"Bulls, it had to be bulls. Why not Elks or Reindeers?" Eldrin murmured to himself. Alarion didn't bother with a reply as he took in the sight. A family of Thunderhoof bulls, the latest of the Thunderhoof family kept smashing their twin horns into the wooden wall.
"If not for the stones Meladrel worked into the walls last four Winters they'd be through faster". Eldrin frowned. Alarion s...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Lumina
The Edgelands (Western Lumina) - The Bow's Eye
No one knew just ...
FREYR'S POV
I sat in Mother's sitting form. Something she called the Lotus position. My eyes were closed, my breathing normal, and my fists connected in front of me. My lips parted at intervals to utter a single word.
"Death".
Unlike Ozai who must have found creating angels easy, it was in no way easy for me. First was the fact that I wasn't ...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Argonne Islands
SouthWestern Edge -
Territory - Null
Freyr looked disappointed at the truth spilling from Ozai's mouth. It was clear to him that their mother had indeed gifted the flames to Ozai. Yet he'd expected some sort of positive answer from his brother. The young demon couldn't help but sigh.
'Mother wouldn't grant me the flames since I won't tell her the why. Luckily Akasha won't either which means I can keep this to myself for no...
THIRD PERSON POV
'Weak'. I ducked below a fist and met a knee to my palms staggering me backward. 'I was weak'. I caught my stumble and swept my feet the way I'd seen him do. He leaped over it and brought his foot down with a powerful stomp. Bone crunched and it took nothing in me to keep from screaming. This was nothing compared to the destruction energies of O...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - The Verdant Vale
Central Glen - Drak'Varn Enclave
Territory - Sylvaran...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Glimmering Abyss of the Northern Seas - The Abyssal Deep
THIRD PERSON POV
...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Glimmering Abyss of the Northern Seas
Under Water Archipelago - Aurora Atoll - Luminari City - Azure Bay Villag...
Nothing changed about the great hall. It was the same stone floor, the same pillars, the same throne on a dais, and the same sword in a stone.
Well except for one little thing. Behind the throne stood a new construct, one that she remembered very well. Carved of the same white stone and with the same smooth surface that had her illustration inscribed beautifully onto it. Standing with he...
The destroyer had been stronger which called for her to think and plan before trapping and killing it. Molliwag had been weaker but she also had to think outside the box. First was skilled, dominating their battle even if she held her own. Yet his skill failed to her plans.
Cole had mentioned and praised, her ability to see things that weren't said but hinted at.
She didn't exactl...
THIRD PERSON POV
The elf stood up as listlessly as he had earlier. Its hollow eyes met the new form of the one who had dared to challenge him.
A green glowing stone golem stood over six feet tall, crouching in a combat stance with its left hand on the ground and its right straight and to the side. Its eyes were two green light orbs. Its short fingers grip...
It was bright. Very. You would think that the highest level amongst the Gursers, a group of bone, death, flame, and sword-wielding menaces would live in the dark.
Wrong. The boss's great hall was well-lit. Chandeliers dotted the ceiling. Fire bowls sat at different locations. The ground was a cracked gray marble. Marble now dulled and had less of a shine.
The walls now faded and l...
I called them Joundk - Guardian wolves. I found their names. Anos, Deus, and Treus as cool and fitting for each of them.
Treus was white-furred and huge, since they were all currently lying I wasn't certain of his size. But it was a certainty that he outgrew the rest in fur. Even his claws were a white almost crystalline material.
Deus was the golden one of the lot. His fur was mo...
HELEN'S POV
First was thrown to the side, his body smashing into the wall of the hallway. Following him closely were Thirteen and Twenty-four both crashing and rolling to a stop on the ground.
The Cerberus was besieged from all sides. Its feet stomped and its tail wagged behind it. A solid deterrent to those who attacked from the rear. The sharp and solid...
The Insight was elusive, hard, and stubborn. Like a hard pillar rooted into the ground, pulled but unyielding, clinging tightly to its spot like a petulant child.
What was the earth? The question fleeted in, and about in her head. The insight gave various answers that weren't at the moment useful for her. It was like getting the answers to a tertiary question while still in elementary.
It took longer than expected to move further than the first topmost hallway.
Returning to the Center of Worlds or the Star Ring was inappropriate unless her children were still being nuisances in the mortal realm. Akasha had some of the things to be done under control as such there was no point in returning for now.
While it peeved Hilde that she would not be able to see her chi...
The Unborn marched ahead of its creator after both exited the room and found an untold number of Gursers swarming for them.
With his black sword in hand which the Creator had returned, he was poised to take on the little crowd. Finally, a partner to use against the wave of mobs.
Unfortunately, things were not as easy as Hilde thought them to be. The Gursers for some reason had cal...
So. This is not a chapter. A chapter will come later in the day. So was thinking and thinking.
We got our angels.
What comes next is obviously how we get their counterparts or evil sides. The black to their white. The bad to their good. The chaos to their order. And I realized that maybe just maybe. Demons are not so alright.
I'm not saying their not powerful and not a g...
HELEN'S POV
The words of the quest echoed in my head repeatedly my eyes never leaving the Gurser. Its hollow husks were now empty, devoid of the flame even as its skull burned. Like it had given up the fight.
The words made no sense no matter how I looked at it and honestly, Cole's warning was the only reason it felt like something to be considered. ...
The sound of liquid splashing into a puddle was audible in the silence that choked the room. The sight of golden ichor on the stone floor even as more drops joined the growing puddle disturbing.
The Gurser tilted its head as its eyes appraised the sight before it.
The female stood a hand latched onto the guard of its black sword. The situation was terrible, the danger in the air w...
The Gursers: Flame bearers, unfortunately, didn't flee with the fall of the axe-wielding Gurser. Hilde snapped both pairs of tbe chakram back into one whilst evading hits continuously.
This battle was easy, too easy.
'Could be easier'. She frowned.
It was almost like she had grown stronger or these things were not worth her at all. Hilde punched a burning skull out of her ...
THIRD PERSON POV
Back in the lunar palace, Hildelith looked at her palm. The eye of worlds called to her with excitement. The White world had sure been annoying and scary but it brought a sense of adventure she still wanted. She could get this from her world or make another but she felt like letting one grow a bit was best before making another.
It w...
No, I'm not announcing that I'm going on another break. I've completed the task for my break which is editing the entire 59 chapters. Some things I left as I preferred the wording in a certain way, other things I changed or the phrases and statements themselves. Made some modifications like the descriptions of Zeus, The Terrain Pegasi.
Now the main question in this post is simple.
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Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Subcontinent (Zephyr Isles)
Main Continent Western edge - Zephyrwood Outpost Territory - Oakheart Va...
[Author's Note - Should I make a Discord? I don't like the silence here after a chapter.
Please give me a review. I want to know how good or bad my story is. And I don't mean just the story itself. I mean the narrative and more. Just a general review and also tell me what you think I should improve or do better in. I'll ask for your time to please post this in t...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Subcontinent (Zephyr Isles)
Main Continent Western edge - Zephyrwood Outpost Territory - Oakheart Va...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Subcontinent (Zephyr Isles)
Main Continent Western edge - Zephyrwood Outpost Territory - Verdant Vei...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
So I had no idea I could create collections with Patreon. Still not sure if it works well with different stories. Anyway. Here's the link to my new Story. On a different Patreon.
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