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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 9 Chapter 387/ 32: Family Day

Hey Everyone,

So I would love to get some feedback with this chapter. I found myself on the fence about whether I liked what I wrote, and I would love to hear opinions.

Thanks, I hope you enjoy.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nwehYWYpW2jHnAHzmFHSnUy-aWlwqhPUSY5KbWtYkBw/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

First i like what you did with the mother. It was clear the moment she moved in and got exposed to a lot before the revelation that she will be some day one of angelas girls but how was the question and i like that you make the mother or ex mother the first one that makes the step. Still weird because a mother is someone who raised a kid but violet wasnt a mother really. Suprise with lucy that angela just decided yeah now she is pregnant. But good chapter.

SirCoffee

OMG!, NEED MORE!.

Shamim


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