Hey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 93 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1145
Auris
The world stood still.
And all eyes were on me.
In front of me...
2024-08-03 22:48:33 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s only been a few edits this time around! Most of which were done in order to fix grammatical issues or flow issues here and there as usual! I’ve also added a few more lines to the wall portion of the chapter to better clarify the nature of the wall and its mechanics, at least as Emma and the EVI have hypothesized it so far! :D That’s about it this time around!...
2024-08-03 22:43:27 +0000 UTC View PostHello Commissioned Pioneers!
I hope everyone’s month is going awesome so far! :D Well, it’s that time yet again! And I’d like to take this opportunity once more to sit down for another talk with all of you guys! Last month was certainly a blast to write up as we entered and finished what was effectively one of the more exciting parts of the school week! I’ve been planni...
2024-08-02 21:55:52 +0000 UTC View PostHello Commissioned Pioneers! :D As promised as always, in accordance with the results of last month's poll, I present to you the Bonus Story of the Month! There were a total of four choices once again, with a majority voting for Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School Side Story 18.
We finally head back to Earth, and more specifically, an...
2024-08-02 21:30:54 +0000 UTC View Post95 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. UNAFS Perseverance. Bridge.
Vir
Not a fraction of a second after my visual sensors laid eyes on that felinor, was I able to determine the likeness and probability of its relations to Eslan.
Following that, in anticipation of Eslan’s reactions,...
2024-07-31 00:02:21 +0000 UTC View PostThe Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1100
Auris
Dread is the taint which masks the otherwise brilliant soul, a self-fulfilling prophecy which only fools fall prey to.
Hope is the fruit which nurtures the uncertain mind, a sweet and...
2024-07-28 17:05:02 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 92 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1100
Auris
Dread is the taint which masks the otherwise brilliant soul, a self-fulfilling prophecy which on...
2024-07-28 00:35:53 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s only been a few revisions this time around! Most of the revisions were done to correct a few grammar issues here and there, as well as to improve the flow of certain bits of the story! The most prominent edits were done in order to better clarify the nature of the wall through EVI’s analysis, which I intended to be a typical looking wall, just with its binding ...
2024-07-28 00:28:58 +0000 UTC View Post95 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Administration Wing. Hidden Facility.
Vir
“Come on now, friend. What’s with the sudden shift in directives?” I shot back, keeping at least one camera permanently trained on the timer, and another one on the atrium’s frosted glass.
2024-07-23 17:57:21 +0000 UTC
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“Error: Unrecognized Command. Please specify—”
“Disable FROM-1 presets, EVI.” I interjected, my eyes narrowing towards the track in front of me, and the unrendered obstacles that stood in the way between here… and well… here.
“Acknowledged. Alert! FROM-1 [FREE RANGE OF MOTION PRESET 1] disabled!”
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2024-07-21 17:05:09 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 91 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
“Error: Unrecognized Command. Please specify—”
“Disable FROM-1 presets, EVI.” I interjected, my eyes narrowing towards the track in front of me, and the unrendered obstacles that stood in the way between here… and well… here. ...
2024-07-20 21:50:40 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s only been a few minor revisions in this one! Most of it was to fix up a few grammatical and flow issues, as well as a few points where I rephrased a few things in order to have sentences and such sound better! :D I also added a few more details to the sports scenes by adding a bit of description and onomatopeias to help heighten the feeling of the competition! Th...
2024-07-20 21:44:00 +0000 UTC View Post95 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Administration Wing. Hidden Facility.
Vir
The unknown contact popped into active scanner range with the subtlety of a giga-hauler careening through green-flagged space.
Which was to say, it appeared quite literally out of nowhere...
2024-07-17 19:08:32 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor’s Note: Hey everyone! There’s been revisions done to Chapter 89 that I’d highly suggest you guys check out first before reading this week’s Chapter so please do head over there first if you haven’t already! :D Thank you and I do hope you guys enjoy this week’s chapter! :D
I stood there, staring blankly at a literal Arthurian challenge.
...
2024-07-14 17:05:03 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor’s Note: Hey everyone! So first of all, if you haven’t already, I’d highly suggest everyone read the final revision for Chapter 89! This is because after a lot of careful consideration and after a lot of thinking, I’ve decided to reorganize the non-magical trials for PE! I initially planned for the non-magical trials to be entirely self-contained in a single chapter, withi...
