DITW 11-13: Steam
Added 2023-09-14 03:03:16 +0000 UTCThough Hyun had giggled, she now turned up her nose in the pose of childish disgust, and Kimmy laughed and asked her why. Hyun squeezed her nose for a second, let it go, wiggled it, then whispered, “Men’s stuff is weird.”
Hyun must have meant the reference to the size of Devlin’s penis. Kimmy summarized it better: “Men, in general, are weird.”
“Yeah,” Hyun said in quiet agreement. “So you think because it was big, or long, I guess, that...”
“I’m being stupid, right? I mean, there’s so slim a chance that...”
“I wouldn’t worry, Kimmy,” Hyun said, soft but with concern, putting an arm on the back of the couch and touching Kimmy’s neck. It felt good, and at the same time, invasive enough it lifted her skin in goosebumps. She leaned into Hyun’s touch. Hyun said, “How can you and Josh have a relationship like that?”
“Where something like that can happen? I don’t know. It’s all very new. I don’t know how to feel about it. I don’t even like Devlin.”
“You don’t? You’re doing it for Josh?”
“No, it’s not like that.” She thought about it a moment while Hyun rubbed the back of her neck. “Devlin’s . . . he’s an asshole. But he can be funny, and he’s really masculine. He’s tall and strong. And he knows what he’s doing.” She chanced a look to Hyun. “Do you know what I mean?”
Hyun’s brow furrowed with query. “Like, in bed?”
Kimmy nodded. “And his body is...” She felt stupid saying it out loud, juvenile and dumb. But she said it anyway. “His body is unbelievable.”
“I can’t believe you’d ever do this.”
She chewed her lower lip, then regarded Hyun again. “So am I bad? Is this immoral? I mean, I want to explore, and if Josh . . . I love Josh more than anything. I really do.”
Hyun’s rubbing fingers ceased and she returned her hand to her lap with the other one. “I don’t think it’s bad or that you’re bad. I don’t know if it’s immoral or not, but—”
“I wouldn’t ever do this if we had children.” She put her hand over her stomach, lips pursing, regret and shame heating up her collar.
Hyun smiled and made a small, amused sound in her throat. She regarded Kimmy with compassion. “It’s okay, Kimmy. It is. If you didn’t concern yourself with all the ramifications, then, yeah, maybe that would be immoral. You’re not cheating on Josh, right?”
Kimmy’s mouth opened, then closed. She said nothing more. Hyun asked her if she wanted another drink and she said she would like one. Hyun went to the kitchen and returned with another sparkling water and a refill of her own wine glass.
Kimmy said, “Josh is my man. He’s the reason I want to do anything. I really love him. He’s a man in all the best ways. He really is. And this guy Devlin, he only thinks he is. He’s like, got the body, the height, the deep voice and everything, this huge penis, you know, but there’s not much else there.”
“Does that matter if he has any of those things?”
Kimmy shook her head. “It’s not like I’m trying to choose between two men. What I mean the most is Devlin doesn’t think much of Josh.”
“What?”
Kimmy nodded, not looking at Hyun, looking at the bubbles fizzing in her glass. “I don’t like that.”
“Do you tell him to stop?”
“Yeah. He doesn’t though. See, I look at Devlin, and he’s a guy who only looks like a man. He tries to espouse all these new age manosphere philosophies, and he reads the books he thinks he’s supposed to read, or at least he says he reads them, and he swings this big tool around”—she wagged a loose fist at her crotch like she was a man holding an enormous penis—“and he makes fun of Josh’s penis, you know, compared to his, and like...”
“He makes fun of Josh like that?”
This was going further than she’d intended, like the soft hand on her neck and the supportive feminine posture and listening ears had paved a smooth path for her, and once she started rolling on it, it felt so good she didn’t want to stop. Hyun sat open and caring, knees drawn up on the couch seat, sitting on her feet. Intent and curious. And supportive. Kimmy regarded her without saying anything, just enjoying a really good feeling from her. They both smiled. “He does. He makes fun of Josh. I defend him.” And then in case Hyun thought otherwise: “Josh doesn’t have a small penis. . . . Sometimes I think he likes it when Devlin makes fun of him.”
