapped in a nice sizey package. Keep up the great work as always man.
Cool
2021-04-09 05:29:17 +0000 UTCHmm the conflict inside Dalvir is really interesting
nicolas
2021-04-09 05:03:15 +0000 UTCYup, it's all led to this moment, when everything turns on it's head!
Guireyart
2021-04-09 04:42:13 +0000 UTCThanks!! Yeah I feel ya there XD I knew it had to happen, so to ease the pain I tried to make the second to last page really great lol
Guireyart
2021-04-09 04:41:49 +0000 UTCSpectacular plot twist. It hurts me. But I’m for it 🥲
LBM
2021-04-09 04:32:21 +0000 UTCIf I was Dalvir, this would be so cathartic
SmolCrowBro
2021-04-09 04:32:06 +0000 UTC
