I know everyone really likes the Divine Gift series and I'll probably continue it as inspiration hits me. But I realized that I could mine the concept (God gives dirty gifts to random people) with some interesting side stories. So this is that. Hopefully you enjoy the sexy blasphemy. This installment starts out a little slow because the setup required a lot. Hopefully you enjoy the pa...
2020-07-29 20:58:41 +0000 UTC View PostWhat happens the next day? What happens when Louise and Sasha arrive? What happens when a girl gets busted buying lube? All these questions and more on this installment of "Jay and Carly live a life we all wish we could live". I'm on my family vacation next week so don't expect anything. Too many kids running around to write much smut. I'll try to get a visual inspiration up for the n...
2020-07-17 19:41:44 +0000 UTC View PostI'm trying to reach out and expand the reader base beyond literotica so I'm putting up stories on some other sites. I started with Wattpad because it's hilariously easy and seems to have a decent readerbase. Go look at the story. Give it a like and comment on your favorite passages to "prime the pump" a little.
sorry for the delay. I rewrote the end because I changed some timeline stuff and had to fix a couple things. Was your guess about Lilith right? Did you correctly identify her kink? Read on to find out!
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"Yes, Master!” Carly said as she hopped up, full of happiness and pep. I folded my fingers together and rested my head on my hands as I watched my...
2020-07-06 18:57:01 +0000 UTC View PostThis chapter got pretty long so I ended up splitting it in half. You'll have to wait a bit to see how things turn out with the newest character. Don't worry though, you get to see what she looks like tomorrow ;)
I woke up the next day a little disoriented. Sleeping in a new place will sometimes do that to you and I wasn’t used to our new, still constantly changing, surrou...
2020-06-25 19:40:21 +0000 UTC View Post
It didn’t take long for people to start figuring out that the world was changing. First, there was the spike in divorces followed by a spike in marriages. That was in turn followed, nine months later, by a spike in child births. The good news was that, after that first year, the divorce rate cratered. There was still the occasional divorce due to domestic violence. Though it was ...
2020-06-16 19:05:08 +0000 UTC View PostI'm curious who you guys like best (and why if you want to comment). I won't throw an exhaustive list up (it would be just a wee bit too long, I think). But I added an "other" category in case you wanted to "write in".
2020-06-15 21:53:46 +0000 UTC View Post
Tabitha went another week of exceedingly unsatisfying experiences. She even tried to get her lecherous, sexually harassing, asshole of a boss to fuck her. Turns out his 3 inch cock couldn’t do shit for her and his tongue was only good for being an asshole. She managed to get herself off while he was rimming her but it was even less satisfying than the two impotent guys she brough...
2020-06-12 17:01:03 +0000 UTC View PostEveryone's been writing COVID stories and I've sort of resisted that urge because, if I did it, I didn't want it to be "just another coronavirus story". But I was thinking about it last night and realized that there could be a good story here told in a Arthur C Clark type style of multigenerational societal change told through the individuals in the story. I pounded out the first chap...
2020-06-09 18:12:06 +0000 UTC View PostThis one got a little long but I couldn't f
2020-05-29 17:34:45 +0000 UTC View PostFine... you guys did it. You managed to get me excited and invested in the continued story. This chapter includes a fair bit of setup for the future. Introduces some of the players and future girls for Jay. I have a vague outline and we'll meander our way there together but thanks for the encouraging words, ideas and just general continued support. Also, keep an eye out for some visua...
2020-05-21 18:21:35 +0000 UTC View PostI'm sure by now you all know me well enough to know when I say, "hopefully by wednesday" what I really meant was "Friday if we're lucky." Well, we were lucky this time. The continuation of the storyline and the beginning of the Miami transition. Jay and Carly's life never seems to have a dull moment.
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And that’s pretty much how the honeymoon went. It was...
2020-05-15 19:46:20 +0000 UTC View PostI was overwhelmed by the response from the last poll. First of all, almost three quarters of you guys voted which means a lot to me. It also tells me you guys really love and care about this story which I love. I gave it a lot of thought this weekend and I think I've come up with a plan of attack:
First, I'm going to gloss over the rest of the honeymoon. Now before there's a revolt, know...
I've been giving a lot of thought to how and in what direction I want to continue the Carly / Jay story. My reluctance to continue focusing on them is that the story isn't really building to any particularly interesting point any more. That is fine to some degree. "Slice of life erotica" is perfectly valid IMO. It just runs a real risk of becoming "samey".
That being said, there's two o...
This chapter gets a little... weird. I realized it was important to sort of establish some bounds to Danny's power over Karen. So this chapter has Danny really pushing at those limits to figure out where those lines are. Don't expect most chapters to be like this. The general story will continue kind of as it has been before but I don't write a lot of stories that can go really "weird" ways...
2020-04-27 17:33:02 +0000 UTC View Post
Inspired by a Patron, Imogen will be showing up in Chapter 4 of Divine Gift (hopefully done this weekend... I'm trying to make the chapter end in a satisfying way).
