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Huh, I forgot about that. It might be oopsie on Fortiche's part, but nonetheless thank you for the clarification
MS_Stuff
2024-12-21 09:58:45 +0000 UTCBecause they use it in Arcane (episode 3, when Vi realizes she walked her family right into a trap).
PublicLee Speaking
2024-12-21 08:16:30 +0000 UTCI've been re-reading this story, after Arcane (amazing by the way), but I've been wondering... Why are people swearing on God and not Janna or another Spirit of great strength or their ilk? To my knowledge Runeterra does not have an actual church to a divine like our world does. I know Demacia has Kayle and Morgana, Noxus Mordekaiser, Shurima the Ascended, Targon the Aspects, Constellations and Dragons, Ixtal Skarner, Bilgewater Nagakeburos and Tahm's River King persona, Ionia their host of spirits, and Piltower has Janna as mentioned
MS_Stuff
2024-12-21 07:04:20 +0000 UTCSo, that's an error on my part, as he did doff the coat, goggles, helmet, and weapons, which is why he could check his reflection just by glancing at a bit of polished metal. He may be concussed, but he'd realize he was still wearing glowing goggles, and his sword would bump on the seat of his carriage. Mind you, he's still soaked with blood, beat to hell and back, and wearing armored pants, but he's not obviously JUSTICE. I added a line in when he drops of the corpses that I thought I did originally, specifying what he dropped his clearly unnatural gear off as well, but apparently I did not.
PublicLee Speaking
2024-12-08 19:57:47 +0000 UTCDang! Hope we get a different pov on how Jacifier is seen after having to deal with saboteurs and assassins. Thanks for the chapter and looking forward to more!!
Flbiv
2024-12-08 04:53:36 +0000 UTCWell, this is gonna be interesting! At no point did he change so he’s still wearing the “spirit“ armor speaking like a spirit with glowing eyes and carrying weapons that no one has seen in this world yet. So much shit has just hit the fan that he doesn’t realize because of the concussion it’s gonna be insane. As a sidenote, he really needs to upgrade from nine mil. It’s not a bad caliber but carrying a pistol as your main weapon, you need something like 10 mil auto or 45 super, especially against the stupidly, tough and magic and Imbued inhabitants of Runeterra.
daniel koval
2024-12-08 04:50:48 +0000 UTCEdits give the ridiculous -> given didn’t exactly narrowed -> narrow while a few fatalities -> This is left dangling. You expound on the upgrades, but never return to the possibility of fatalities. while Viktor has suggested -> had embrace a corrupt systems -> system incredible naïve -> incredibly
Meudon
2024-12-08 01:30:02 +0000 UTCDamn it. Now I'm wanting a chapter ASAP that covers Kirraman's side of this and after he passes the fuck out. Enjoyed it though including the rambling bit towards the end and her seeming to be in disbelief at his attempts at propriety in his condition and dawning realization of how much did occur as he keeps going.
Chaeden Amastis
2024-12-08 00:55:02 +0000 UTC
