[ ZhongChizhu ] "Not just a show" (part 1/3)
Added 2022-05-27 16:44:04 +0000 UTC๐ถ๐ง๐
"Not just a show" โ PART 1
โ PART 2
I'm so ฬถnฬถeฬถrฬถvฬถoฬถuฬถsฬถ excited to finally show you the first part of the ZhongChizhu comic!! I've been working on this the whole month to make it the best I could (the husbands deserves the highest treatment). I was super enthusiast to be working on a new long comic since the December one and happy of seeing the improvements since thenโ!
I hope you enjoyed it!! โจ
Last but not least, A GALACTIC THANK YOU TO LEADEN MYR who beta read the comic and suggested variations to the dialogues which made it so much better!! Their attention to words and phrasing is fantastic and I'm so grateful for their contribution ๐
Comments
Omg I love everything about this, especially Baizhu's snake fangs and Zhongli's geo markings
LavastormSW
2022-07-21 16:51:13 +0000 UTCAaaah Jay your comments are always so nice! You said you kept re-reading the comic, and so I did with this essay haha ๐๐๐ Thanks for noticing all the little details here and there! And yep, Baizhu bit the brat hehe As for wedding rings: Baizhu and Zhongli are married, but the rings don't show in these panels because they're on the left hand and when their right hands show it's in a position which doesn't show the rings haha buuut the new hc is that Baizhu refuses to marry Childe until he'll stop being so reckless in fights (will it ever happen? lmao), so no ring for him (yet?) ๐
KiraShion
2022-05-29 19:38:23 +0000 UTCI. HAVE NO WORDS i am clutching my chest this is amazing thank you ๐โค๏ธโ๐ฅ
Moss
2022-05-29 07:31:02 +0000 UTCCan I first and foremost say something not related to this delicious work of art? Iโm so glad you opened this Patreon. I feel like youโve blossomed in confidence, in your art, in so many aspects and itโs been fun to see the journey so far. I know you were nervous/excited (Nervacited. An MLP reference. Go me) about sharing this but Iโm so glad youโve done it. I never thought of the dynamic of this ship before you shared them the first time and now I love them so very much. Each character is so beautifully unique on their own, and together, it's like an incredible explosion of fireworks. Okay here we go. Iโm in love with the way you portray Baizhu. The cock ring (WITH THE GEO SYMBOL I SEE THAT), the nipple piercings, the belly one, the ankles, all the body jewelry is *Chefโs kiss*. The forked tongue, the fangies, the look of blissful expression, the need so clearly in his voice and expression. This is someone who knows what he wants and isnโt afraid to ask for it (Greedy too. Good for him. I donโt blame him one bit. Who wouldnโt want to be in his place?) And God if he doesnโt look so beautifully done by his lovers. Ajax is a buffet of delightful cuisine as well (I swear Iโm not hungry; well for food anyway). I love the scars and the freckles you give him (And is it my imagination or does he have puncture wound/bites in his neck?). Iโm also imagining the nipple piercings you always give him because I like that image in my brain too. The way he holds on to Baizhu as he fucks him (Who wouldnโt want to be in his place?). Heโs experienced with Baizhuโs pleasure and enjoys indulging them both, ESPECIALLY if it means putting on a show for their Zhongli. And Zhongli. I LOVE, and I mean LOVE, your Zhongli (Especially love how you give him the Geo arms and dick). Iโve seen the different ships youโve put him in and Iโve loved them all. And I know this sounds sappy (Because fictional character), but I feel like he blooms the most in the art youโve done of him with Childe or Baizhu or both. The love he has for his lovers is so damn evident and Iโm glad to be a witness. Iโd lovingly enjoy the show heโs getting but Iโd want to be involved too (Who wouldnโt want to be in his place? Yes I said that about all three. Itโs not my fault. I envy them all in the best way lmao). I also love the fact that Childe still has pants and Zhongli is almost completely dressed still. That makes everything even sexier. Hang in there, Baizhu. I think you can manage (We know he can. But itโs fun to hear him struggle). Seriously, I looked at the comic and reread it like eighty times so far. Iโm going to go for like 100 by the end of the night and Iโm excited to see the next part (But take your time of course. Itโs going to be so damn fantastic. Also, I was curious (And you probably have a reason) as to why there werenโt wedding bands in this one. Okay I think Iโve commented long enough again lol. Thank you for always giving us such gourmet meals every time. You really spoil us too much.
