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"Melanie's Meal": An Exclusive Cut Sequel to "One of Those Fat Making Notebooks"

It's late. I was bored. I've been blown away by the response I've gotten to the extended cut of "One of Those Fat Making Notebooks". On Deviant Art it currently has over 205,000 views and 1,200 favorites which is just mind blowing. Since I posted it on DA less than a week ago, I've gained several hundred watchers and now have over 1,100, and I'm knocking on the door of 100 paying patrons here h...

Vote for the Next Edition of Exclusive Cuts! (Volume 8)

It's that time again! Time to start thinking about the next round of Exclusive Cuts, the "Fat Trimmings" stories that I write exclusively for this patreon and chosen by you!

With "Trading Influence's" extended cut finish and "Fit Friend, Fat Friend" in the works, I thought now was a good time to get things going on Volume 8 which will end up dropping next month (hopefully early).

Fo...

"Trading Influence": Exclusive Extended Cut

EDIT: As I'm getting ready to post the original to Deviant Art, I went and added more than 600 words to this version bringing this to over 7,600 words. The new additions include an extension of the first scene with Breanne as well as the taco and burger eating scenes.

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As promised here is the exclusive extended cut of "Trading Influence" which was first featured in "Fat Trimmings...

Call for Story Suggestions and a Weekly Update

Hello,

Since people have expressed interest, I figured I would go ahead and formally open up a post for new story suggestions for "Fat Trimmings" Volume 27. There are still some older suggestions that I'm likely to use, but I always look forward to new suggestions, and I've recently seen a bump in patrons, and want to give those new patrons the chance to suggest ideas along with everyone ...

Nightmare Pigs Epilogue - DRAFT

This epilogue is turning out way longer than I thought it would, and, at over 2,500 words I thought this would be a nice place to stop for now and share what I've done. When I finish the second half of this piece, I'll post both together instead of posting them as part one and part two and being confusing since ultimately I want to publish the whole thing as one big epilogue.

Anyway... 2024-06-11 21:30:01 +0000 UTC View Post

Trading Influence Teaser

The first part of what is turning out to be an extra lengthy epilogue of Nightmare Pigs will be out tonight. In the meantime, to show you all that I really am working on the exclusive extended cut of Trading Influence, here's a teaser of some of what I've gotten done so far.

Enjoy!

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One day while eating brunch with her friend Breanne...

"Fat Trimmings" Volume 26

So I said I wasn't going to do this. Then I went away for the weekend, got back, looked at my numbers, said "Oh this won't do. I need content," and then banged this out really quickly, so here we are.

2 short stories. 2,000 words.

Enjoy!

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“What I Wanted”

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They asked me what I wanted, s...

Scenes from a Casual Dining Restaurant: Chapter 2

This is the continuation of Scenes from a Casual Dining Restaurant, a story about the staff and customers of Roly Oly's over the course of five different Valentine's Days. This chapter comprises parts 3 and 4 which covers the second and third Valentine's Days.

Scenes from a Casual Dining Restaurant is a commission piece which I am still continuing. When I conceived this chapter, I always...

Scenes From a Casual Dining Restaurant: Chapter 1

"Scenes From a Casual Dining Restaurant" tells the story of the staff and customers of Roly Oly's Restaurant over the course of five Valentine's Days. For those who are new to the story, this chapter comprises what was original published here as Part 1 and Part 2.

This full chapter takes place over the first Valentine's Day out of five that will be featured.

Chapter 2 will be publis...

"Fat Trimmings" Volume 25

This is a little later than planned, but I really wanted to make this five stories. This came out to over 6,000 words and features new stuff, and a lot of sequels and connections that I hope will be an extra reward to patrons familiar with my work. I received a lot of great suggestions from patrons for story ideas, some of which I used here and some of which I'll definitely be saving and using ...

"Scenes from a Casual Dining Restaurant" Part 4

So sometimes I planned to do one thing and then I detour to something else for a quit bit and end up falling down a creative rabbit hole. That's what happened here. I started to write the epilogue to "Nightmare Pigs", wanted to just do some dialogue for this as a warmup of sorts, and then this just kinda took over. And the end result? Over 4,000 words, the largest part yet.

I actu...

TEASER: Scenes From a Casual Dining Restaurant

I was starting to find the epilogue to Nightmare Pigs tougher to crack than imagined, so I switched over to another commission project that is both overdue and well longer than originally planned. Here's part of the next part of "Scenes From a Casual Dining Restaurant".

Since I was doing this purely to get stuff down on the page, this is literally just dialogue with no description or eve...

Call For Story Ideas: What should I write for "Fat Trimmings" Volume 25?

"Fat Trimmings" is up to its 25th volume which should theoretically drop next Tuesday, and I want to make it another XL edition. In order to do that, I will need story ideas.

Honestly, coming up with "Fat Trimmings" story ideas can be really hard because I've already done so many, and I try to keep a weekly schedule with them as best I can while balancing other larger projects. That's why...

"Fat Trimmings" Volume 24

It's still technically Tuesday, so enjoy this volume of "Fat Trimmings" that is still technically on time. Two of these three pieces are sequels to previous stories. The Adipose Zone is based on the one (albeit absolutely excellent) suggestion I got this time around.

Enjoy!

“The Adipose Zone: Kim/Kimberly”

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What's Coming this Week

Hello All,

Here's what's coming to my patreon this week:

I'll be posting "Fat Trimmings" Volume 24 tomorrow. I'm still soliciting story suggestions: so feel free to suggest more stories in the comments.

I will also be posting the epilogue to "Nightmare Pigs".

"Trading Influence" narrowly won the poll for which extended cut will get released first. I will be working on ...

