Inspired by a fan who reached out to me. Hope you guys like it. I hope to have another story up as a Christmas gift for you guys (I know... two stories in a week? It's been a long time!)
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You have no idea how hard it can be to live a lie.
I’ve been living one for nearly my whole life and I only recently even became aware of that lie.
I grew up with...
2021-12-22 02:34:32 +0000 UTC View PostBack writing again and appreciate all the patience guys. New job is stressful but terrific. Just trying to find the time to write with the new schedule. Enjoy this chapter. I've also got the next colors chapter half-written as well so that should be out soon as well. Thank you for all the well wishes and now... on with the show!
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For the next several days, Rebec...
2021-11-21 22:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostI've had to change jobs recently and finding a new workflow has been tricky. I'm about halfway through the next College story and hopefully back to working Jay and Carly stories soon. Again, really appreciate the continued support and expect to see something out in the next few days.
2021-11-06 07:12:28 +0000 UTC View PostThis one has been awhile coming. For those of you that are interested in the craft of writing, learn my lesson. When you can't figure out how to advance the plot, just right something. Anything. Don't try to puzzle it out ahead of time. Just put something down on paper. You'll frequently find yourself writing your way out of trouble. That's not an excuse to never plan. Just saying that some...
2021-09-10 19:18:37 +0000 UTC View PostAs with so many of my stories, I have an idea to write a quick one shot then decide the characters need fleshing out. Then add another character and suddenly I've written 6000 words and the original idea for the story still hasn't actually manifested! Nevertheless, here we are again. The plus side, this one is a pretty locked on two parter with the second half already halfway written. So ho...
2021-09-03 17:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostAlexis and Rebeccah were practically giddy as they reentered the frat house. After so long away, it felt like coming home. Even more so for Rebeccah given her new found sexual freedom. High on endorphins, adrenaline and arousal, she was stripping out of her clothes as she entered the door and screaming, “Come and get it boys!”
Alexis grabbed her arm, giggling, and pulled her upstairs ...
2021-09-01 21:15:17 +0000 UTC View PostHaven't done a poll in awhile. Which character needs a one-shot spin-off of Jay and Carly? Here's the options (and vague story ideas). No promises on this one, just trying to gauge opinion.
2021-08-17 17:00:05 +0000 UTC View PostI've been kicking around a comedic / erotic riff on the movie Stranger than Fiction for awhile but inspiration struck me about how it might playout. (Side note: If you haven't seen it, it's really very good and the core premise of the story will make more sense... if you haven't... well... the core premise is that the main character can suddenly hear the narrator... no spoilers since that g...
2021-08-13 17:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostHope you enjoy this installment. Just a few more chapters of this one and then we'll have (finally) a completed story ;)... Also, based on what happens in this chapter, expect a "Visual Inspiration" tomorrow!
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The three of us sat there panting as we all recovered from the erotically charged moment. Kelly was still kneeling on the floor, tongue dangling out of he...
2021-08-10 20:27:38 +0000 UTC View PostThanks for the continued feedback. I enjoyed writing this chapter a lot. Plenty of "fun" but also some good moments between characters. I particularly liked dangling the chekov's gun last chapter and then yanking it away ;) (that'll make more sense once you read this... and if you know what Chekov's gun is). Anyways, enjoy the wonderful start of January for our two lusty heroines!
<... 2021-08-04 17:01:02 +0000 UTC View PostNext color in line for the couple? Guess you'll have to read to find out!
We made an appointment to go visit the doctor the next day. Kelly was nervous… so was I for that matter. Unspoken was the possibility that my wife’s brain might have had something permanently changed in her. This is a scary thought. I don’t know about you but I think of my brain as “me”... and so...
Long Chapter, a little light on sex but lots of flirting and setup for the future. As a side note, I just wanted to say how much I appreciate you guys and how freeing it is that I can just add to this story in whatever way feels organically correct. I have a rough roadmap but it changes almost every chapter as I start writing the characters. I should probably archive my outline notes and pu...
2021-07-15 19:34:43 +0000 UTC View PostThe next installment (and a particularly debauched one). This story is going to make clear something I've been hinting at around the edges. I know people are weird about this stuff so I'm just gonna say right now, this is LOOSE canonicity with regards to the other series. If it bothers you that they're connected then don't worry about it. The stories exist completely separately and independ...
2021-07-06 20:15:46 +0000 UTC View Post“Real fucked up,” Kimi continued, “I mean, I was into some weird shit with my ex, but this is just…”
I was laying on the floor, naked women in various states of post-coital bliss around the room while Hideo was still sitting there, cock in his hand. It must have been quite the sight. I quickly covered up and started to say something but Louise shot me a little shake of the head,...
2021-06-25 20:31:39 +0000 UTC View PostAnother story inspired by my lovely wife. Remember, these stories are disconnected, unrelated, unlikely to ever be continued and might make no sense in terms of time/space/events. But that's fine. They're good clean one shot fun!
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There was a couple that had been married for 17 years. They’d gotten married very early due to a surprise pregnancy and thus never ...
2021-06-10 19:09:55 +0000 UTC View PostAlexis didn’t stop teasing Rebeccah for several days. Rebeccah, for her part, half heartedly protested but whenever Alexis would bring it up, Rebeccah was all over her girlfriend. They had the best sex of their relationship as they relived and rewatched Rebeccah’s exploits as the frat house cumslut. The guys even courteously let them have a couple days to themselves although, as Alexis poin...