“He does?”
She nodded. “Yeah, I don’t think that, I know that. Josh doesn’t reject it when Devlin does that. He just . . . onboards it.”
Hyun said, “So this was more than one time with him? With Devlin?”
This was where it was too far. She didn’t want to admit to more than what she’d already divulged. She rubbed her forehead, leaning forward. “I wish I could have a drink right now.”
Hyun rubbed circles on the center of Kimmy’s back, right between her shoulder blades. She sat and let her former sister-slash-cousin-in-law do it. It felt so good. Totally different than what she was used to. She chuckled and said, “I’m caught between them. One man who loves me and who I love in return, and another one who I share some intimacy with purely on a physical level. But they’re both a drain. They’re both all about themselves. Josh is...”
“Selfish?”
“No. It feels unfair to say that. He’s so kind and he loves me. But, shoot, you’re not wrong. It’s got to the point now whenever I see either of them I’m wondering what they want from me next.”
Hyun still rubbed her back, sitting quiet for a moment before saying under her breath, “I still can’t believe this.”
“We’re not like this, Hyun. I don’t know how this came to be.”
“That’s why I can’t believe it. And you go to work every day and see this guy? And Josh doesn’t stop you?”
“No, he just wants to know everything that happened.”
“And does stuff happen?”
Kimmy sighed, then groaned, sat upright, leaned her back on the couch, the crown of her head falling into the cushion. She rolled her face towards Hyun and showed her the expression of a woman at her wit’s end. “Sometimes.”
Hyun looked down at the space between them, working her fingers together, contemplating this unexpected and shocking revelation. Her brow furrowed and her mouth switched to one side. “How come you didn’t use a condom?”
“We did.”
“So then why are you worried? I don’t get it. Could it have torn?”
“No. It didn’t tear.” Nope, all of Devlin’s sperm was collected in the end of the condom after she’d jerked him off with two hands in the driver’s seat of his Mercedes. Then the removed condom fell before she could tie it closed and it fell upside down on her leg and leaked down her ankle and into her sneaker. All of Devlin’s come was safely collected by the condom and none of it was inside her body. But she’d rubbed his unprotected cock on her. She’d even teased his naked cock head inside her opening. The chance that Devlin was her baby’s father was less than one percent. But she still couldn’t get it out of her mind. And in her newfound dark and complicated complexion she couldn’t halt the runaway erotic thrill of bearing the offspring of a man she hated. Even thinking of it now, of having Devlin’s little boy in her belly, made her thighs flex. It would be the ultimate punishment for the ultimate sin. A lifetime burden forced onto her, one she would bear for the rest of her life, one that would remind her every day how bad she was.
Hyun was troubled, not understanding this at all. “Kimmy, don’t you think you’re worrying about nothing?”
She faced Hyun. “What would you think of me if Josh wasn’t my baby’s father?”
Hyun’s eyes stayed soft and compassionate, stroking Kimmy’s forehead, playing with her hair, her mouth working around. “I would love you and I would love the baby. You would love the baby, too.”
She nodded. She would love the baby. “I would. I would love the baby even if it wasn’t Josh’s.”
Hyun smiled and whispered, “Kimmy, it’s Josh’s baby.”
A sickly swirl rolled around her tummy and seized her low, tightening her core, her inner thighs. “Oh my God, Hyun, if it isn’t Josh’s...”
Hyun laughed louder and fell forward, burying her face in Kimmy’s collar, the wetness of her breath heating Kimmy’s skin. She sat up again, smiling wide. “You’re playing with me. You’re doing it to yourself. Worrying for nothing.”