Is she a new "version" of Karen? A new plaything for them? Some intriguing third option? Feel free to make a guess.
It wouldn't be a story without a visual inspiration post so here it is. I wanted somebody sexy but elegant (There were some other criteria too but I don't want to spoil future chapters). Hopefully you guys enjoyed the story.
2020-04-19 15:01:01 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1519826
You can vote there. I would be great for my ego to win it so go throw a vote my way if you think I deserve it ;)
It's chapter 8 of the Carly/Jay story which is the chapter that they go shopping. Always thought that was an odd one to be...
Oh my gosh... two stories in two days! Hope you guys enjoy. Don't expect three in three. That's too much even for me!
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I don’t know if we’re alone in this but it took a long time for my wife and I to discover each other’s kinks. I’m not talking about the kind of sex we like. Or the little basic stuff. I’m talking about the weird stuff that...
2020-04-16 17:13:43 +0000 UTC View PostA sequel of sorts to "Bachelor Party Gone Wild". Hope you guys enjoy and aren't going too stir crazy from the quarantine. Thanks for the patience and continued support.
Work Party Gone Wild
My wife Hailey and I relived our bachelor party fun many times after that fateful night. No actual re-enactment though. Just bedroom dirty talk and “remember how we” whisperin...
2020-04-15 21:10:39 +0000 UTC View Post
Took me longer than I wanted but I finally got it up. This is also the answer to the last Visual Inspiration post. Read on to find out about the beautiful bimbo Kandi!
Chapter 3
I woke up the next morning to the sight of my beautiful, sexy sister-in-law staring at me while I slept. I jumped with a bit of a shock before remembering the night before. After changing my wif...
It's been two reasons. 1) Things have been so insane lately that I really haven't had a time to think. Hopefully that'll improve soon. 2) I actually do a decent amount of writing at work (*shhhh... don't tell my boss*) and I'm now working from home which means kids randomly walking in and out.
Hopefully, I can get back to writing (I'm hoping to have something up on Saturday) ...
2020-03-19 19:31:19 +0000 UTC View PostI've been working on other stuff but something keeps calling me back here. So enjoy the first chapter of a new novel... let the honeymoon begin!
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Chapter 27
My wife and I… and boy is that weird to type… My wife and I went straight to the airport from the reception. Neither of us wanted to hang around long. We were packed and already mentally checking onto t...
2020-02-21 19:14:33 +0000 UTC View Post
“Open your heart to love but protect the love you already have” - Random Fortune Cookie
My name’s John and I love Cuck stories. But not the more popular Cuckold stories. Nope. My personal kink is Cuckquean stories. If you’re not familiar, I don’t blame you. I didn’t know the term until about five years ago But I’d always loved the idea. Maybe it’s the stories ...
2020-02-03 18:48:39 +0000 UTC View PostSo the Netflix show got me thinking... In a world in which our souls are detached from our body, it seems like there's be a pretty good career for people to "rehab" bodies. Take a fat, out of shape, poor health body and buy it for cheap then spend a year getting it in shape and healthy then sell for a profit.
That got me thinking that maybe a cool erotica angle would be for someone to tr...
up on Lit. I changed the ending because I felt like banging the sister was a little "too far too fast" given how the first chapter went. So now they still have the sister come over and they fool around in front of her but she leaves and Karen asks to be changed to look like Teri so he can fuck "Teri". I think that works a lot better. Here's the revised ending (full thing up on Lit tomorrow or S...
2020-01-23 22:05:39 +0000 UTC View Post
Originally I'd never planned to have Sasha in the story. But when my wife and I were searching for sexy clothes, we came across this picture and I was like, "Holy shit... that's Sasha". The sort of "fit, girl next door" that I'd pictured as Jay's first "love". Yeah, you can't see her face but you can imagine it (or I can at least) and it was perfect. So yeah... there's the backstory and the pic...
2020-01-22 17:34:25 +0000 UTC View PostIt's finally done. Although not quite. I had planned on ending with the wedding but I think there's enough left unanswered that I've got one or more chapters in me. Maybe they'll be the start of a whole new "book" or maybe it'll continue. I don't know. Whatever it is, I know I'm not (yet) ready to give up on Jay and Carly. That being said, don't expect another installment for awhile. I want...
2020-01-16 21:32:01 +0000 UTC View PostI'm going back through but double checking through a novel is really tough. Does this list of women look correct in chronological order?
(Sasha), Carly, Kyrsten, Sherry, Madison, Alex, Natalie, Starla, Daphne, Rebeccah, Mrs. Young, Jackie, Victoria, Maureen, Tabitha, Jennifer
Hopefully I'll have this chapter up tomorrow.
2020-01-15 19:03:58 +0000 UTC View PostI just noticed Carly's WMAF Ch 23 has crept up to 4.88 on literotica which is good for fifth all time in the interracial category. If you haven't already given it a 5 star rating, go and give it one. Let's see if we can push it to #1 (which is only 4.89).
Thanks guys ;)
2020-01-10 20:46:48 +0000 UTC View Post