"One of Those Fat Making Notebooks": Extended Cut

While we wait to settle the neck and neck race between which exclusive cut gets an extended cut first, here's an extended cut I made of "One of Those Fat Making Notebooks" which previously featured in "Fat Trimmings" Volume 20. This extended cut has well over 2,000 extra words with several extra transformations and a big eating scene at the end. It tops out at almost 5,500 words.

Just li...

"Bad Influence": Chapter 2

I really thought this one would be done later in the week. And then I caught fire and wrote the whole thing in one day. This includes the single longest and most detailed (and I personally think it might be my best) pure transformation scene. The transformation sequence in this is over 2,000 words with over 300 words just dedicated to her breasts alone, so I hope you enjoy that.

Additiona...

Vote For the Extended Cut I Work on First

Hey!

It's time! The winner of our poll, another very- very- active poll, is "Fit Friend, Fat Friend". It was fairly close, and I think all of the stories might have gotten at least one vote. But "Fit Friend, Fat Friend" is the winner. (As I thought it might be.)

That means it will be joining "Trading Influence" as an Exclusive Cut story that gets released into the wild, and in excha...

Call For Story Suggestions and a Teaser

Hey everybody,

As I mentioned yesterday, I'm looking for story suggestions for next week's Fat Trimming's Volume 24. Since I only did two stories this week when I usually do three, I want to do four stories in volume 24. One of those stories will be the continuation of "Betsy and the Big Man". That leaves room for three stories, more if I catch both ideas and time.

Feel free to pit...

"Fat Trimmings" Volume 23

Sorry for a bit of a programming change. I got hit with one of those mid-week "Oh suddenly everything is a work crisis thing" and did not get to write as much as planned. But I did get two stories for "Fat Trimmings" done today, and I thought about just posting them tomorrow, but, since I already missed "Fat Trimmings" for last week, I figured why wait?

I thought I would post the stories ...

Big Fat Teasers on Deviant Art

Hello!

I have recently posted Big Fat Teasers 3 on Deviant Art. What that is is basically teasers for the stories on this patreon. Yup. It's a big ol' ad. And if people here who have Deviant Art accounts could go ahead and view it, favorite it, and comment on it, that will push it up DA's algorithim and help me get more views which will translate to more patrons which will translate to me...

Vote for Which Role Reversal Story is Getting an Extended Cut?

It's time! With volume 7 of "Exclusive Cuts" finally all published in one place, you get to vote on which of the stories will be receiving an extended cut.

(Please read carefully before voting.)

Here is how this will work:

Whichever story you vote for will be released in its original form on Deviant Art after I have released an extended cut here. The purpose of this is to act ...

"Fat Trimmings: Exclusive Cuts" Volume 7: Role Reversal

Here is the complete collection, volume 7 all in one conveniently downloadable PDF. In total this is nine stories and totals over 18,000 words. That's my largest volume of Exclusive Cuts by far. I'm pretty proud of this collection and hope that you enjoy them all.

This theme was voted on and these stories were suggested by patrons with the exception of "Bathing Suit Swap at Katrina's Clos...

"Buffet Buddies": An Exclusive Cut

Here's a little late night snack, and by late night snack I mean a story that is a little over 2,000 words long. Honestly, this was a story suggestion that excited me for a number of reasons: I found the conceit to be absolutely bonkers and needed to give it a try. I also loved the idea of having at least one piece in the collection with the classic fat guy gets thin and thin girl gets fat sinc...

Update for the week 5/13

Hey everyone! As you have hopefully seen, "Fit Friend, Fat Friend" has dropped. I am hoping to finish "Buffet Buddies" tonight or tomorrow morning. That will complete Volume 7 of Exclusive Cuts, so you can expect that all compiled and released as a set hopefully by Wednesday if not tomorrow.

If I finish "Buffet Buddies" tomorrow, there is a very good chance that "Fat Trimmings" Volume 23...

"Fit Friend, Fat Friend": An Exclusive Cut

I'm really happy with how this one turned out. If I may put my finger on the proverbial scale for later on, I think outside of "Trading Influence" this one has the best potential for an extended cut.

Enjoy!

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Layla was the fat friend of her group. She knew that. She had grown up just like that. Many people had gotten used t...

"Stepped Over Step-Sister": An Exclusive Cut

Two more of these to go after this. "Fit Friend, Fat Friend" and "Buffet Buddies". It's been a lot of fun writing role reversal stories, but I have to be honest, this has been a beast of a collection.

Enjoy!

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Georgine hated her step-sister. It wasn’t just that Delaney was everyone’s favorite, or that she was as vain as she w...

"Trading Influence": An Exclusive Cut

Soooo... I'm really happy with this one and already know it's getting an extended cut. I already know where the extra scenes and details are going. This is the longest of volume 7 so far coming in at over 3,000 words.

Enjoy!

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The challenge sounded simple enough. Over six months, influencers who were as opposi...

"Fat Trimmings" Volume 22 - Sequels Galore

Here are four sequels in honor of volume 22. There are two from me, and two based on suggestions from patrons.

Enjoy!

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“Another Bout with the Munchies”

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“The Munchies like to make people fat.

If you know us, then you know that.<...

"Bathing Suit Swap at Katrina's Closet"

What's this? An unannounced Exclusive Cuts title? A third post in one day? Yes to both!

"Fit Friend, Fat Friend" was proving tougher to crack, and I wanted something to write quickly and to get my brain moving. Plus, even though I recently did a role reversal in Katrina's Closet, I knew this one would prove easy and... ya know bikinis, so I went to the well again.

(Oh, and this wil...