“I know I am,” she said and laughed too, then wiped her cheeks. “I’m just a ball of anxiety right now.”
Hyun seemed satisfied now that her friend’s apprehension was unnecessary, her mind at ease and like she wanted to imbue Kimmy with the same positive spirit. “I’m going to make you some tea, okay? And then you can tell me more, if you want. But I don’t want to entertain your worry over something so infinitesimally small.”
“I can’t help it. I worry about Josh. I worry what he would do.”
Now Hyun looked glum again, slouching a little. “What do you think he would do?”
“He would hurt. That would hurt him.”
“It would. Of course it would. But . . . didn’t Josh know the risk?”
“I guess.”
“He wouldn’t be mad at you, would he?”
She had to think about it, think about the right way to answer, but something just appeared on her horizon like a glowing sunrise, the dawning of the most incredible idea. She covered her face with both hands, and breathed into them, feeling for fingers tingle. “You’re right, Hyun. No, you’re right. I’m being crazy. I have to be pragmatic here. I’m pregnant. Josh is the father. I have to leave alone the idea he’s not the father. The odds it’s not his are astronomical. Once I start to think about it, I spiral. And it’s just not possible. Right?”
Hyun spoke no answer, only smiled and showed a proud look, like she’d gotten through to her and made a difference. “I’m going to boil some water. Do you want anything else?”
Kimmy showed Hyun an embarrassed expression. “Do you have any cookies?”
#
We’re in trouble.
That’s what she’d told him lying in bed with him after he’d found her coming home wearing clothes another man bought her. They were in trouble. So much trouble. Ever since the night he’d drank too much at that stupid party after the high school reunion, his entire sturdy fortress he’d constructed around his psyche had been taken down brick by brick. There were two demons working against him, disassembling his will and his resolve. One who loved him and one who hated him. Hated him for no reason. And the one who loved him?—he gave her everything he could to earn that love.
The satin feel of her panties—the pair Devlin removed from Kimmy then concealed where he knew Josh would find them—slipped up and down his erection. He pulsed persistent streams of pre-come into the fabric, watching the window where his wife held erotic rendezvous behind his back in his cousin’s ex-wife’s apartment.
His hot breath fogged the side windows.
They were in so much trouble.
Comments
I'm not sure if the "nightmare scenario" is a sexy outcome, or not. I think many of these are very sad outcomes. I'd rather see the story take a "happy ending" turn...one where all the characters get what they want. Josh gets a life in which he's more explicitly bullied by Devlin, and humiliated by Kimmy. Kimmy gets to continue seeing her hung lover, and now has a husband who openly accepts that he enjoys being dominated and humiliated. Devlin gets to continue sleeping with Kimmie. The only obstacle to this outcome is Josh. Can he learn to accept that he wants to be cuckolded and humiliated by Kimmy and Devlin, and have the courage to ask for it?
Pete
2023-10-14 01:09:48 +0000 UTCCSH- I could see Meyer first mentioning something to Hyun about it. Josh told him that Kimmy cheated on him, and had Meyer follow her. If he finds out about Aunt Kimmy hanging around with Hyun, he might ask her if everything is okay with Kimmy. The longer Josh goes down the path he’s on, the harder it will be for him to come back from it. As you said in another post, Kimmy is grinding him into powder. Soon there won’t be much of Josh left.
Kat
2023-09-16 04:05:09 +0000 UTCYou really bring up some good points about this genre, and how different this story is from many others. KT’s work really stands above all the others, especially with this one.
Kat
2023-09-16 03:51:25 +0000 UTCThe "a" option for #1 feels kind of obvious, whether in the open or cheating behind Josh's back as she's been doing for the last couple of months. I dont think there's any scenario where she marries or gets with Devlin. Could be wrong, but I just don't think she sees him that way. "Friends" (not really) with benefits when the urge strikes her, sure, but nothing more than that. Assuming Josh leaves. Her attraction to Devlin is too wrapped up in how cheating on Josh makes her feel for it to morph into a scenario where she cuts Josh loose because she prefers Devlin in all ways. Humiliating Josh by being with Devlin and making it clear she prefers sex with him, oh yes, but I don't really think she intends to break Josh by walking away. She could break Josh so badly through other means, though, that he walks away and she's left with nothing because she wouldn't know moderation if it bit her in the ass.
