Embracing Ellie: Chapter 1
Added 2024-09-10 22:00:09 +0000 UTCTime for something fun and much lighter. "Devil in the Waters is pretty dark and stifling, and even though we're so close to the end, its time to spruce this place up a little with a fun hotwife kinky vacation book (DITW chapter incoming, too)
Here's the cover:
And the blurb:

In search of adventure, passion sparks in unexpected ways
Daniel and Elena, a married couple from California, embark on a journey to New Zealand, hoping to break free from the monotony of their everyday lives. Their quest for excitement takes a wild turn when they meet Hemi Armstrong, a charismatic and rugged former rugby player turned tour guide.
As they explore the breathtaking landscapes, Daniel sees the electric chemistry between Elena and Hemi. With their history as high-school sweethearts, Daniel gets an unusual thrill thinking of pushing boundaries. He challenges Elena to embrace the adventure fully: flirt with her crush Hemi and see where it leads.
What begins as a playful dare ignites deeper feelings, testing the limits of their marriage and the meaning of love and desire. Will Elena seize the moment and discover new passion with Hemi? And what’s Daniel going to learn about himself if she does?
Join Daniel, Elena, and Hemi in this spicy hotwife romance that explores the exhilarating twists of polyamory and the journey to redefine what adventure truly means.
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Chapter 1
A sun-sparkling serpent wound through the valley below, aquamarine against evergreen. Cold wind whipped her cheeks. A wet and frosty phantom hand caressed her viscera, and its icy touch had her breath held in a chest-expanding gulp. Her heart pounded; butterflies flew up from the ol’ tum-tum, and there was just no fucking way she could ever take the next step.
Elena stood over 600 feet above the Kawarau River, six-thousand miles from hometown San Diego, a warm and comparatively safe spot that a lot of people all over the world liked to travel to for their own vacation. But here she was, trembling legs supporting her trembling weight, far from home, in snow-cap peaked New Zealand, wind-whipped and petrified, about to dive headlong into certain death.
Daniel spoke beside her, voice raised for her to hear but trying to exclude the operator behind her, the guy who’d strapped the harness on her—a little tight between the legs there, friend. “Come on, Ellie. You can do this.”
She shook her head, panic beginning to rake nails down her throat. “I, uh, I can’t. I can’t. What if the cord snaps, Daniel? What if I fall wrong? I mean, I mean, I don’t want to die on the first day of vacation. Right? Maybe—”
“You’re gonna bounce right back up,” Daniel said, and batted the helmet she wore. Fat lotta good the helmet was going to do, rocketing headfirst into the earth at a hundred miles an hour. Now Daniel said, “Remember that time you had to present the Hilltop Waterway project to the city council? You remember that shit? This can’t be worse than that, Ellie. This is a piece of cake. Look down there. What do you see?”
“Certain death,” she said, and the operator behind her chuckled. She shot him a look. Stupid suntanned young guy, probably got a kick out of all these American girls shitting their panties before he shoved them off the platform.
“You got this,” Daniel said. “Ain’t nobody in this world I’d say could face this challenge better than you, Ellie. You gonna show New Zealand what the Torres’s are made of?”
“We’re made of soft stuff that explodes on impact, Daniel! Do you hear yourself?”
Daniel laughed now, and it made her mad. Her husband wasn’t even going to jump. Standing with her, offering these empty words of encouragement, and the guy wasn’t even going to jump. I don’t want to do that, he says. She said they could do a tandem jump, and Daniel goes Bungee’s your thing, El.
Daniel—as if reading her thoughts—whispered near her ear, “You were the one who wanted to do this. So let’s see you do it, babe. I know you got that tiger in you.”
God. The Hilltop Waterway project. The presentation in front of the mayor and the governor. Like about a thousand citizens. Local news was there. Somebody from CNN. The pressure that day had felt like a bungee cord pulling her into an uncertain abyss, yet she had emerged triumphant. “This is different,” she mumbled, her gaze fixed on the dizzying drop. Yeah, Ellie-baby, this cord’s gonna pull you up.
