Rewritten Chapters 268-274 (Nicolai only--for people who already read the old version)
Added 2025-09-14 17:03:01 +0000 UTCThis is all the rewritten content, but only foc
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Gracias
신현준
2025-10-02 07:55:30 +0000 UTCfeels more natural tbh. Well done!
Kooooomakimi
2025-09-26 19:26:44 +0000 UTCHmm good point, I might see about adding that ;o
Jamie Duncan
2025-09-16 13:30:09 +0000 UTCI like the changes. I enjoyed how it was before the rewrites, but I think this feels more natural. I'm excited to see him selling those bots and weapons in the future. Hope you continue to improve in health!
Zack Countler
2025-09-15 00:59:03 +0000 UTCI think you should have Nicolai show more of a reaction to receiving basically a cultivating ally, like show him excited, imagining or fantasizing the things he would be capable with a robot capable of spiritual abilities under his command . Something similar to when he was first testing the spirit claw and was imagining himself tearing through the forest and slaughtering it's inhabitants.cause his reaction was pretty lack luster and unlike him . But other than that I don't have any complains it was a perfect chapter
bob
2025-09-14 23:26:42 +0000 UTC
