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ONWARD_Page-119_Ch-5

Okay so this page had a complete makeover. The first panel's perspective was the only thing I changed about it, but the others gave the scene an all-new meaning.

The second panel did feature Zarhe, but instead of being upset, she just gazed back at Zewiac with despise in her eyes without uttering a word. And in the third panel, we saw Zewiac looking up at her with tear-filled eyes, crouching in ...

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ONWARD_Page-119_Ch-5 (Sketch)

This page was as good as completely changed. Since my traditional sketches turn out so terrible (because I take a photo of them with my phone instead of scanning them), I'll try to make them digital from now on!

Anyway, on this page, we see Rubigo and Umbra stopping Zarhe from attacking Zewiac, who turns his head away. (Complete with Meya lying there casually, being a rug.)In the second panel, w...

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ONWARD_Page-118_Ch-5

Okay so this page's dialogue took a drastic turn. Or rather, the opposite. At first, Zarhe was meant to say: "You're only alive right now... ...because mother wishes you to be." I found this was too drastic and too dark and unrealistic to be between siblings. I do know that some siblings do in fact despise one another, but it just wasn't right here. Because the thing is, Zarhe is extremely ...

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ONWARD_Page-118_Ch-5 (Sketch)

What was changed on this page was mainly the dialogue. The panels have remained the same.

Canon dialogue:Zarhe: Just because you're mother's favorite...Zarhe: ...doesn't mean you're mine. So I'd keep that mouth shut if I were you. 

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ONWARD_Page-117_Ch-5

I really need to buy a new computer... Again, this is submitted from my girlfriend's computer and while it works well and it's really kind of her, I want to be able to do it on my own. So yeah, that's the next thing I'm gonna save up for I guess. :') 

Anyhow, this is officially the page where Zarhe looses it. :') She's already so fed up with Zewiac and now he drops the bomb by refusi...

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UPDATE!

Okay so here's the thing... I've been sitting all evening trying to finish the comic page (aka the finishing touches in Photoshop on my laptop) but it completely refuses to work. It's super slow and as soon as I do anything, the program freezes... I'll try to work on it tomorrow but for now I have to give it a break (it's 2am right now here in Sweden). I am submitting this from my girlfriend's lap...

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ONWARD_Page-117_Ch-5 (Sketch)

This page was one I looked forward to doing a lot. Like, a LOT! The expressions here were indeed fun to do. 'v' This is basically the page where Zarhe finally snaps.This page hasn't been changed at all, seeing as it felt good from the beginning. Well, except for the last panel! I changed it from a zoom-out to a zoom-in, showing how Zarhe steps on Meya to get to Zewiac.

Canon dialogue:Zarh...

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The pages will come tomorrow!!

Yep, I was so busy with getting my contest entry for ARVEN92 done in time so I got less time to work on comic-pages... plus that I have had to stay in school and work for 11 hours every day to get an assignment done on time... I probably shouldn't have started such a big project but I did and I will never do it again. :'D

However, I am sorry and I promise that it'll be up by tmorrow! <333...

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ONWARD_Page-116_Ch-5

On this page, we see that Zarhe did a big thing out of nothing through attacking Meya. It wasn't that important to her after all. She lets her hatred and jealousy for Zewiac blind her. Her stubborn attitude will most likely bring her trouble in the future...And even though Zewiac is aware of his sister's hatred, he tries his hardest to stand up to her. Was this a mistake? 


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ONWARD_Page-116_Ch-5 (Sketch)

Okay. I know it's been long, TOO long as a matter of fact. :'( I've been so incredibly busy with moving and studying and doing chores... there just hasn't been any spare time for me to work on pages... BUT! Now I'm back and there will come a page every second week (on fridays)! So the next page will come on September the 16:th!

(And yes, I do not have a scanner here, so this is a photo. I hope i...

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ONWARD_Page-115_Ch-5

This page is yet another one who is changed a LOT. Well, the scene is pretty much the same as the previous sketch, but rather, the dialogue, emotions and interactions is changed. And again, we see Zewiac behaving less bravely and more... struggling, to keep himself standing. For example, he doesn’t even dare to look his siblings in their eyes. He does betray them in a way, which he knows, but...

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ONWARD_Page-115_Ch-5 (Sketch)

It’s been a while, hasn’t it? I must say, I really am sorry about the lack of pages these past weeks... I did try my hardest to produce as many as possible before I went away on vacation, but I didn’t manage to do any more than 2... I hope you enjoy them and that you have a wonderful summer regardless!! ^^ (Thank you truly much for your patience! :’) I don’t know when the next page wi...

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ONWARD_Page-114_Ch-5

Personally, I feel like these pages are really important. Even though Zarhe is one of my favorite characters, she needs to be opposed at times and being that by none other than the brother she despises so much is like a strong punch in the gut. And Zewiac did have to brace and prepare himself mentally for this. He didn’t really mean to jump out. Well, he did want to but hesitated and so, he fell...

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ONWARD_Page-114_Ch-5 (Sketch)

(This, too, is a photo... I am sorry but I didn’t get the opportunity to scan any pages at home... But the scanned pages will be here as soon as I get home!!)

About the page!

The first panel was changed a bunch. First off, Zewiac was meant to protect Meya by jumping between her and Zarhe, which is why he is positioned like that. I placed Meya between Zewiac and Zarhe, removed Lankie and ...

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A PAGE COMES TOMORROW!