L_S87
2023-09-16 03:50:45 +0000 UTCYeah, I think you're right, because Hyun doesn't know enough to divulge something to Josh that would be earth shattering. It could potentially cause a knock down drag out between Kimmy and Josh if he were to find out the details of all her lies in the last couple chapters, but I don't know if it would go far enough for a full split. Ultimately, the only people with enough info to cause Josh to leave are Kimmy, Devlin and Amy. The first two have no interest in that happening, though I could see potential in Devlin screwing up while indulging is bully kink and dropping an inadvertent bomb. The real wild card is Amy.
L_S87
2023-09-16 03:35:54 +0000 UTCHmmm, I think door number 2. Josh stays married knowing the child is Devlin’s and Kimmy continues to develop her relationship with Devlin. Eventually Kimmy leaves Josh.
Wess
2023-09-16 01:57:29 +0000 UTCJust to prove I have nothing better to do, I give you: Possibilities - Which one of these is the nightmare scenario? 1. Josh is the biological father A. Josh believes the baby is his. 1. They stay married a. she still cucks him b. she stops cucking him 2. They get divorced. a. She gets with Devlin b. She gets with someone else or stays single. B. Josh believes the baby is Devlin’s 1. They stay married a. she still cucks him b. she stops cucking him 2. They get divorced. a. She gets with Devlin b. She gets with someone else or stays single. 2. Devlin is the biological father. A. Josh believes the baby is his. 1. They stay married a. she still cucks him b. she stops cucking him 2. They get divorced. a. She gets with Devlin b. She gets with someone else or stays single. B. Josh believes the baby is Devlin’s 1. They stay married a. she still cucks him b. she stops cucking him 2. They get divorced. a. She gets with Devlin b. She gets with someone else or stays single.
CSH
2023-09-15 23:19:08 +0000 UTCI agree and don’t like the Kimmy pics. I think she’s too thin. She looks mean. Maybe it’s who she is becoming.
CSH
2023-09-15 23:18:22 +0000 UTCAnd we have a winner! Yes that conversation between Meyer and Hyun could indeed bring down the house of cards. But I’m gonna posit that even if it did Kimmy could get Josh to accept it.
CSH
2023-09-15 23:15:21 +0000 UTCDoes that part become overwhelmed when the awfulness gets, well... too awful? - And that is the point where most books in this genre go wrong. Either the couple just “agree it’s all okay and done lovingly” and everything is supposedly mutual. Or the husband just doesn’t have a limit at all and he just becomes a caricature. Here we get a male character who seems genuinely tortured by his own obsession - whose intellectual limit is reached - but who can’t refuse just one more hit of his drug - and whose wife is exploiting it for her own gratification. He’s trying desperately to remain “normal” because he can see where he is headed but he has gotten addicted to the pain she is causing him. Josh is working hard at eroticising all that betrayal. And she is as addicted as him. When does the drug addict stop using? But what’s left of Josh at the end? One thing the series is communicating is that there are consequences of this behavior on the personalities of the couple. Kimmy is slowly grinding him into powder. But she’s transforming herself as well.
CSH
2023-09-15 23:12:07 +0000 UTCYes except he likes being humiliated.