Jennoasis
2022-05-29 04:43:55 +0000 UTCKIRA I CAN'T WITH THIS AHHH Spoil him more though, Baizhu deserves it โฅwโฅ Get you a man that holds you and looks at you like Ajax be looking and holding Bai-Bai
Antha Itasu
2022-05-28 10:42:51 +0000 UTCI could name a million things I love about this but of all things the one standing out to me at the moment is how cute Ajax looks in the panel where he's saying "you've been spoiling him too much." Cute, messy mop of hair, gorgeous blue eye, freckles spattered everywhere, smirk on his face, possessive full-body grip...that's the good shit right there.
Aewin
2022-05-28 01:51:51 +0000 UTCThank you so much!! And it's been fun to do, finally pouring all my love for them in a long and detailed project aaah ๐งก๐๐
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:19:15 +0000 UTCAnd I'll feed you more!! ๐๐๐๐ They're simply perfecttt ooh gods ๐ฉ๐ฆ
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:17:54 +0000 UTCAnd I can't wait to show youuu!! I'm so close to finishing part 2 ๐ค๐๐
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:16:34 +0000 UTCYESSS Baizhu marked Childe with a bite and Zhongli gave Zhuzhu a Geo infused cock ring, it gotta be clear they belong to each others ๐๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฆ
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:15:45 +0000 UTCWe love slutty Baizhu, and honestly how could he not be with partners like โจthemโจ ๐๐๐๐ฆ
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:13:32 +0000 UTCOoh Myr you're so precious! Lovely and so helpful, I'll never thank you enough ๐๐๐
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:13:19 +0000 UTCHehe a cock ring with that symbol means somebody's a bit possessive huh Mr. Zhongli? ๐๐๐
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:10:15 +0000 UTCKIRA THIS IS SO PRETTY AND SO HOT HE IS SO PAMPERED I LOVE IT
falling_raine
2022-05-27 21:58:22 +0000 UTCDouble penetration is sooooo good idea, I can't wait for other parts. You did super great job with this one!
Tsuyami
2022-05-27 21:38:03 +0000 UTCThis is the best! I love it๐ญ๐
Bunny
2022-05-27 20:08:54 +0000 UTCIM DECEASED, I NEED MORE. They just look so fucking goooodddd
Gretchen Fรคrgrik
2022-05-27 17:52:15 +0000 UTCThis is so delicious ๐ I can't wait for the whole thing! ๐ค๐คค
jakthegreenfox
2022-05-27 17:33:33 +0000 UTCThe expressions and marks (freckles, bite marks, zhongli skin) are so beautiful
Unpopular_Onion
2022-05-27 17:31:54 +0000 UTCdkffkgds I love this so much ๐ฅต๐ฅต๐ฅต and the fang marks on childe, aaaaaah!!!
Keiki
2022-05-27 17:26:56 +0000 UTCTHIS IS SO GOOD OMG
Ray Veski
2022-05-27 17:13:21 +0000 UTCHELLOOOOO YEEESS PLEASEEEE SERVE THAT PRETTY BOY WHAT HE DESERVES โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
RexMirax
2022-05-27 16:54:48 +0000 UTCAgdkfkgkkeksshdfsk โคโคโคโคโคโค it's so good and I love them so much!!! Thanks to you, dearest Kira, you're the best โจโจ
Mir Ventura
2022-05-27 16:49:05 +0000 UTC"And yet you asked for it darling" Ahhhhhh
James Dibble
2022-05-27 16:48:17 +0000 UTCthe geo symbol on baizhu's cock ring!! ๐๐ baizhu is such an insatiable slut, I love it!!
MiQuerida
2022-05-27 16:46:19 +0000 UTC