Hello, it's been too long! I must say, I'm sorry about the absence of pages these past weeks. I wrote a journal about it on my deviantART-account (Sally-Ce), but I'll say it here too. 

I have 2 pages to submit this summer and they'll be here July the 1:st and July the 29:th! I will only charge for those and not the weeks there aren't any pages! Meaning, you'll get what you pledge for...

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ONWARD_Page-113_Ch-5

Oh boy this page is the one that changed them all, in a way. Zewiac was, and has been for quite a while, the mysterious, brave and strong character. He was initially going to protect Meya bravely, standing between her and Zarhe. But let's be honest, we've seen this way too much. Making Zewiac a clumsy, nervous nerd was funnier to write about and made for a less cliché scene. Also, it made much mo...

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ONWARD_Page-113_Ch-5 (Sketch)

I'm sorry that the quality is so awful... We had no internet for a month and I couldn't send images from our scanner to my computer, so I had to take a photo of the page with my phone... I really hope you can see it well and I apologize. :'( I'l try to scan and submit a better version as soon as I get access to the scanner!

But now about the page! The first panel is just the same, with Zarhe...

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We're graduating yay

The title says it all really. :'> Yep! Me and my girlfriend are graduating today and boy is it exciting yet terrifying!
Due to this, I may not be able/have time to submit this week's page today. It might be up tomorrow instead, please pass that on to anyone who asks for a page today. :'>

The image features Yaara, my girlfriend's character, and Meya graduating and being happy.<...

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ONWARD_Page-112_Ch-5

This page wasn't actually planned from the beginning, but I felt like there needed to be more "bonding" between Tacoro and Lankie. Especially Lankie lacks some character development so I thought he needed a little more dialogue. Having him and Tacoro casually talking is fun to work with too! ^^

I changed the dialogue since I didn't want this page to be too explanatory... Like, we've already ...

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ONWARD_Page-112_Ch-5 (Sketch)

First of all, I'd like to thank all of you for your patience. Our internet at home have been out for about a month and I've had to struggle to get some connection elsewhere. :'c Luckily, I'm at my girlfriend's house now where I do have Wi-Fi, so I finally get to upload these pages for you!

However, here you can see Zewiac feeling a bit awkward while Lankie and Tacoro (among others) observes ...

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A slight delay!

The pages and extra artwork will be up in a few hours, it's been stressful, I'm sorry! :'<

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ONWARD_Page-111_Ch-5

Oh gosh this page. I've been wanting to get to this point of the comic for so long. Zewiac is a character I've spent a lot of time drawing despite him not being introduced in the comic until now.

But, here he is! This scene was actually changed quite a bit. The first panel originally featured Zarhe stopping mid-attack because something runs past her. The middle panels are the same, but the l...

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ONWARD_Page-111_Ch-5 (Sketch)

Okay, so here everything takes a different turn. 83

Zarhe stops mid-motion in the first panel because she hears a noise and sees something. In the middle panels, we see Lankie, Umbra and Rubigo react to the same thing. And in the last panel, we see Zewiac lying in front of Zarhe.

The first and middle panels weren't changed at all since I was happy about how they were. 

Alth...

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ONWARD_Page-110_Ch-5

The absolutely hardest part about these recent pages, is keeping Meya's wounded leg on the right place. Seriously, I had to look at the earlier pages to determine it's position! :'>

And if you're wondering what Umbra's doing... She's not upset about Zarhe (tho she may also be), but rather, she notices something. The next page is one I've been looking forward to for years, litterally...  ...

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ONWARD_Page-110_Ch-5 (Sketch)

The first panel is a close-up of Meya's wounded leg. The blood is infected with "blue" and really swollen. 

The second panel however, was changed to a close-up of Meya's eye with the "blue" spreading towards her pupil. I changed it since the last panel is basically the same. It felt too repetitive in other words. :)

The third panel was left untouched. I was happy with the expression a...

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ONWARD_Page-109_Ch-5

Again, we see a personality-change on Lankie, where he looks more worried than evil and I've already gone over that.

The second panel was changed since I though this scene needed a more zoomed-out view, otherwise, it'd be hard to follow.

On the last panel tho, you can see Meya's blood turning blue without Zarhe noticing it. This was actually an in-process-idea which wasn't planned to begin...

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ONWARD_Page-109_Ch-5 (Sketch)

My internet at home was shut down for some reason, so I had to submit the week's page in school. Although, I had no time to submit these pages since they need the extra text, so now I finally do it through my girlfriend's internet!

However, on this page, we see Zarhe being a twat and throws down Meya to the ground.

In the first panel, we see (to the left) Zarhe dragging Meya and (to th...

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Later today!

I've had a really stressful day and my internet didn't work at all (writing this while in school), so the pages will be submitted later today. 

I'm sorry! :c

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ONWARD_Page-108_Ch-5

I mentioned on the sketch-page that I changed the first panel because of character changes, namely, Lankie became more compassionate. And it is true! Just like Rubigo, did I find this character to be a little too bland. I wanted him to show more emotion than just being...  there. Lankie notices that Tacoro, much like himself, loves his "big-sister-figure" and realizes that Zarhe is playing re...

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ONWARD_Page-108_Ch-5 (Sketch)

Sorry about the slight delay, my internet is wonky... 

Anyway! On this page, we see Zarhe torturing Meya by biting her wound. Not that plesant...

In the first panel, we see Lankie and Tacoro reacting to the situation. I changed this scene so that it isn't such a close-up anymore. I zoomed it out and made Lankie more compassionate towards Tacoro.

The second panel is all the same ...

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