Wess
2023-09-15 19:06:55 +0000 UTC100% Right about the pain and betrayal bit. The difference for this story being the depth of the latter and how much Josh's kink overwhelms the former to create a sort of balance that allows him to rationalize and compartmentalize everything. Being an erotic story, there's nothing here requiring this to be "realistic", I just wonder how likely it is for Kimmy to keep dodging bullets with lies and Josh to keep finding reasons for acceptance every time a new bit of info turns up that shows how awful she's been. Granted, a part of him *loves* that awfulness and dominance, but only a part. Does that part become overwhelmed when the awfulness gets, well... too awful? What does Josh do if/when that happens? Can't wait for the next book to find out!
L_S87
2023-09-15 16:48:28 +0000 UTCThat's an interesting thought. I doubt Hyun would bring up anything regarding her conversation with Kimmy as she loves her and would think it's a betrayal of trust. But. I could see Meyer asking in an offhand way if Hyun knows what's up with Kimmy, since they're friends, and let slip that Josh asked him to spy because he thinks Kimmy is cheating. Which of course would have Hyun wondering why he would ask such a thing if Kimmy is telling the truth about Josh "knows" and "wants" this. Kimmy telling the truth... LOL How Hyun would approach that disclosure and what she does with it would be intriguing
L_S87
2023-09-15 16:30:36 +0000 UTCYeah, well, the truth hurts! Not that Kimmy even knows what that word means anymore...
L_S87
2023-09-15 16:23:18 +0000 UTCI wish Hyun and Meyer would compare notes on Josh and Kimmy’s stories. Might be interesting. 🤔
Kat
2023-09-15 14:44:08 +0000 UTCDon’t say that about my Kimmy!! ❤️❤️❤️😁
L.
2023-09-15 14:04:29 +0000 UTCI was going to post on this bit as well. The “Sunrise” bit. But I echo what CSH and L_S87 posted is perfect. But isn’t this kink all about eroticizing the pain and betrayal? That’s why many of us are here, reading KTs classics? And key, from L_S87: “All this hinges on Josh's kinks allowing the truth to be overwhelmed by Kimmy's gaslighting. The question is, when do the truths become big enough that no amount of kink overwhelms it?” Wow AF.
L.
2023-09-15 13:59:29 +0000 UTCI love you sin list. Mostly agree with how you divvied it up, too. Also agree that KT has given us a bit of a window into how things are probably going to progress, at least as far as Kimmy is concerned. Kimmy's plan for Josh and Hyun seems fairly obvious at this point. The open questions are how Josh responds and what roles Devlin and Amy play in this process. Kimmy has told so many lies to this point that she's in a rather precarious position of having to rely on a lot of luck that nothing sabotages her plans. Hell, all it would take is a certain realtor walking up to Kimmy while Josh is nearby and asking "How do you and Devlin like your apartment? Is the bed still nice?" I still believe that there is a reason KT has been incessantly pounding the "this is all my fault" drum for Josh, chapter after chapter. What happens when he realizes it isn't?
L_S87
2023-09-15 11:08:01 +0000 UTC“ No. It feels unfair to say that. He’s so kind and he loves me. But, shoot, you’re not wrong. It’s got to the point now whenever I see either of them I’m wondering what they want from me next.” Hyun still rubbed her back, sitting quiet for a moment before saying under her breath, “I still can’t believe this.” “We’re not like this, Hyun. I don’t know how this came to be.” “That’s why I can’t believe it. And you go to work every day and see this guy? And Josh doesn’t stop you?” “No, he just wants to know everything that happened.”. Amazing betrayal of Josh by Kimmy.
L.
2023-09-15 08:04:45 +0000 UTCKinda strange, but for me the latest pics of Kimmy just add to her coldness. Even a little scary. Josh alone in his car using her panties to pleasure himself is sad. Looking forward to a new direction soon. Of course I get a thrill every time KT submits a new post. Something about her style. Speaking of that, how hot is her picture?!
Wess
2023-09-15 03:20:22 +0000 UTCKimmy’s a selfish bitch!
