Easy Cum, Easy Go
Added 2020-07-09 09:59:28 +0000 UTCFirst draft of what was formerly "The Balld of Brooke Balantyne," I'm not happy with everything in it because there were some requirements that I didn't follow as closely as I should have, so there's going to be a good rewrite during the day. Expect some superfluous sections to be cut so the story gets a little tighter.
--Jaycee
Comments
Glad to hear it. I was going to remove two sections (the date and the doctor) and add a small dream sequence featuring Fantasia, but some comments from the customer indicated he liked the kissing scene, so I saved it. It's not going to be hugely different, but I think it's going to be better than now.
Jaycee Knight
2020-07-09 16:26:16 +0000 UTCI’m loving the story so far. I can’t wait to see it all tightened up.
Mashugana
2020-07-09 14:02:26 +0000 UTC
