This is a reference Chapter in case you guys forgot some of the bonuses that Daniel has received. I didn't list the bonuses out. Instead, I gave concise bits of text explaining the important stuff.This is kind of like a TLDR for a list, and is a broad overview, not at all super detail oriented.
I also give insight into each of the bonuses if you're interested in my analysis. This will hop...
2017-08-16 07:36:34 +0000 UTC View PostHope you peeps enjoy the chapter, and I really appreciate the support. Helps keep me going strong.
I dashed towards Galt once more. With his stamina and mana drained, he took punishing blow after punishing blow. I quit dodging and planted my feet so that I could crush my fists through his skin. After a minute of beating him to death, he finally fell while drowning from the blood leaking...
2017-08-14 21:38:47 +0000 UTC View PostThey stood still, not making a move. I pulled my helmet off my face. I grinned, "Come on guys. Calm down. I saved your asses again after all."
I put my hands on my hip before a dagger appeared right in front of my eye. It was fast, fast as Althea. I couldn't dodge, but I shut my eye. The glass dagger didn't even sink an inch deep before it snapped.
I jerked my hand outwards, grippin...
2017-08-11 23:19:30 +0000 UTC View PostI glanced around, the sudden closeness made everything awkward. The car bent deeper into the very limits of its suspension, but at least the tires didn't pop. Kessiah glanced out the window,
"So here's the thing..." She turned back to me, "I think there's something wrong with Torix."
I raised an eyebrow, pulling my helmet off my face, "What do you think? He has seemed a bit, I don't...
2017-08-09 22:31:51 +0000 UTC View PostI spent a little more time reorganizing the stat tables so that you guys could see them more easily. I hope it helped, and I hope you guys enjoy.
The first step to killing him would be getting a few things out of the way. First off, I needed very little mana before my next evolution of my armor. Second off, I needed more levels for the new leveling perks I had. That meant one thing.
... 2017-08-08 00:52:30 +0000 UTC View PostWith a dash, the three of us didn't waste anytime getting towards the quarantined zone. Kessiah couldn't really take a step. Her sheer weight forced her to stomp into the ground, tearing roots and stones apart.
Althea leapt through trees, using her ever changing limbs as grappling hooks. She swung as fast as we ran, laughing at the sudden surge of strength. I used a little bit of augmenta...
2017-08-05 21:33:54 +0000 UTC View PostWe ended up getting our room and everything handled for us by the steel legion. After seeing how whipped into shape they were, it more like the legion of lackeys. I guess Torix scared the living this out of them though. That and having two people over a thousand levels above your commanding officer tends to make that happen.
It was strange seeing how they operated compared with what I ima...
2017-08-04 21:08:31 +0000 UTC View PostI glanced at Torix who met my eye. Torix shrugged, so I turned back towards the overseer,
"Uh, it's good to meet you too, overseer."
The overseer turned towards Kessiah, "You have a remnant among your ranks as well? You have quite the collection of tools at your disposal then Torix. Breaking the areas down shouldn't be a problem."
Althea unformed her rifle as she pursed her li...
2017-08-03 04:44:49 +0000 UTC View PostOnce again, I'm sorry about not being able to transfer over the tables. I reformatted the info so that it's easier to read, and I hope you guys enjoy the chapter.
From the pile a body emerged and formed in front of us. Scales and bones formed into plates that ran across the front of the four legged creature. The thing had a reptiles eyes, slitted but intelligent. The hulking torso of ...
2017-07-31 20:04:58 +0000 UTC View PostI nodded my head, slow and somber before standing and walking out of the room. For some odd reason, listening to strange voices that only I could hear sounded like a bad idea. I walked up and out of my room before pacing back into the main one. I leaned against the table before saying,
"Yo Torix, I just heard a voice in my head. Figured you could help me figure out what the fuck it was."<...
2017-07-27 18:10:15 +0000 UTC View PostHe banged the side of the container again, this time with his neck breaking. A vein crawled out of his cheek before sinking under his eyelid. I let out a sharp groan as Michael placed his hands onto the edges of the glass.
Like suction cups, they stuck onto the glass before he banged his head against the tube. With another loud, sickening thud, his head banged against it. The skin on his ...
2017-07-24 19:38:38 +0000 UTC View PostThis is an alternate history of chapter 34. I have a lot of fun with these, so expect some cheesy lines here or there. None of this is cannon, so keep that in mind. Hope y...
2017-07-17 18:48:04 +0000 UTC View PostI froze in place, my heart stopping. His voice compelled me to stand, but my mind roared at me to stay still. I stayed seated, resisting the temptation of his voice. As time passed, the iron grip of my mind iron loosened. Sweat poured down my temples and forehead. Every part of my body screamed out, commanding me to stand and listen to him. It was like someone had put a gun to my forehead and t...
2017-07-17 05:12:05 +0000 UTC View PostI am sorry, but the blue boxes don't translate too well. Sorry about that.
I stood up and walked around the block, discovering horrors around every corner. Bits of teeth, claws, blades, and puncture marks were spread across the bodies. I couldn't even imagine what could've done this. It was probably something like what Althea did that day when we first met.
At this point, I calmed...
2017-07-12 14:01:13 +0000 UTC View PostThis chapter is written through Baldag-Ruhl's POV. Enjoy.