But is it?
“Is it? You’re still taking a leap—just a different kind.” Danny nudged her playfully. Given the towering height and her proximity to the edge and certain death, the nudge made that space between her anus and vagina do a funny somersault. Her toes scrunched on the beds of her hiking shoes. “And I’ll be right there with you,” Daniel said, “cheering you on.”
She sighed a long, heavy breath. Why had she ever wanted to do this? It seemed like such a good idea, sitting on the couch at home with Daniel and Pepito, their little Pomeranian, and watching Amazing Race.
Daniel offered more encouragement, getting his shoulder against hers and pointing out over the edge. “You’re gonna go zip . . . down-down-down, then yoink, right back up to me. . . . You’ve always wanted to do this, Ellie. Now focus.” With that, he put his forehead against the helmet’s visor, his blue eyes looking into hers.
She’d been with Daniel since high school. Prom King and Queen of Sweetwater High, Class of ’12. Daniel Torres was tall, dark, and handsome. Smart and funny. And all hers. And when times were at their toughest, there had always been this one man who would have her back and bolster her courage, tell her she could do the things no one see thought she could do. Sometimes even herself.
She and Daniel and the young operator were inside a cable car, suspended high—so crazy high—above the Kawarau River, a half-hour drive outside Queenstown. The sun shone warm, a bright glow bathing the landscape on this cool and clear April day. A perfectly exhilarating adventure setting: the rushing river and jagged mountains; the awesome otherworldly scale of it all.
The guide said, “I send about thirty people off here every day, and I swear to god, I haven’t lost a single one.”
“Yeah, but maybe this is just your first week here,” Ellie said, cold wind nipping her cheeks, “or maybe you find them, but you find them splatted down below on the riverbanks.”
Even Daniel laughed at that one. “Ellie-baby, you’re in good hands,” Daniel said, and the guide said, “Thank you, sir.” Daniel and the guide bumped fists. She rolled her eyes.
185 yards below, the river rushed by. If the cord snapped, she would hit that water at a speed that would make it like hitting concrete. What kind of idiot steps off a perfectly safe metal cable-car so they can dive bomb into the afterlife?
It’s not idiocy. It’s about resolve. It’s about adventure.
The cord won’t snap. Those are the whispers from the scariest part of your past. Don’t you dare listen to them.
Daniel was right.
The sun glinted off the river, and she swallowed hard, now ignoring the knot of fear tightening in her stomach. Elena pressed her lips together, biting back the doubt that threatened to consume her. “This is so crazy…”
“Trust me, Ellie. This is about embracing the moment.” Danny stepped closer, eyes locking onto hers. “You’ll feel so alive afterward. Just think about that.”
A moment passed, Daniel’s promising words slipping over her like a warm blanket. She drew in a deep breath, envisioning the rush of wind, the fleeting sensation of freedom . . . And liking it.
“Okay,” she finally said, her voice a whisper.
“Okay?” Daniel beamed now, excitement radiating off him.
“Yeah. I’m gonna do it. Of course I’m gonna do it. Right?”
“Let’s go, tiger.” Daniel’s hand rested on her lower back, guiding her once more to the edge, each step closer amplifying her heartbeat’s roar. The incredible view bloomed beneath her—a breathtaking panorama that would snatch away the breath of even the steeliest world explorer. The ground felt miles away, and her palms grew clammy. Her knees shook. Her stomach went light and butterflies flittered.
“Ready?” Daniel asked, his voice steady.
Elena nodded, though uncertainty still lingered. She focused on Daniel’s encouraging smile, the way his eyes sparkled with excitement. This was it. She took a deep breath, preparing to leap into the unknown…
Then she stepped forward into the yawning void.
