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Hermione Granger and the Potion of Perilous Pleasure Chapter 26 (The Flesh Is Merciful)

Note: Usually, I'm not one to pay much attention to likes. If you like the chapter, you can like it; it's up to you. But the reason why I'm writing this is because the previous chapter of this story had 15 likes, and this one has 4 likes.

Now I'm not saying you should like a Chapter even if you didn't like what you read. Only drop a like if you enjoyed what you read.

But I feel like I must have made a big mistake with this chapter and I want to make it better.

So I just want to know your thoughts on this chapter and story as a whole in the comments, and what I am doing right and wrong, and what I should do to make it better. I appreciate every comment, and you can be as critical as you want.

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Comments

I love this… More rough side of Hermione

Remi

Love the chapter. I like how Hermione's darkening psyche translates into her sex life. Wonder if anyone will pull her out of it or she'll continue to spiral.

Cthonic

Curious to see which of her partners will stay with Hermione no matter how dark she gets or that wake her up so she doesn’t fall to down the dark hole. But also I can’t wait for when Bellatrix and Narcissa are mixed in.

Ivy


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