2024-07-13 21:30:53 +0000 UTC View PostAUTHOR’S NOTE: Hey everyone! So after a lot of thinking and deliberations, I’ve decided that some big revisions need to be made for this chapter! I first planned this chapter to include all aspects of the non-magical activities for Emma’s PE challenges. However upon review, it’s quickly become clear that by adding the strength portion of the challenges, the endurance portion did...
2024-07-13 21:14:32 +0000 UTC View Post95 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Administration Wing. Bunker HQ.
Lysara
There was little question as to what any of this was.
Or more specifically, to the identity of the voice behind the screen.
Yet it seemed as if Evina of all people still clu...
2024-07-09 22:20:59 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! So there were a few revisions that I believe should be addressed right off the bat this time around! I’ve made most edits to the strength challenges of today’s chapter, seeing as there were a few inconsistencies and details that either weren’t implemented correctly, or had managed to slip through in the original post! The most notable of which being the bench pressin...
2024-07-07 21:30:19 +0000 UTC View PostMy hawkish gaze never once left Auris Ping, as I made it clear that he would be the target of my full and undivided attention, even as Chiska shifted her attention towards the rest of class.
“Alright then! Let’s get everyone on the same page! First off, the basic rules!” Professor Chiska beamed out brightly. However, as the class began fixating on her ...
2024-07-07 17:05:03 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 89 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
My hawkish gaze never once left Auris Ping, as I made it clear that he would be the target of my full and undivided attention, even as Chiska shifted her attention towards the rest of class.
“Alright then! Let’s get everyone on the same p...
2024-07-07 00:21:26 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s only been a few revisions done in this chapter! Most of it was to do with the grammar and flow of certain parts of the chapter! There’s also been a bit of rephrasing done with Chiska’s brief lecture about how her class works because I feel like it just wasn’t clear enough last time and it didn’t really set the right mood I wanted it to, so I revised it to...
2024-07-06 22:59:46 +0000 UTC View PostHello Commissioned Pioneers!
I hope everyone is having a good month so far! First off, I just wanted to quickly address the latest bonus story! Or more specifically, the delay in posting! As many of you may already know through my previous posts, I’m a medical student, so there are times when my schedule tends to conflict with posting. However, despite this, I’ve tried my b...
2024-07-05 18:19:17 +0000 UTC View PostHello Commissioned Pioneers! :D As promised as always, in accordance with the results of last month's poll, I present to you the Bonus Story of the Month! There were a total of four choices once again, with a majority voting for Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School Side Story 17.
We head back to Aetheronrealm this time around! Or rather, Aetheron! As t...
2024-07-05 16:57:46 +0000 UTC View Post93 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Administration Wing. Bunker HQ.
Evina
“What do I mean by the word ‘creators’?” The voice parroted back. “The fine people who designed and constructed this entire facility, of course!” He answered, tip-toeing around an actual answer with an ...
2024-07-03 03:17:51 +0000 UTC View PostThe Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Local Time: 0800
Emma
The Grand Concourse of Learning was, for the first time this week, not our destination.
In fact, following breakfast, we’d made our way straight past its large expansive spaces, out and through seve...
2024-06-30 17:05:14 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 88 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Miracles. Local Time: 2000
Emma
The Grand Concourse of Learning was, for the first time this week, not our destination.
Hey everyone! There’s been quite a few revisions made in this chapter, mostly with regards to the addition of more flavor text, scene painting, allusions, as well as to the usual revisions made in order to improve on the flow and phrasing of certain sentences and paragraphs! The most notable addition to the chapter can be found in the section where the dean is threatening Emma with th...
2024-06-29 18:17:25 +0000 UTC View Post93 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Administration Wing. Bunker HQ.
Evina
The room was cold, lifeless, and just like every other space we’d explored thus far — it was completely empty.
That much was obvious given the readings relayed to us by the scanners, sensors, a...
2024-06-25 19:03:13 +0000 UTC View PostThe Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. Main Garden. Local Time: 1700
Emma
The gardens were peaceful, tranquil, almost enough to lull you into a sense of unearned calm if you fell for its carefully manicured ambiance.
However, just like everything else in the Academy, there was a rhyme and a reason...
2024-06-23 17:05:03 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 86 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. Main Garden. Local Time: 1700
Emma
The gardens were peaceful, tranquil, almost enough to lull you into a sense of unearned calm if you fell for its carefully manicu...
2024-06-22 21:06:01 +0000 UTC View Post