(This story is a prequel to The Merger - part 3).
Nadia was busy preparing for her evening show…that is to say, she was bossing other people around while she sat down and enjoyed a drink. It was a hard life, but someone had to do it.
While she was enjoying her drink and some reading material, she happened to notice a young woman walk into the theatre. The woman immediately s...
2019-04-08 04:12:14 +0000 UTC View PostDescription: Alan’s assistant, Kelli, hasn’t returned from her meeting with the hypnotist Nadia yet...
Key: MD, FD, MC, MF, MFF,
Alan casually walked into Costello’s, a fancy dinner theatre on New Chicago’s north side. Unfortunately he was there for business rather than pleasure, although he rarely had an issue mixing the two. Earlier in the day his assistant had been ...
2019-04-08 04:07:37 +0000 UTC View PostSo far, what has been your favorite hypnosis scene? (preferable listed with the story name and chapter). You can reply here or send me a private message. (Thinking of getting a commissioned picture done so want to know what you might like to see.)
2019-04-05 07:26:17 +0000 UTC View Post(This takes place just after Kelli ‘took care of’ Celene, and just before she went in to ‘take care of’ Hank)
Kelli walked into the main area of the club. It was large and spacious, with a floor plan that was mostly below street level, so if you entered on the ground floor you were actually on the top most level of the club. She scanned the club, but since it was the middle of the...
2019-03-28 05:42:25 +0000 UTC View PostDescription: A young woman shows up to seal a deal to purchase the Spirals Nightclub. By any means necessary.
Key: FD, F/F, M/F, MC
A faint, tiny tapping sound could be heard filling the Spirals Nightclub…Celene moved to the main entrance of the club, curious as to where the sound was coming from. When she arrived, she found a petite young woman who looked like she was ready...
2019-03-28 05:24:50 +0000 UTC View Post
Story: Allow yourself to just drift away with the smoke, and follow the flame now, Laura…”
SG: what does it say for me that i basically started picturing a flame and zoned out as soon as i started reading this paragraph? :oP
Me: The world may never know =cP
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Story: Her eyes were reflecting the glow of the candle. Two tiny little flame...
2019-03-18 06:18:59 +0000 UTC View PostWARNING SPOILERS AHEAD!
Also please note that the actual story may... and in this case I can guarantee does differ from this outline.
Midnight’s shop
Veo blushed as Midnight carefully lifted the completely drained patron over her shoulder. “So where did Xander ever end up?” the succubus asked her friend as she carried the sleeping patron into the back with the rest of her…guests.
“New Chicago.” Veo replied with a smile. “He even found a version of the Spirals Nightclub there, so he seems happy at the moment.” <...
2019-03-18 06:14:32 +0000 UTC View PostDescription: The angel Veo comes to visit her friend, the succubus Midnight, with an offer that she cannot refuse.
Key: MC, FD, M/F, F/F
“That’s it…you can do it.” Midnight cooed into the ear of a clearly hypnotized young man. He was sitting on a chair in the back office of Midnight’s shop, his girlfriend panting by his side while Midnight straddled him and bou...
2019-03-18 06:10:17 +0000 UTC View PostThis was an email that the editor, S.G. sent me about a dream she had… or was it something more than a dream…
(Editors Note: "no I remember this, I'm pretty sure it was just a dream :oP")
(Authors Note: "This was in fact... NOT a dream. She was hypnotized by me to live this out as a fantasy and wake up remembering it as a dream.")
“Does it mean I'm editing too...
2019-03-09 06:15:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Story: She sighed in relief and held the box close to her, as if she were hugging it, while glaring over at the book on Rayne’s bed. Almost as if she was expecting the book to move…or attack her.
SG: could have been an interesting twist :oP
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Story: The two ladies were talking, catching up on life, but at such a high speed that I couldn’t poss...
2019-03-09 06:09:19 +0000 UTC View PostRayne smiled and seductively slid a finger under Trisha’s chin. “Why don’t we help you out with that then…” she used the finger to pull her head slightly down to Rayne’s level and kissed her. The kiss was tender and soft, as she didn’t want to wake Trisha, and as Rayne pulled back she looked into the glazed eyes of the older girl and whispered. “Sleep.”
A soft sigh...
2019-03-09 06:07:07 +0000 UTC View PostDescription: Rayne sets out to hypnotize Carly, per Trisha’s instructions.
Key: MC, FD, FF,
“Hypnotize Carly.”
Rayne sat and stared at the words written on the note in front of her. She felt a swell of nervousness flush through her body as she eyed the dark haired sophomore out of the corner of her eye. She still wasn’t super comfortable with hypnotizing pe...
2019-03-09 05:58:16 +0000 UTC View Post[WARNING!] Spoilers may be ahead, the final story may vary from this outline.
Dorm room
Story: Jennifer watched closely but she couldn’t see if it was heads or tails, it was spinning too fast. It was… It was… tails!
SG: And as usual...that dropped me, too.