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Two hours ago they’d checked into the chalet at the Blanket Bay Estate, just outside Queenstown. Elena had stood on their luxury lodge’s balcony, admiring the view. He’d admired Ellie.
Lush green hills rolled toward the horizon. Snow-rimmed mountains stood sentinel against a cobalt sky. Sunlight shone on Lake Wakapitu. The air was crisp—a refreshing change from a California springtime heat. Elena was a warm slice, an amber slash against the alpine landscape beyond. Tall, lean, suntanned; her wavy chestnut hair spilled down her back in lustrous curls.
Danny had joined her, leaning against the railing, slinking an arm around his wife’s shoulders, drawing her close. “Can you believe we’re finally here?” This land so far from home was Elena’s adventure dream; and the trip cost a fortune, but they were young and in love, and babies were on the docket, maybe within the next four years. Claiming adventure was now or never.
Ellie’s eyes stayed on the view. “It’s surreal. Like we stepped into a postcard.”
“Exactly.” He’d glanced back at the mountains, then focused on her. “Or Lord of the Rings. We should get out there. There’s so much to see and we’re here for a reason.”
“We will. We just got off the plane, Danny. What did you have in mind?”
“I think we should get in the car, go out for a toot and see what kind of trouble we can get ourselves into.”
“We can if you want,” she’d said. “You really want to? We’re barely unpacked.”
“We’re on California time. We slept on the plane. Aren’t you itching for adventure?”
Ellie had frowned, had studied him. He was engaging in the wooden language, she called it, words that meant something else. She was onto him. He was so bad at deception. She’d said, “What are you up to?”
He’d put up his hands, innocent as could be. “Time’s a tickin’. Let’s make the most of every second we’re here.”
God, and there it had been again. Why did everything he say sound so contrived?
Because you are up to something, my man. And Ellie can see right through you. He’d smiled. It had been a cheap smile. Ellie’s frown had deepened.
But then the frown relaxed, and she’d returned to her sweet self, easing against the balcony, wind tossing her hair. “What’s the surprise?”
He’d shrugged, acting like he’d had no idea what she’d meant. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
Then she’d shook her head, eyes narrowing, smile staying, putting a dimple in one magic cheek.
He’d said, “You don’t know how beautiful you look right now.”
She’d batted his shoulder. “Don’t sweet talk me, Diablo. Tell me what you’re up to.”
“I’m not up to anything,” he said, aloof, slipping his hands into jeans pockets and strolling back into their chalet. Ellie had followed. He’d whistled even, turning up his face and liking the acoustics in their high-ceiling chalet with the chunky wooden beams holding up the peaked roof.
“We should unpack,” Ellie had said.
He’d said, “Yup, we should get right on that,” Ellie still on his heels.
He’d bolted then, and Ellie laughed, her footsteps smacking behind him as she gave chase. Out the heavy front door to the gravel drive, sprinting to their rental Land Rover.
He beat her to the door, and opened it for her, all calm now, like there had been no race at all. He’d gestured inside the cabin, saying, “Ladies first.”
She thumbed to her chest. “You want me to drive?”
“Fuck,” he’d said, looking into the Land Rover now, the driver seat on the wrong side.
She’d taken the door from him and gestured inside herself, calling him, “My lady.”
He’d driven them from the estate into Queenstown, Ellie pointing out all the shops she’d want to check out, then they were headed out of Queenstown on the narrow highway, out among the craggy foothills, the mountains in the distance but still looming close. Then they’d come to the bridge, and he’d slowed and pulled off a side road and down a steep hill into a parking lot. With luck, they’d passed no signs giving away his pre-planned surprise.
He’d nosed into a parking spot, the bridge spread out before the windshield.
Ellie had ducked down to look higher up, pointing out to him the long cable that spread between the rocky foothills, a cable car hanging in the middle, its door open, people gathered in the doorway. “Look at that cable car,” she’d said, more to herself than to him.
