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Chapter 88: Elevator, Angels, Demons, Artificiers and the obsidian skined girl.

"I can relay your message; you can tell it to me," Asher said as Elizabeth felt the presence of the other students move away from the reception area.

 

Why? They didn't have any faith in their Disciplinary chief?

 

"I could do that, yes," Elizabeth said, nodding, letting her mana course through her body. She tuned it to Lightning and let it manifest on her hair...

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Chapter 87: The Disciplinary Comite

The MPI, the place was...not calm; Elizabeth had thought it would be calm with all the third-year students going on their apprenticeships, the second year going to the internships and all. But instead what she found was a school bustling with activity with students going all over the place running, flying and some even teleporting (Or attempting to anyway).

 

"Ah sorry, miss!" ...

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Chapter 86: We taste with Gluttony and see with Pride?

Space distorted itself as the door into her armory was open, Elizabeth couldn't help but smile as the ripples in space showed up from there the handle of a sword started showing up.

 

It was a golden handle with a sickle-like sword on it, Elizabeth extended her hand and pulled it out. It was white ornated and to be honest, it wasn't something that Elizabeth would ever use in a ...

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Terrible time to post this tbh (Bloodline announcement)

Soooo..............................................................I have been bleeding interest in some stuff, namely my series.

How so? Well, while I do have great amount of plot lines to pursue...the world keeps getting more convoluted and the amount of things I need to explain to move forward keeps getting more annoying to deal with.

So I have taken the administrat...

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Chapter 85: Good old times.

"What are you speaking about right now Elizabeth Starbright?" Rossie's mana flared more and more, Elizabeth could see the mana flaring all over her body as it threatened to overflow.

 

Had Rossie also discarded the Mana Manipulation skill like Elizabeth?

 

"Identify," Elizabeth silently cast the skill and got the blue screen with the notification ...

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Chapter 84: What do you mean we skipped [The Monk]? We already did him!

The photo depicted a blue-haired little girl wearing tactical body armor; she was smiling while hanging by the arm of Elizabeth's Father on his [American Crusader] form.

 

Behind them stood both [The Beast Master] and [The Warlock].

 

Nowhere else in that picture was the current Jenna, and if Elizabeth was being honest, the little girl did have the same appeara...

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Chapter 83: [The Warlock] and [The Prophet], The Angel and The Demon

Okay, calm down Elizabeth...this can't be all bad. Granted dealing with both [The Beast Master] and [The Elementalist] would be difficult if not close to impossible.

 

But surely it wouldn't be that bad...right?

 

[The Traveler] sounded like would be mostly annoying and not that hard to deal with after all, granted he was a Saintsworths, those tended to cause m...

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Chapter 82: Well.......What am I supposed to do then?

"....explain....it.....properly.....who.....is.....Hero....and.....Villain...." Lily was mumbling once more, slowly but surely transmitting what she wanted to say.

 

Elizabeth was...unsure if she was happy for the free info, or annoyed because Jenna could have explained this before and hadn't.

 

"I'll explain it, but you must also share your side," Jenna answer...

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Chapter 27: WE EAT!

“And you saw that?” [Golem] asked from the side as Ale continued doing her sacred mission of shoving food into her mouth trying to dodge the arm of [Fan Girl] who was still hugging her.

 

The older girl was no longer trembling and instead was keeping a steady rythm, Ale predicted that she was more than likely done with whatever she had been doing before, and was merely wait...

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Chapter 81: So....who is a Hero and a Villain then?

What the hell is a dantian, and why Magical Girls don't use them?

 

"It's about time," Jenna suddenly said from the back.

 

Time? Time for what?

 

"Already? Well…I guess we did spend quite the amount of time…" Lily sighed, time for what? "Well, Good luck in your journey as a sorceress."

 

"Wait, what's a dantian? And where ...

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Chapter 80: I'm a sorceress....?

Elizabeth kept staring at the blob of mana that had been ripped into two, then at the mana thread that she had used to attempt and guide it. She didn't see any evidence of why her mana had behaved that way.

 

So focusing into her eyes and activating once more her Dragon Eyes Elizabeth paid close attention to the mana thread that she had attempted ...

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Chapter 79: So...2/10?

That was one revelation that Elizabeth was not ready to take in, the fact that she could probably do away with her skills and instead take others, others skills of things that she wasn't good at.

 

“So…your skillset…” Elizabeth said, turning to Lily, "It's made of skills with things you aren't good at?"

 

That… wasn't quite what Elizabeth expected if ...

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Chapter 78: What changed then?

That….was not what Elizabeth had expected to see.  "Are you sure she is a [Magical Girl]?" Elizabeth turned to Jenna and pointed at Lily. "Because I don't see anything that says that."

 

Lily ...

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Bad habbits do die hard huh....

So....the break thing....well have another one in january, why? Because December sucked ass...You'll get the note in one of the chapters soon enough about it. I left it there when I attempted to write, but...

PS: Removed the notes when I was editing and preparing for January's chapter schedule.

So yeah...

TL;DR

Having days off is important to recharge your ...

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Chapter 77: She is...a sorcerer?

"Welcome to the visitation building or are you here to visit a student or to see someone visiting you?"

 

The question still was weird for Elizabeth even when the woman said it again when the three girls didn't answer it the first time.

 

"Ah, sorry," Elizabeth said after a few seconds, "We are here to see our masters for the internship of our third year here."...

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Chapter 76: Towards the visitation building.

Leaving the principal office wasn't as problematic as getting into it, Elizabeth and company merely had to retrace their steps back, at first Elizabeth had thought that Agatha would guide them since, well... the older witch seemed to be somewhat more invested than expected, perhaps thanks to Mother's meddling but that was not what happened.