(SG while editing this: "Wait, didn't this just happen the other night?")
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Story: Her head bounced back as the weight of her body started to pull her forward, while her head lolled back ...
2019-03-09 05:39:53 +0000 UTC View PostBonus
Trisha smiled with glee as she bounced up from her chair and ran to her dresser. The other girls gave each other a look before turning back to see Trisha pull out a small spray bottle with a fan on it.
Trisha merely responded with a smile as the girls looked at one another in confusion. “Carly, you’ve seen this before? The spray bottle I use when it’s hot out...
2019-02-23 06:24:26 +0000 UTC View PostDescription: As the girls discuss Rayne’s issues with Klaire, Trisha demonstrates a unique induction on an unsuspecting Laura.
Key: MC, FD, FF, Sleep, Chloro
As the young ladies settled down to discuss Rayne’s education in hypnotism and her accomplishments as a hypnotist, Trisha seemed more and more impressed. “Well…” Trisha started with a smile, “It’s pretty clear to ...
2019-02-23 06:12:37 +0000 UTC View PostTrisha laughed. “Isn’t she cute!” she said, motioning for the girls to take a seat. “So Laura…how has our first pledge been doing? Has she been able to pick up the basics of being a hypnotist as well as being hypnotized?”
Rayne pushed past Laura before she could answer and looked at Trisha with a smile. “Why don’t I show you…” she said as she moved in front of Carly an...
2019-02-16 05:11:40 +0000 UTC View PostDescription: Rayne meets Trisha, the head of the hypnotic sorority that she is pledging. But why does she look so familiar?
Key: MC, FD,
“It was a dark, and stormy night…” Rayne read to herself. “Who writes this crap?” She was curled up on a chair in her dorm room, reading one of the vampire novels she had spied under Klaire’s bed. She had managed to find a copy of...
2019-02-16 05:05:18 +0000 UTC View PostHow do you guys feel about hypnotic triggers being used in stories?
2019-02-14 06:07:36 +0000 UTC View PostWhat is it that makes hypnosis in a story worth while for you?
2019-02-13 15:49:47 +0000 UTC View PostKelli left Alan’s office a few hours after their encounter with the executive had ended. As she walked out, she noticed the secretary was still sitting at her desk. She wasn’t working on anything, and her computer had gone to sleep a long time ago. She was simply sitting there…waiting. For Kelli.
Kelli looked her over with a smile. She was about 25, with long black hair and breasts ...
2019-02-08 16:10:35 +0000 UTC View PostDescription: Newly made vampire Kelli is merely a pawn in a struggle for power. But she’s a cute pawn.
Key: MC, MD, FD, M/F,
It was a normal Tuesday morning on the top floor of Card Enterprise’s headquarters. The usual ‘core’ executives were all in their sealed central offices and the rest of the outer rim executives and staff were busy moving about their morning...
2019-02-08 16:06:42 +0000 UTC View Post
There is a captioned version of this picture for Tiers 2 and 3
2019-02-08 15:55:55 +0000 UTC View Post
There is a captioned version of this picture for Tiers 2 and 3
2019-02-08 15:54:49 +0000 UTC View Post
Story: You know those big buildings full of books? Where you can do research? The old fashioned way? No? Really? They have public internet, just keeping reading you’ll figure it out.
SG (Editor, also Librarian): "Somewhere, the editor of the story banged her head against a wall in exasperation..." :oP
(Sg’s response while reviewing this “I still like t...
2019-02-01 06:13:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Story: Xander shot the man a sideways look “Your granddaughter is named Feisty Squirrel?”
“What? No! My granddaughter is named Emily. I was pointing out the feisty squirrel, in the tree!”
SG: ROFLMAO. Ok, I laughed way too hard at that, nicely done :oP
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Story: “Hey!” Xander shouted which caused the tail’s tip to shoot straight up and ...
2019-02-01 06:10:57 +0000 UTC View Post
Story (End of Part 1)
SG (Editor): Thoughts, in order: Yes I picked up on what you were doing. Yes my arm raised - albeit not that much? it wasn't straight up but it was about halfway there, but I think that's more just me. For some reason it's hard to imagine my arm being that light. Anyway, I like the idea and I'm curious to see where you go from there. I may have to try ed...
2019-02-01 06:09:17 +0000 UTC View Post
Story: “Hell yes! Hypnotize me!”
SG (Editor): Things I could never see myself saying in a situation like this
(SG’s response to reading this while reviewing these files: “Only in my head :oP “)
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Story: “Heather….” he began “I want you to just focus on my words now, I want you to simply let them, slide in...
2019-02-01 06:06:37 +0000 UTC View Post
Story: Isn’t it so nice to just let your body go, and let it… surrender… to the music. To feel the rhythm of the music moving through your body. Every drum beat, every cord, every part of the melody. Sliding into your body. It feels so good to dance. Feel the pulse of the other person, though your own skin. To feel their body moving with yours. It’s almost like you can simp...
2019-02-01 06:04:20 +0000 UTC View Post