Again, no script this week because I'm still waiting on data recovery. Keep wishing me luck!
This page further shows that each girl has to spend some time getting used to being in the other's body. Nothing too fancy here.
2021-03-01 11:10:53 +0000 UTC View PostIn this page, Carmen is getting flustered over the change, and we see that while Emma has Carmen's powers, she doesn't quite know how to use them like her friend can.
I don't have a script to upload because my hard drive died and I'm waiting on data recovery. I'm pretty confident I'll get most or all of my data back but it will take a while (and cost a lot...). Justin already has the scri...
2021-02-22 12:56:29 +0000 UTC View PostAs you can see, we're starting to differ significantly from the script here. This is mainly because my scripts are often first drafts (or close to it) and Justin sees where things can be improved, in this case things are being stretched out a bit to allow the action room to breathe.
2021-02-15 11:25:10 +0000 UTC View PostThe dialogue here got chopped up a bit to combat a common trend in my writing (especially first drafts) where characters restate things over and over, which you'll see in the script here. I write that way mainly due to readers of my comics not paying attention and getting things wrong even after they've been spelled out in the comic, so I take to restatement as a defense against this, when ofte...
2021-02-11 01:54:35 +0000 UTC View PostThe switch begins!
Get ready for some physical comedy, because nothing says classy writing like jokes about boobs!
2021-01-25 11:09:44 +0000 UTC View PostNot much to talk about this one. The spell is cast and Finch and Sal are gonna be body swapped!
2021-01-18 11:08:26 +0000 UTC View PostOoh, big fancy Olde English! Salvadora still doesn't take heroing quite as seriously as she should, and it's about to have negative consequences for her.
2021-01-04 11:26:49 +0000 UTC View Post