 

"Well, good luck on your way out. I...

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Chapter 75: The meeting is over!

After Mother and Papa disappeared, there was the feeling as if something was suddenly missing, and a sense of..melancholy came bearing down.

 

"Well…that is one way of getting to know your goddess…" Agatha said, trying to soften the mood.

 

"You already knew how she was," Elizabeth said with a sigh, "No way you didn't get an idea with Mother stuck into your...

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Chapter 74: FINALLY! THAT'S WHAT SHE DOES?!?!?!

Lucia De'Medicci, [The Prophet]. She was…something that Elizabeth knew nothing about since everyone and her Mother (Quite literally Elizabeth's Mother) talked about everything else.

 

Elizabeth knew very little about [The Prophet], she knew that the woman wanted Rossie for herself, and thanks to that Elizabeth would [ABSOLUTELY MURDER HER, STRIP HER SKIN, REMOVE H...

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Chapter 73: Meandery....it really was a thing here too huh.

"The Italians…" Mother started, leaving an annoying dramatic stop there. Just to annoy her, Elizabeth was sure of it.

 

"Why do you call them like that? There isn't any clan or city-state called anything like that." Agatha said from the side.

 

No! Don't give her a way in! This woman needs to explain what the deal with [The Prophet] was!

 

"T...

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Chapter 72: Goddamit Mother...why are you derailing this?!?!?

"And the last one, and the most important of the ones you need to be aware of," Agatha snapped her fingers, and all the images disappeared. “[The Prophet].”

 

The image shown was that of a woman dressed in a white robe with a hood covering her face. She had that aura of pureness that Elizabeth couldn't quite place, and for some reason, to Elizabeth, it seemed as if it didn'...

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Chapter 71: [The Warlock]...not chapter but exposition.

"[The Warlock] and [The Prophet]." Agatha said ignoring Rossie's idea about dealing with them.

 

Elizabeth was partial to Rossie's answer, so far she hadn't found anyone that was a problem after being killed or removed out of existence, not that she had done that much, but she was ready to support her girlfriend's life choices.

 

How could she not? Rossie was c...

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Chapter 70: Almost there!

"[The Elementalist]."

 

The image of the Izanami-style robed man was summoned by Agatha; at the side stood a suit-wearing man with the same face behind a desk in a very luxurious; Elizabeth found it…intriguing.

 

"He doesn't use Security Nodes?" Elizabeth asked as the image became clearer, there was no way someone couldn't link the two identities.

 ...

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Chapter 69: No funny business on this one

The Mother of Monsters, now renamed Mother of Shadows. Echidna, Eleanore Windsor.

 

The Prophet, the woman closest to [God].

 

And finally...The Warlock, the man closest to the [Devil].

 

Elizabeth hadn't found too much about them, she of course knew how Echidna looked since she had worked under her for some time... Elizabeth had some knowledge...

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Chapter 68: How complicated can it be?

What Agatha knew about the [Galaxidae], [The Nine Stars] and whoever Elizabeth wanted to fight, that was one tempting offer to give, especially given the circumstances.

 

Elizabeth had planned to fight them one at a time and extract the information in whatever form she could, but that would have been one messy fight, for sure. And getting the information...well, she had planned...

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Chapter 67: The new principal...should had seen this one coming.

The room was empty, also it wasn't as luxurious as Elizabeth thought, "Kinda cramped here isn't it?" Elizabeth said as she took in the room.

It didn't have much going, some diplomas hung on the walls, a couple trophies, a nice comfy-looking chair, a painting of what looked to be a gorgeous woman very well endowed with what seemed to be the perfect ratio in the hip to waist to chest.

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Chapter 66: Don't we miss being a bimbo? Elizabeth does.

The walk towards the main administration building was quite lackluster, to be honest, Elizabeth had expected someone to jump from the shadows and demand her to duel them for some random girl's hand or something.

 

Or some [I'm too dumb to be alive] guy wanting to steal her Rossie, that would have been fun…in another way. Instead they walked by some students who bowed to Agath...

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[Ignore Image]Not a chapter...Just a cheeky announcement

So....burnout...I don't think I am dealing with that, but some chapters I wrote this past month and a half felt...shorter, in average I am still above what I aimed when starting (If you follow me since Bloodline, then you know them chapters have been longer than at the begining).

I started with chapters around 1,5k to 2k.

When Rhapsody started I averaged 2,5k to 3k.

Some chapt...

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Chapter 65: Agatha....what did you do?

The MPI, it was…lackluster, after everything that Elizabeth had gone through, the place just didn't seem that impressive anymore. Not after Elizabeth had seen the full might of her Soulscape, the fact that the place was so much more than a city.

 

It put things in perspective, the fact that her soulscape was a planet and was growing made the school....lackluster in the best-c...

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Chapter 64: Landing at the school...against someone best interest.

"I am afraid that will not be necessary." The Officer at the Teleportation station said as Elizabeth's eyes flared in azure light. "This was approved by [The Nine Stars], it is secure as it gets. It will also repel all skills and magic attempting to breach it and the contents of what it has scanned."

 

The Officer of course looked convinced of this, not that it would stop Eliza...

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Chapter 63: Goodbye House.

The first list was of the Thunder Birds, Elizabeth could see at the very top the name of the weird bird that had been acting all cocky with her…And it was crossed out several times only to be written bellow, after some point it seemed as if whoever had taken this had surrendered and let the stupid thing have its name there.

 

Followed that one more names stood, most followed ...

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