She Is Being Targeted ~Sex Edition~ Ch. 2 Initial Draft Complete
Added 2024-06-04 00:55:24 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
I just finished the initial draft of the new chapter! I apologize for the delay, but it's finally done. This one was quite a challenge with its length, but your support kept me going.
I'll start the cleanup process soon and aim to have the complete version ready as quickly as possible. Thanks for your patience and understanding!
As always, thank you for your support!
Cheers!
(6/10/2024): I'm about 50% done with the cleanup. I'll make sure to finish it within this week. You can check out the latest version of my work using the new link above. The cleaned-up version is currently up to page 324.
Comments
How's the clean up so far?
H Lewis
2024-06-15 14:53:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the update
Konata Aoi
2024-06-10 21:53:03 +0000 UTChow far are u with the cleanup process?
KrusteDE
2024-06-09 16:07:40 +0000 UTCI've read few chapters of this over the months, well, a few pages honestly, most of the chapters were boring af, but this chapter was hot af, hopefully she gets stolen from the little moron, if it turns out to be from 5d chess nonsense and she has some master plan, that would suck.
Grim ReeFer
2024-06-07 23:55:23 +0000 UTCMost of the comments here are really absurd. SHE'S CHEATED ON HER BOYFRIEND FOR THREE MONTHS STRAIGHT, SHE IS NOT THE GOOD GUY. SHE IS THE BAD GUY.
George Costanza
2024-06-05 22:29:22 +0000 UTCMostly mean act as this is all something she planned but yeah you're probably right
Konata Aoi
2024-06-05 00:38:26 +0000 UTCHow it could be an act? I think you my friends just inhaled a huge dose of copium. Can't wait for the next chapter either.
Waifu Sommelier
2024-06-05 00:34:34 +0000 UTCI'm with you on the copium train because that's exactly how I see it too. Even in the early chapters when she was texting the dude at the end she had acted at if they had fucked to get Yuichi to have a reaction so it could all be an act
Konata Aoi
2024-06-04 23:04:28 +0000 UTCReally interested in the next chapter regardless. It's a good story I feel because you have so many people looking at it different ways
Konata Aoi
2024-06-04 23:02:51 +0000 UTCNot sure if it's me coping but hinako has enlisted someone before to help with her cucking/teasing of yuichi (when she had her sister help her with the fake messages), so theoretically this could be an extreme 5head play by hinako to lead yuichi to the deepest depths of despair before revealing that this too was all a trick and she knew about the hidden cameras/him revealing it to yuichi. We'll see in a month I suppose, unless the author has the next chapter just yuichi watching the latest thing genki sent + his reaction, maybe there's more of a wait to see more hinako. But the large page length leaves me hopeful
Tyler
2024-06-04 22:17:27 +0000 UTCFeels kinda rushed to me. Should’ve done couple chapters more with ball sucking, dick licking and anal. But is good anyways. It feels like author is just tired and wanted to end the story asap and go on hiatus for couple months🤷
Tulopapiculo
2024-06-04 20:28:46 +0000 UTCThis explains why she hasn't wanted sex with Yuichi or tried to initiate sex with him, but why lie and cheat behind his back. I kind of feel sorry for Yuichi but all this is his fault for not putting a stop to any of this.
Curtis Evans
2024-06-04 16:58:58 +0000 UTCHe wasn't for sure. That's why Hinako acted based on what she learned and assumptions. Yuichi himself says that both were out of sync. It is a shame cuz it coulda go a different way if Yuichi was more assertive (or had more selfsteem - to stop hinako and telling her hey gurl you're mine, but sadly his perverted ntr antics prevent this as well) or if Hinako voiced out her true feelings earlier.
Bertolotto
2024-06-04 06:56:11 +0000 UTCI don't blame Hinako as much as before but I don't buy that Yuichi was supposed to just know she didn't want to do any of that when she was acting the way she was the whole time before sending her off
Konata Aoi
2024-06-04 04:56:12 +0000 UTCGood job. Reading it with your translation just confirms to me than Hinako wasn't the girl to put all the blame on (unless the author comes with some shit that makes her pov just a tease and she wanted it from the begining). Countdown for the final chapters are hard man.
Bertolotto
2024-06-04 04:24:06 +0000 UTCOk, prior to the translations, I checked out because I thought the series was over.... now that I've read the translations, I'm reinvested in the story and still hopeful (i swear i'm not in denial). This author is the goat at playing with my feelings. Next month can't come soon enough 😭😭😭😭
Timmy
2024-06-04 02:19:59 +0000 UTCGreat work!
Sonal
2024-06-04 01:08:10 +0000 UTCThanks as always
Konata Aoi
2024-06-04 00:58:18 +0000 UTCwow amazing work as always 🙏🏾
backw00d
2024-06-04 00:57:29 +0000 UTC