Tim ziegler
2023-09-14 23:30:57 +0000 UTCI think KT has given us some clarity as to where this could be headed, especially in terms of who is doing what to whom. Can we sum this up in a way to makes clear the allocation of sin among the three principals. Please feel free to comment or change these recommendations (and excuse the formatting glitches; the x go into the col under the names: Let us review the attribution of sin: Circle of Hell -Defining Sin Josh Devlin Kimmy 1 Limbo x 2 Lust x x x 3 Gluttony x 4 Avarice & Prodigality x x 5 Wrath & Sullenness x x 6 Heresy 7 Violence x 8 Fraud x x 9 Treachery x x Josh is mostly on the lesser circles, and the degree of his sin is generally low in each category. If I could use bold and bigger text I would show how high Devlin and Kimmy score especially "well", particularly in the lower circles of Hell. And then, there's Pride. Only room for one on this perch, the one who said: "I don’t see him that way. I’m . . . I’m more important than he is." One final comment: gaslighting is a particularly apt term to describe Kimmy's verbiage, given where she sits while spewing it.
Donkatsu
2023-09-14 21:22:56 +0000 UTCI don’t detest her as much but think you got some points exactly right. She lies to herself about how she feels about Josh and Devlin and all that’s happening.
CSH
2023-09-14 21:04:07 +0000 UTCI’d highly recommend. It’s a 5 book series book 1 and 2 are stetting the table for the last three so the first couple books are light on action but it builds to the end.
Chinookfan72
2023-09-14 19:28:39 +0000 UTCI agree with you. It’s just preferences! I do like cheating wife stories! Should I give that story by Andrea Martin a shot?
Andrew Mellein
2023-09-14 19:07:44 +0000 UTCKT does write real life and fiction well! That why I’m a fan over of her stories compared to other erotica authors. Would you say this story is darker than the Reza and Losing his Wife series? Reza is darker in its own way but there looks like their might be light at the end of that tunnel for that compared to Ditw!
Andrew Mellein
2023-09-14 19:04:08 +0000 UTCKT has said this sets up as a no one wins scenario. That could mean a lot of things though. The obvious punishment for Kimmy is not being allowed to keep the one thing she keeps insisting she wants the most, Josh. But, i could also see a scenario where Josh is her husband, but she's boiled him so bad that he's only a shell of his former self. She's lost all the respect, love and support she wanted from her marriage, it's all her fault and that realization is crushing. In either scenario, I keep feeling like Hyun may have a part to play. When the whole "Hyun loves Kimmy" thing became apparent multiple books ago, I thought then, what if that's who Kimmy ends up with by default because she's destroyed everything else? I don't know how likely that is, but her manipulation of Hyun to get her onside is certainly intriguing in its possibilities.
L_S87
2023-09-14 19:02:51 +0000 UTCYeah, because every other time he's gotten mad, how has she solved it? By sexualizing it. Reminds me of Gilbert Gottfried from Beverly Hills Cop 2. "Is there something I have in this office that I could hand to you that would make you forget about those tickets in your hand." Except Kimmy is handing him an erotic "possibility" as a game of "what if" that would distract him from the awfulness of the truth. And if later it turns out to not be just a "possibility", well... look how you reacted to it when I brought it up in "fun". How could you possibly be mad at me given that? You're such a hypocrite, Josh! Not sure how that plays out with everything else, though. All this hinges on Josh's kinks allowing the truth to be overwhelmed by Kimmy's gaslighting. The question is, when do the truths become big enough that no amount of kink overwhelms it?
L_S87
2023-09-14 18:23:04 +0000 UTCI love Summer Swap, and Keely, too. That’s not to say that I don’t love DITW, but I’m still holding out some hope for some consequences for Kimmy. I know there’s no way that there’ll be a HEV here, but I just want to see Kimmy pay something, she’s just so evil.
