Intertwined - Episode 3b - Release (+$5 patrons)
Added 2020-08-07 12:21:48 +0000 UTCHi,
I would like to share the 0.3b version of Intertwined with you.
- Added a message from Alexis after she "kicked" you out.
- You now know if it's a male or female who interrupted Alexis and you in the shower.
- Changed the first meeting with Erynn. (You need to restart right before you meet Erynn)
- 2 extra renders
- Changed a small error in ep1 (no need to start a new game).
- Language tweaks and some spelling fixes (Huge thanks to MrFriendly for proofreading)
I hope you enjoy it.
Feel free to share your likes and/or dislikes in the comments.
Best regards,
Nyx
Comments
Is Alexis Layla's sister? I don't know.. Maybe, maybe not. You will see in future updates who that person was. MC hasn't really forgiven Erynn just yet. It took him basically a week to meet her, and that was by chance.. He didn't contact her, because he didn't know what to say or to react. He realized they were kids back then and he shouldn't just dwell on that. You will get to know Erynn again, what is she like and so on.. And once you get to know her and know more about the past what happened, you as a player can decide for yourself if you forgive her or not. Also, you have to see all episodes as a beta.. Once I'm further with the story, I might change some things, add scenes or rewrite some stuff. I realized already that I made a huge mistake with Alexis at the start. Because you can ignore her, it changes a lot of things later on and you basically miss half of the story and I have to come up with other stuff to compensate for it.. #TeamStruggle..
Chris Faes
2020-08-24 07:38:41 +0000 UTCProbs im a cpt obvious here, but is Alex Laylas sister? If so thats gonna rock the world in a furure... Also no offence here(i 100% love your story my friend) but it still seems a bit strange that our mc forgiven Erynn so quickly after that sh!t she did to him... For him to change from normal kid to that douche that even his mom had enaugh and sent him to his father(had to be traumatized or something) it took like a few seconds(next day after clubbing(and i totally ignored her there)) to give her a hug and compliments, to me it would take a tleast a week to just greet her... Also im totally biased as #TeamLayla lol Keep the awesome work!
Qdlat1986
2020-08-24 07:15:27 +0000 UTC