Day 15
This is the first of my logs. May no one find them after my passing. I began counting the days after the little lamb arrived. It has been fifteen of them. That is nothing, however.
I've been here, in this prison, for an eternity. Longer than I can fully remember, ev...
2017-07-11 08:03:31 +0000 UTC View PostAlthea frowned before sending a message,
Althea Tolstoy(3:23 pm 3/4/00) - They'll hear you digging.
Harbinger of Cataclysm(3:24 pm 3/4/00) - Not if we get a little distance and dig a little deep.
She shrugged before we went further back until we were out of earshot of them. with a few quick swipes, my shovel hands clawed through the dirt in la...
2017-07-11 01:47:52 +0000 UTC View PostWith a quick snap, I tore off a piece of my armor from my left arm. As it regenerated, I carved a portion of the runes into my right forearm using the sharpened scrap. The metals grinded against each other as I strained to slice through my armor. After thirty minutes of this carving, the line of symbols laid out on my arm. I can't lie, it looked super badass.
With a very slight tug, I pul...
2017-07-09 00:12:04 +0000 UTC View PostLet me know what you guys think of the new chapter. Completely open to change and all that.
We walked out into the clearing of the quarry before Althea said, "I wanted to thank you for capturing me that day."
I frowned as I said, "What? Why?"
"Because life wasn't the best were I was. I hated it. Life isn't exactly amazing here either but I...I can deal with it."
This is an alternate history of chapter 28. I have a lot of fun with these, so expect some cheesy lines here or there. Hope you guys enjoy.
Michael pulled a pistol out of the side of his jeans before unloading the clips straight at me. Using my precognition, I raised my arms and diverted the bullets off me. They slid past my gauntlets, digging into dirt. With an expert's precision, Mich...
2017-06-29 08:40:22 +0000 UTC View PostI will have all this patreon stuff sorted out over the next few weeks. Thank you guys a lot for supporting me before I even mentioned it in a chapter.
I didn't realize you guys actually looked at this page lol.
2017-06-28 21:14:25 +0000 UTC View Post
It's still pretty meh and looks like a game of risk, but it gives some idea of what the world looks like at least. I'll add in a few details about the world as well, starting with the countries.
A map of Alta, along with a few details about its various places.
Bastion - Empire founded on the principles of justice and holyiness. Over time, the empire turned in...
2017-02-18 17:05:03 +0000 UTC View Post
It's a kinda meh map, but I cooked it up over two hours. I figured it would help give an idea of where Jack is and where he's been. It's my first time using the software, so I may edit it in the future as well.
2017-02-18 00:20:41 +0000 UTC View PostI'm posting regularly on Royalroad again, and I'm sorry for the long absence.
Here's a link to Jehovah's Harmony if you forgot it, and I'd reccommend rereading through the first few chapters again since I changed the formmatting some and implemented a few ideas I had.
Thanks for helping me all this time. I'm ...
2017-01-19 21:25:40 +0000 UTC View PostOn page 205 at the moment. I'm really focusing on world building and crafting a few characters that explain the lore of the world. I hope it's working out, but it's something new by comparison with what I've done before. I'm also trying to inject more tension in my story lines. Jack's fought quite a few gut wrenching battles, but he's not someone who can be done in with pain at this point.
<... 2016-10-02 19:06:08 +0000 UTC View PostAlready up to 123 pages on my Google docs. A thunderous pace, imo. That being said, I'm trying to incorporate plot lines that expose the differences between Deluge and Jack. I want their narrative voices to be more easily distinguished. Hopefully, I'm hitting home runs, but only time will tell.
Other than that, college started, but fear not! I still have 3 days each week for writing. This...
2016-09-03 05:30:16 +0000 UTC View PostJehovah's harmony has already been planned out, and now I've already written 90 pages of it. My plan's different from the last book I wrote, however.I intend on releasing larger chunks of the book at a time, though less frequently then before.
While MDM was a work I put every bit of my heart into, it still fumbles at many parts. Some scenarios are ridiculous and unrelatable. The writing's...
2016-08-25 08:32:30 +0000 UTC View PostHmmm, where to start. I suppose an explanation may give you a breadth of understanding youve yet to attain despite the sharpness with which youve listened. My name is Jack Donovan, and Ive been traveling this world in search of a few pieces left over by Gaia. Our world worships her, yet I know of her darker origins. I know of the remnants she left behind.
They corrupt the creatures ...
2016-08-14 21:55:54 +0000 UTC View Post1 Sinister
As I paced towards the king of Bastion, a sea of blood surrounded me. My own steps caused ripples in the red pools, and in the eyes of the once noble ruler, a madness born of fear refused the sight in front of him.
Dozens of corpses decayed on the ground and across the walls. My clothes remained clean at the center of this massacre, even though I was the titan who ripped ...
2016-08-14 08:16:44 +0000 UTC View PostWe walked all day, and I mean from the moment we left until the sun set. By the time we finally quit moving, I couldnt even feel my legs anymore from sitting on Aethers shoulders. Deluge never spoke a single word the entire time we walked besides a curt answer to some questions, but at least Sophia and Aether offered some civil discussion.
...
For the first time in my life, I give in. All strength leaves me, and my body falls sideways causing the scythe to swing past my face without even grazing me. The blade slams into the rock beneath me and snaps on the stone, launching the blade into the shin of the man. He howls in agony before his legs buckle.