Just then someone fell from the open door, plummeting earthward with their hands outstretched. Ellie had gasped and covered her mouth. The person went straight down behind a line of trees where they disappeared. A few seconds later, they appeared again, floating weightless for a moment before they went down again, the bungee coiling in the air like it was weightless. A moment later the jumper’s scream of joy reached them.
Ellie had uncovered her mouth, looking his way and scowling, saying, “What are those cable cars up there, Daniel?”
He’d smiled broadly. “We’re gonna start this vacation off with a bang, Ellie, my girl.”
He could never in a hundred years have guessed how Elena’s great leap forward would turn out.
Comments
"The wife in that series is a real piece of work and makes Kimmy look like a saint". Couldn't agree more, Andrew.
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-25 12:15:26 +0000 UTCYeah, I want it on my kindle though!
Chris K
2024-09-15 08:56:23 +0000 UTCObsessed is on KT's Ream page. It's a series about the Bull's POV. I subscribed read all the content and cancelled. Another great KT series that doesn't get enough love is the Cayman Proxy. The wife in that series is a real piece of work and makes Kimmy look like a saint. It also ended for the time being in a pivotal place similar to Reza. But for the most part was pretty good.
Andrew Mellein
2024-09-14 23:23:43 +0000 UTCAndrew. It's for sale on Smashwords. As far as the Obsessed series, I can't find that anywhere. I hope she puts that up somewhere...
Chris K
2024-09-14 20:37:45 +0000 UTCDo you still have Reza in your kindle or is it gone? I wonder how KT is going to write Reza since it’s banned on Amazon and would generate not as much revenue for her. I personally think Reza is KT’s current darkest work more so than DIW! It’s also my favorite! I love the claustrophobic apartment setting! It’s so great. Personally me I am not that big a fan on Summer Swing maybe it’s because I have a short attention span but I get all the couples confused with each other. I like it more when KT focuses on one couple and a bull. Then lets the havoc begin🤣🤣🤣
Andrew Mellein
2024-09-14 14:52:43 +0000 UTCJust finished "Embracing Ellie CH1" nice beginning.
RCH
2024-09-13 19:35:28 +0000 UTCWow, another who is worried about Jonny's cage! I thought I was the only one. I don't want to discourage KT from writing in anyway. I haven't had time to look at this new story yet but I'm sure it well done. I'm wondering what KT need to get re-motivated on Reza? I'm assuming the whole Amazon debacle was very disheartening KT. I was looking over my Amazon content and I have 6 Reza Landlord books. The pages are gone but they are still readable. What was the reading order and are there more than 6?
RCH
2024-09-13 17:50:20 +0000 UTCI am certainly grateful to KT for consistently producing such high-quality work in this genre. We can rest assured that you will make the most appropriate choices in your writing list, continuing to surprise us while keeping your creative gears turning and your bills paid of course.
Z
2024-09-12 17:46:06 +0000 UTCReassuring to have such an inclusive list... was a bit 'mosqueado' about Cayman Proxy! Also still haven't read the second Obsessed! Plenty to look forward to... not the least of which being "Embracing Ellie" by the looks of it! Thanks!
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-12 17:10:55 +0000 UTCNo, just one. Unfortunately
Bill H.
2024-09-12 17:02:03 +0000 UTCNope. The unfinished series will still go as planned. DITW is almost finished, then one more book of Summer Swap, then the last Reza, then Separate Schools, Six Weeks, Keely, Cayman Proxy, and Obsessed. I need to write a few books like Embracing Ellie in order to appeal to the Amazon customers and to pay my bills. I'm skipping romance books for a little while.
KT Morrison
2024-09-12 14:24:01 +0000 UTCGoddamn bro two?😭 Did karma get at all of four of them?💀
Aphorim
2024-09-12 09:36:06 +0000 UTCI suppose we'll find out shortly!!
Chris K
2024-09-12 00:02:40 +0000 UTCIf she’s trying to break up Josh & Kimmy, yeah she does.