Kat
2023-09-14 18:22:45 +0000 UTCKimmy keeps finding worse ways to demean her husband who she claims is also her best friend. None of what she told Hyun is true. She’s now gaslighted another innocent victim. She can’t possibly love Josh. I’ve said it before, but Kimmy doesn’t truly hate Devlin. He turns her on in more ways than just sexually. She’s talking about him here like a teenage girl fawning over her crush, not as a cheating, immoral wife who is probably pregnant with her husbands bully’s baby. Then she really states her true feelings. “But she still couldn’t get it out of her mind. And in her newfound dark and complicated complexion she couldn’t halt the runaway erotic thrill of bearing the offspring of a man she hated. Even thinking of it now, of having Devlin’s little boy in her belly, made her thighs flex.” She wouldn’t be heartbroken at all to have Devlin’s baby. Her thoughts at the end also tie into this. I think she’s thinking about how she can turn this pregnancy all into an erotic thrill for Josh. All she has to do is emasculate him some more, so he stays with her and helps raise Devlin ‘s baby. He gets off being humiliated, but the real truth is that Kimmy really gets off humiliating and dominating him, more than she does being with Devlin. The baby being Devlin’s will turn everyone on. Gross. Poor baby. Maybe Hyun or Meyer can get custody, because none of these three potential parents should be allowed anywhere near a small child. Losing Josh won’t be losing her true love, best friend. It means losing the source of her kink. She told Josh she got off humiliating him. In an earlier chapter, I think Chapter 8, she said to herself that being with Devlin wouldn’t be as much of a charge if Josh wasn’t also involved. I didn’t think I could detest Kimmy more, and then I read this chapter. Lol I keep trying to give her a chance to show some sort of decency or shame, but she’s incapable. Was she always this detestable? I see why it’s been so hard for you, KT! Your writing brings out so much real emotion. It’s amazing.
Kat
2023-09-14 18:20:10 +0000 UTCI get where you are coming from and a lot of this is just personal preference. Though the affair series I brought up has plenty of emotional consequences and is believable enough. Its just all from the wive/girlfriend perspective which I prefer because that is the pov I am most interested in in these types of stories. By eliminating the husband/boyfriend pov there is more room for interactions between the wife/girlfriend and the bull (both sexual and non). I also prefer a cheating wife story to a hotwife story.
Chinookfan72
2023-09-14 16:47:02 +0000 UTCI get the sense that Kimmy had a really evil thought there at the end. “something just appeared on her horizon like a glowing sunrise, the dawning of the most incredible idea.” Then cut to Josh beating off in the car. The real answer about how Josh would react to the idea that it might be Devlin’s baby - he would eroticize it ( with a little help from Kimmy no doubt).
CSH
2023-09-14 15:07:39 +0000 UTCIt's funny you mention the real life vs erotic story comparison. Thats such a fine line to ride that KT handles really well. Which makes you wonder, where does that line lay for this story? Believable disaster? Unbelievable harmony? Somewhere in between? I know what I hoped for the story died a while ago (not a dig at you, KT! Just me being a romantic sap) which is why I, along with so many others, aren't really sure where this is headed. Summer Swap (I'm not so patiently waiting on that, KT, hint hint) is predictable in that it will be fun and intriguing with a bit of emotional angst for spice, though not predictable in how that fun happens. DITW is a rollercoaster where the end is shrouded in fog. Slow down for a stop before you get off or is the track missing up ahead, crash and burn?
L_S87
2023-09-14 14:27:55 +0000 UTCShe got some unresolved internalized issues! Kimmy needs therapy and if the baby is Josh’s they both need marriage counseling! But this is a erotic story not real life🤣🤣
Andrew Mellein
2023-09-14 14:11:48 +0000 UTCI think I get why KT found this so difficult and disagreeable to write. The amount of moral turpitude on display from Kimmy to weave this fabrication of a story for the sole purpose of gaining a sympathetic echo chamber in Hyun is detestable. I can't imagine how hard it must be to envision a person capable of this type of emotional and mental manipulation and yet still find a way to make her come across as vulnerable because her vile actions have painted her in a corner that doesn't really have a viable exit strategy without pain and suffering. Well done, KT. Kimmy is your best, and yet most heinous, character you've ever devised. She's easy to hate, yet improbably makes you feel sorry for her and wish she could find a way to repent and resolve this without a disaster. And then you realize she doesn't want to repent and that's why she's here with Hyun. She's the epitome of the word "onerous".
