Revamping Adrienne - pages 66 to 70
Added 2021-07-03 12:27:11 +0000 UTCSee attachments
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Nice chapter with twists here. The investigator and the threat of the police. And the new and interesting detail of the 'cap' on Adrienne's head. Now what is the alien doing to her? How will he change her even more? Ending on a cliffhanger. Very good and creative work.
Randy-O
2021-07-03 18:23:17 +0000 UTC