Bill H.
2024-09-11 23:38:04 +0000 UTCDoes Hyun go in that piece of shit category? Lol
Chris K
2024-09-11 23:36:16 +0000 UTCNice, KT! But I’m worried about Jonny. That cage is getting tighter and tighter. Will he make it to next weekend so he can enjoy Charlie again? I have a feeling Reza is going to pull some shit like he did on unlocking day. Are Reza and Tate ever going to get their comeuppance? Reza is a villain whom I want to see humiliated and defeated. In my opinion, he’s worse than Devlin (DITW) and Tyler (Learning Lessons) combined—pure evil. Tate is a piece of shit. Anyone who goes after another man’s wife earns the title of a piece of shit. I have first-hand experience with this, having lost two wives to men very similar to Tate. Charlie seems to have figured him out, but… Is Tate going to take another try at wooing Charlie away from Jonny? And will it work? I don’t get the feeling she would leave Jonny for Tate, but I’m usually wrong. And what about Shulamit? Is she really in Italy? And is she going to play a more significant role in all this? If she were to flirt even a little with Jonny, Charlie would go crazy.
Bill H.
2024-09-11 21:49:19 +0000 UTC"Her heart pounded; butterflies flew up from the ol’ tum-tum, and there was just no fucking way she could ever take the next step." Tight focus, fluttery playful metaphorical euphemism, vulgar taboo busting evocative equivocation... all in one brief sparkling sentence! What you said, Tracey! KT's still got the moxie!
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-11 15:25:09 +0000 UTCMe too! Still SS will make a pleasant pallet cleanser before the more seamy side of Jonny and Charlie's Armenian business and pleasure criminal detention activities take centre stage once again... Delay only sharpens the jaded appetite.
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-11 14:58:23 +0000 UTCI like the first scene as an analogy to the story. Only KT can start a story this well.
Tracey52
2024-09-11 12:58:56 +0000 UTCIt’s all about sticking your head up your mates arse. Should have gone with Australian rules football (AFL ) KT.
Tracey52
2024-09-11 12:56:46 +0000 UTCI want to see the return of Landlord myself.
Andrew Mellein
2024-09-11 12:45:43 +0000 UTCCan't wait for things to kick off in this one! Elena looks like a girl Sara I knew 'well' in high school! Lol. Should be fun!
Chris K
2024-09-11 11:50:40 +0000 UTCSo Landlord is postponed?
John
2024-09-11 04:13:18 +0000 UTCYea, the Haka! I do love it. I was a big fan of the movie "Once Were Warriors" way back when.
KT Morrison
2024-09-11 02:58:17 +0000 UTCEllie looks fetching! I played rugby for many years. The club brought in a Kiwi coach who talked me out of retirement and got the best out of me.
Steve McCarty
2024-09-11 02:05:44 +0000 UTCGreat cover!
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-11 00:47:34 +0000 UTCI wish...
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-11 00:19:12 +0000 UTCI think that happens to everyone... it's like your brain thinks "Haven't I already done this!" and stubbornly does an inattentive slip up on purpose. Like a Freudian slip without the coy blush!
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-11 00:07:51 +0000 UTCHa! I really don't know much about rugby either, other than some of the basics. It's one of my sports blindspots. I've tried but I just really can't understand a lot of the strategy or rules. But I do know New Zealand is good, their national team is nicknamed the All-Blacks, and they do the Maori dance before the match.
JL23
2024-09-11 00:01:20 +0000 UTCAt last... as I was making notes for... The Quiet Shade of Verdant Groves... I noted with cautious qualified happiness that the glitch has finally gone. It was a royal pain in the bum to visualise all the posts arsy-versy. It appears I can now let loose a sigh of relief 'sin ser gafe'... without being a jinx!
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-10 23:43:46 +0000 UTCThis guy Hemi played for The Highlanders. He's 90% Irish-Scottish and maybe 10% Maori. I knew nothing about NZ rugby last week, ha ha.