L_S87
2023-09-14 13:48:48 +0000 UTCSounds a bit like a Peter G Johnson story I was reading a day ago. But it was multiple guys with the hot wife. Where the husband secretly watches as he’s degraded by the wife and her black lovers🤣🤣🤣I personally like KTs stories better because they seem more realistic due to the dialogue. And they have emotional consequences for the characters . And the actions of the characters don’t feel recycled.
Andrew Mellein
2023-09-14 13:04:26 +0000 UTCGreat chapter KT! I don’t know where things are going but I bet it’s going to be hot 🥵. I think possibilities could be Hyun telling Meyer who tells Josh Kimmys deeds, a scorching hot threesome with Kimmy, Hyun, and Devlin while Josh embracing his inner cuck watches, The baby being Devlin’s etc. Things that got to me in this chapter were Kimmy secretly being excited that the baby is Devlins! Kimmy is always saying she hates Devlin but she lies to herself as much as she lies to other people and she enjoys fucking him and being in his company. So great chapter KT ! Can’t wait for chapter 14! Would you ever consider writing a cheating/hotwife thriller? Where the studly bull would seduce the wife/ young mother as revenge against the husband! I guess I have all these ideas in my head🤣🤣🤣
Andrew Mellein
2023-09-14 12:59:00 +0000 UTCThe bed of lies grows thicker, just to gain Hyun's acceptance. What's really important here is all the things Kimmy ISN'T saying. She's literally told a story where *none* of this is her fault or her decision. It's all Josh's fault for his dirty kinks and what he wants from her and all Devlin's fault. Never telling Hyun the actual truth. Talk about bullshit revisionist history. I find it funny that every time Hyun asked a really important question, one that would steer towards Kimmy's evil nature, she wouldn't answer the question. She just defaults to silence or deflection. Hyun brought up the most important question though, what would Josh do? Her face tells the story, and so does Kimmy's reaction. Thinking of Meyer and what he chose to do at Hyun's revelation. And yes, Josh, you're in trouble. You're in trouble because your fantasy that has you masturbating in your car is fabricated on a bed, no a mountain, of lies and your demon wife (glad he at least admits that's what she is) just told her friend "everything" (HA!, as if she even got close to that) that's happened is all your fault. Didn't once admit any of her kinks or her decisions made that led up to this. Only sort of admitted she's had sex with Devlin in a roundabout way to ensure Hyun isn't judgemental and is supportive as possible. No, Josh, "we're" not in trouble. YOU'RE in trouble. I wonder how Josh reacts when the illusion is finally shattered?
L_S87
2023-09-14 11:26:08 +0000 UTCLike the other two have said no clue where this actually going. Would have actually liked to see this story stay a cheating wife story a la the Affair series by Andrea Martin that came out this year, but the cat is out of the bag so now I’m hoping for a quick acceptance from Josh of being a cuck and then a few books of Kimmy riding Devlin’s dick all over the Toronto Metro area (including sharing Devlin with Hyun at least once in Hyun’s apartment to make Josh’s vision here true, and maybe one visit to Cayman with Just Devlin and Josh can be on the phone listening to Devlin and Kimmy fuck while they degrade him.) But I don’t think this is actually what will happen.
Chinookfan72
2023-09-14 05:03:56 +0000 UTCI feel like we're getting closer to our destination. I just have no clue where that is.
Wess
2023-09-14 04:15:51 +0000 UTCStill don’t know where this is going.
Tracey52
2023-09-14 03:25:57 +0000 UTC
