ACE 42
Added 2023-03-07 22:58:17 +0000 UTCCultured Perspectives
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2 months late, but I finally read the last 8 chapters I was holding off on. Liked the ending a lot. Specially since it showed that the Dean is willing to change his mind (even if he is somewhat up his own ass). Too often you see authors turn a criticism of a character into a bashing fic. Having read a decent chunk of the escape from the under under city and the conclusion at the end on the history of the what had happened also allows you to see the perspective the Dean and why he takes such a hardline approach. It’s refreshing to read a story where everyone has motives and they act based on them instead of having 2D personalities with no depth.
Zerak
2023-04-30 13:55:19 +0000 UTCIt being kind of long was intentional, though it was about far more than repairing Vi and Jaycifer's relationship.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-03-08 08:10:18 +0000 UTCNice end of Act 1. I'd have to reread it all to be sure, but it def felt like the Under-UnderCity overstayed its welcome as it was coming out, even if it served its purpose in getting Vi and Jaycifer to have a good relationship. Still, I enjoyed seeing a lot of the changes and will be interested to see where you take this going forward.
Rosenheim
2023-03-08 00:47:33 +0000 UTCIt is.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-03-08 00:31:38 +0000 UTCIs this the end point of the Arc? I last read the part where they ran from the rat people and wanted to wait till the Arc fished and binge it.
Zerak
2023-03-08 00:22:37 +0000 UTCThis is a good endpoint for an Act 1. Very much loved that we got to see the Yordle In Charge’s POV.
TravelerOfTime
2023-03-07 23:47:00 +0000 UTCReally cool chapter looking forward to seeing what you do with the world in book 2 now that you have completely derailed canon for piltover and probably Zaun also
Alice
2023-03-07 23:46:11 +0000 UTCHead of the Piltover Council as having a good day. Missed a 'w' in was
Alice
2023-03-07 23:26:54 +0000 UTCHuh, Hiemerdoof really stepping back and mellowing out, relatively speaking. With Jaycifer directing development in this way its likely that the floof will be less obstructive then in cannon, as long as nothing like that hexcore mutating plants doenst trigger him again.
Zachary Brown
2023-03-07 23:17:59 +0000 UTC