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 23:31:01 +0000 UTC@JL23 Imagine hearing about a half decent story where a marriage falls apart and the wife performs multiple evil and sexual betrayals, and then they show you the paperback and it's as many pages as The Lord of the Rings trilogy + The Hobbit! I'm so lucky to have the Patreon support.
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 23:29:15 +0000 UTCThey shall!
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 23:24:48 +0000 UTCWow, and I read through that twice and also ran it through Pro Writing Aid, ha ha--thanks!
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 23:24:20 +0000 UTCMournful! That's the perfect word. I was looking for that word, ha ha. I like doing dark and I like doing funny too. I like doing both the best! There were such funny parts to Pete and Jess and Tyler. That made the hard parts harder.
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 23:18:58 +0000 UTC"tell her she could do the things no one see thought she could do." Error... tell her she could do the things no one 'else'(?) thought she could do. "Those are the whispers from the scariest part of your past."
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-10 23:18:31 +0000 UTCSuch great prose, ha ha!
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 23:15:29 +0000 UTCThanks for the responses KT. I loved High Stakes Sadie. It has enough angst and intrigue to keep you wondering and wound up, but ended wonderfully and happily. Because you're right, even with things (seemingly) headed in a positive direction for Josh and Kimmy, it's still rather dark and mournful, with how much stands between them. Why I like SS so much. It's light and allows you to flex your humorous writing. Something you're very good at, even if it's not your "normal" thing.
L_S87
2024-09-10 23:09:17 +0000 UTCOff to a good start, already have a feel for the characters, a unique tingle tugging at their backstory and a precocious turgid something pressing urgently against the diaphragm of the full colour present... The other side of the world in the crisp aired highland widescreen landscape of Middle Earth. Ellie escorted to the brink, feeling Daniel withdrawing his reassuring hand.
Bill F Protagoras
2024-09-10 23:02:40 +0000 UTCYeah, unfortunately people don't have the attention spans to keep up with a multi book story. I guess it's understandable, each book you probably lose a certain percentage who want the immediate resolution until you get to a point where you've lost too many. I guess we're impatient for the ending too lol. Can't wait to see how DITW ends, and I'm also ready to move on to other stories, whether new or old. This one is off to a good start...New Zealand is another place on my bucket list, I'll live vicariously through the story. And who can resist the charms of a former All-Blacks player.
JL23
2024-09-10 22:56:48 +0000 UTCMe, too!
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 22:56:18 +0000 UTCI love SS. Looking forward to it coming back.
Kat
2024-09-10 22:51:14 +0000 UTCOmg, Hyun! 😱
Kat
2024-09-10 22:50:42 +0000 UTCSS will start again as soon as DITW is shortly finished!
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 22:48:36 +0000 UTCNo, it's not a new series. You're absolutely right--I have to finish the ones still unfinished first. This will be a standalone novel; a potboiler, if you will. Keep the bill collectors at bay. It'll be fun and high quality with usual KT-isms; think High Stakes Sadie. I love writing long series, but I couldn't do that without the Patreon support! The later books don't sell well at all, unfortunately.
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 22:47:53 +0000 UTCExciting new premise, already loving the new characters, suggesting the playfulness that KT characters need. Very cool, no expectations, but hoping the words come quickly.
JamesIsAsleep
2024-09-10 22:43:00 +0000 UTCMaybe 5 or 6 or so. Maybe more. Depends how chatty Kimmy and Josh and Hyun get!
KT Morrison
2024-09-10 22:40:36 +0000 UTCI'm more interested if it's a start of a new series. A stand alone is fine, but SS needs to be finished, along with a host of other things.
L_S87
2024-09-10 22:24:12 +0000 UTCIs this the start of a new book? How many chapter of Devil in the Waters left? It feels like the end is near as most of everything has been resolved.
Andrew Mellein
2024-09-10 22:06:39 +0000 UTC