2021-06-01 17:01:04 +0000 UTC View PostJust a standalone story in the Divine "Series". Hopefully you guys enjoy.
“Most couples say there is only one thing they’d change about their spouse. Did you know that? But that’s a lie! Liberty University did a very detailed double blind study! They even used the so-called ‘Scientific Method’,” the pastor said, his tone of voice made the sarcasm quotes readily appare...
2021-05-21 21:56:16 +0000 UTC View PostSo, I just got access to try out some GPT-3 stuff (if you're not up on the latest state of AI, basically, OPEN AI has produced an INSANE breakthrough in natural language creation software called GPT-3. It's REALLY, REALLY good. Like insane. So I was curious how it would handle my stuff. Could it extrapolate out my style of writing and produce a coherent story? Yes and no.
The public faci...
I tried to do a thing with this story and I think I ALMOST pulled it off. Suggestions on how to improve it are always welcome (and if it's too hard to tell what I was trying to pull off, that just means I probably was too subtle which is its own kind of advice ;). Hopefully you guys enjoy the story.
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“Babe, do you know where my good jacket is?”
I pause...
2021-05-04 17:01:01 +0000 UTC View PostAs I mentioned elsewhere, this chapter got reworked a couple times as I tried to make the characters work. I think I finally settled on a fun/hot way to weave everything together. Hopefully you enjoy it.
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“Hideo, watch after the girls, will you?”
“Of course,” he said, looking between his sister and I. My hand was on the small of Aimee’s back and ...
2021-04-28 17:18:39 +0000 UTC View PostThis chapter is all about Rebeccah's continued descent into depravity. I wanted her to take a little bit more active role and this worked out pretty perfectly. Hope you guys enjoy.
It took a lot of convincing, but Jack finally seemed amenable to the arrangement.
“So you’ll suck us off anytime we want?”
Rebeccah nodded, her hands in her lap and her head turned do...
2021-04-19 19:47:25 +0000 UTC View PostThis has been a long time coming (LONNNNGGGG). I was trying to write the next Jay and Carly chapter and then the Atlanta shootings happened. And everything I was trying to do with Aimee just felt wrong. I rewrote sections a couple times but couldn't find the right balance. So I turned back to Carly's side of things for some inspiration. I'm trying to find the right line and having Carly's i...
2021-03-29 20:46:16 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 2
The next two weeks were… well… weird wouldn’t begin to describe it. We didn’t have a repeat of that fateful day. Not even close. If I got even a little rough, Kelly would gently turn me down with a “I’m not in that kind of mood this time.” She was nice. Not upset. We talked about it several times. But she never got back to that height. I asked her about anal and he...
2021-03-17 17:01:02 +0000 UTC View PostThere's an April Fool's contest on Lit. And somehow I got it into my head that it was a 750 word contest. SOoooo... i typed up a story. Then I realized it's not a 750 word contest and now I have this short (TINY) story (seriously, 750 words is basically a long poem... it's hard to do much interesting in such a short length which is the fun of the constraint, I guess). But I figured you guys...
2021-03-11 18:01:01 +0000 UTC View PostMy God it's painful rereading some of these. These definitely needed a polish (I'm actually a little scared to go back and read Ch1 of Carly and Jay for these same reasons). But at least I'm getting an opportunity to fix some of them. Honestly, if I had time, these chapters deserve a bigger rewrite. Jay is kind of a manipulative asshole in this and I think it would be a more compelling stor...
2021-03-08 18:01:01 +0000 UTC View PostI originally planned this as four chapters but it might go longer than that if you guys respond positively. The idea came to me while watching Big Little Lies (it's pretty good if you haven't seen it). There's a line at the very beginning about half-sisters and it sort of made my mind wander about the different types of sibling relationships and that, somewhat inevitably, took me to this pl...
2021-03-05 18:01:01 +0000 UTC View PostI had this cutesy idea to do one chapter for each month of school. Turns out it just wasn't going to work for the story that I wanted to tell. It's a good lesson for anyone that wants to be an author. Never let your cute ideas get in the way of telling a good story. So I'm slightly loosening that structural constraint to (hopefully) tell a better story.
First Half of November
... 2021-03-02 18:01:01 +0000 UTC View PostHopefully you guys like this story. There's specific feedback I'd love to get from people at the end but I don't want to ruin anything so look for the note at the end and leave a comment if you're so inclined.
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Two things you need to understand. The human eye is VERY sensitive to variant color gradients. We can’t always register that difference and we almost n...
2021-02-26 18:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostAs you guys know, I moved on to Divine Poker because I just didn't feel like the central premise of Divine Gift was going to be long enough lasting. I'd basically given him unlimited power. BUT, I've also made a New Year's resolution to try to wrap up old stories this year. So here's my first in hopefully a string of stories over the next few months that wrap up older, unfinished stories. H...
2021-02-22 06:01:00 +0000 UTC View PostAs many of you know, I have trouble coming up with good, unique names (I'm REALLY trying to get better but I think I have three Chloe's in various stories and I don't even LIKE the name Chloe!!). So I decided to crowdsource it!
So there's a new tier that allows you to occasionally name a character if that's your thing. Nobody should feel obligated, just a little extra to try to fill in t...