Metamorphosis - pages 16 to 20
Added 2019-02-25 11:20:55 +0000 UTCSee attachments
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Sadly the story does feel rushed. I don't get that. What is the rush to get to another story? Also unlike some other similar stories not excited about the end result of Bella's transformation. On page 19 it says the first part of her transformation is complete. I can only hope that the rough skin eventually breaks open and something better emerges. Sorry but being honest this may end up being a story of what might have been more than anything else.
Randy-O
2019-03-02 15:25:55 +0000 UTCLoved the struggle against the pod, as well as the puddle still present on the floor in page 16. I also love the metamorphosis itself: it looks AMAZING, and I can't wait to see what her capabilities are. :)
Eschew Shame
2019-02-25 15:29:14 +0000 UTC
