MG 21 WooS Pt 2
Added 2023-12-11 07:36:51 +0000 UTCGoing to Church
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Fixed, except for the Hay one, because that's written phonetically.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-12-14 22:01:40 +0000 UTCEdits my Chakramy Shroud -> my Shroud(?) Striding over my charge -> to my charge judgement on you after you died, -> you've died Good, how that feel? -> How's Hay shall serve -> given you use a th later in this same sentence I don't know if this one is intentional without the formers -> former's Law-Abiding Americans -> law-abiding covered in grim -> grime
Meudon
2023-12-11 09:01:43 +0000 UTC
