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MUNCHausen by Proxy Part IV/Epilogue (FINALE!!)

Here it is, folks!!!! The thrilling conclusion to Ashley's story!!! 

You'll notice there are three download links below. Part 4 ran long, and there is also an epilogue that wraps up all the loose ends. If you download MUNCH4COMPLETE, you'll get part IV and the epilogue in one convenient document. If you'd prefer to read them individually, you can download MUNCH4 for just part IV or MUNCHEPILOGUE for just the epilogue. 

I tried to have a more balanced story to smut ratio in this one. I hope you guys dig it!!!! 

Comments

Haha no problem man! I'm just glad you liked it! Thanks for the kind words.

Jack Torrance

Sorry it took so long for me to get to this but I just gotta say this story was incredible I never thought I would become invested so much in this or that I'd be so happy to see anyone in your stories lose weight but this was fantastic keep up the good work

Zack

Thank you! By the end of this story Suzy is approaching middle age. So while she certainly hasn't lost weight or completely disavowed her hedonistic tendencies, she has become something of a "cool aunt" figure in Ashley's life.

Jack Torrance

SPOILERS *Me punches out "more sensible me"* I can't believe my optimism paid off for once. And it even ended happier than I would have expected! I didn't think you could fear Shirley more, but having her swing between wanting Ashley to live or die did it. And Suzy being right beside Ashley at the end leads me to believe Suzy has abandoned (or greatly reduced) her hedonistic personal life, which feels kinda wild after everything we've read til now (but in a good way).

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