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Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 5

This week, our featured pieces are How Did They Get Together and My Immortal (Chapters 5&6). I just want to live!

Submit fan fiction for us to read! Just click this link ► https://forms.gle/b3ig5PEdagX9AxPdA

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Why specifically red blood when everything else is just blood? Is she drinking a vampire knockoff of Red Bull? If so, that's some okay-ish world-building.

Obsydian Black

Dan's dead expression after he says "wait, Goofy and Pete?" is priceless.

Nickerdoodle

That part had me in stitches

Skippy the Alien

She's too busy freaking out about transgender people

Skippy the Alien

17 minutes in or so Ebony apparently knows what a heartboner is. good for her.

Anonymous201K

the way i just lost it when they realized "the dog" and "the cat" meant Goofy and Pete respectively like 9 minutes in

Proudwing

Which is wild to label it that because it literally talks about suicide and self harm

Aidan

Hot tip: Do not eat while watching these. You might very nearly die.

James

"calmly"

Shaun Rutherford

Incredible episode, as always. I love this version of Dumbledore who calls students "motherfuckers"

Connor Strader

You should. You would be the bravest person I know

Emma Waters

The author saying that the six year old killed herself is, I’m sorry, so fucking funny because that character straight up isn’t even in a Goofy movie. She literally only shows up in the 90s show Goof Troop. The author did not have to address her.

Emma Waters

Oh.....that sounds prime.

Kenneth D. Mohr

Thinking the same

Jack Tereno

K+ is essentially the equivalent of PG in the fanfiction.net rating system.

Sidney Hackney

Arin’s Pete voice kinda sounds like his Homer Simpson voice

Dusty

you know ive never considered the similarities between dan and arin and goofy and pete but now that i have my like will never be the same lmao

kay

Emeny’s version certainly had a ring of authenticity to it as I do recall the first draft and not much was altered. She is a smart one. I love that for her. ♥️

Bananas

its crazy that My Immortal continues to make an impact on my life 10 years after I first read it.

Ray Ostempowski

🤣🤣

Max Pierce

Mmmmayux

Kyah Faria

My name being Max is a curse sometimes.

Max Pierce

People pay a lot more for foot content and poetry

Kyah Faria

I love how Arin gave Pete the same voice he does for Gumshoe

Ari Wolf

1) Will it be doggy style, or is there even a kitty style? Something, barbed penis, something something. 2) My Immortal...I feel like there should always be an Afterward Author's Note just to bring us down easy.

Greg Shields

Ah yes, Count Chocoula. The perfect breakfast that a vampire can totally eat.

Jacob Tucker

I wonder what J.K. Rowling would think about this "My Immortal" fanfiction...

Doktor Vem

Ah, it was rated K for Kill yourself

Agent Tex

"It's not the depression that kills you, it's the sudden stop at the end." I mean...it's not entirely wrong.

Anonymous201K

Im a little disappointed the comments aren’t just full of fanfic suggestions. Such as ‘All fair in War and Love’. You guys should read that… sorry, I wasn’t sure where else to suggest fanfics for you to read.

Tark the Fark

Count chocula is a pretty funny brand of cereal for a *vampire* to decide to eat

Kody

I hope they read all of my immortal it sparks joy

Eanna

I’m tempted to suggest my own my little pony fanfiction I wrote in middle school LMFAO

Em Cowen

it's giving #nobetareaders #wedielikemen

Rachel Allwin

If I'm not hearing Arin read goofy x Pete smut next episode. I'm going on strike.

P.Viper

I'm not a bully but I think I wouldve been if I met the person who wrote my immortal

Hunter hall

right, the comments. 👉👉

8TheKat

Arin's Dan Castellaneta impression is on POINT

Alexandra Calvin

The Homer voice for Pete took me out

Paige Strong

Please continue the wildly irreverent Goofy/Pete one, I gotta know if Pete beats his depression before beating Goofy's meat

Buggy

Pistol ... The child toddler killed herself?

Thomas Garcia

I don't have a sample but my heart says a well rated Optimus Prime x Megatron would hit 😂

R W

Thank you lol I’m asking for my “uncle”, who keeps insisting that he’s a famous author and definitely real

The End of Time (AKA Theo the Minotaur)

I'm also asking this for a friend. Although a temp solution should be to send the link in the form of a google drive viewing only invite. Just some advice for you know, your friend.

Aurora lane

If someone were to write a fanfic, can they just copy-paste it into submission form entry section or does it need to be in the form of a link like the form says?

The End of Time (AKA Theo the Minotaur)

I live for these

Ricky Liedtke Jr.

Someone sells physically bound copies of My Immortal on EBay. Y’all should get it to show it off in the office.

TheMutantCreeper

I literally only subbed for my immortal and it was so worth it

Othnielia Purcell

Oh you bet your ASS I'm submitting something!

Turner Strait

The editing for this series really brings out Arin and Dans being playfully with each other but not to the extent of touchling each other. 10/10

Tyler

After watching internet historian read through my immortal I can practically recite the whole story along with Dan and i am cracking up waiting for him to get to certain lines

Nick C

Hi guys. Long time listener, first time commenter. Just a quick question, at the end of the video you were elucidating as to where one might be able to submit fan fiction for your consideration. I understand it is to be done in the comments. As this is so, you WILL read Half Life 2: Full Life Consequences. Yours emphatically, Patrick

Podge

I like the idea that his scar is gone as if he's been drawing it on

Nikolas

There is a Google form

Nikolas

THE GOOFY VOICE HAS ME SENT

Nikolas

The author of my immortal could've called him Vampotter. Missed opportunity smh 😔

Kailey Bosyk

Wait but where do I submit my fanfic? In the comments?

8TheKat

God damnit! How could you stop half way! I NEED to know if Goofy and Pete make passionate love! Also thank you for My immortal. Please read more.

Uncoolest_Evar

My Immortal is the cult classic of all time

Alyssa W

The subtitles during My Immortal just included almost the entire screen’s worth of “Ha ha’s” as Arin starts losing it when it says she spray painted her hair purple and when she is eating her cereal 🤣

Nyra

I was not ready for Count Chocula with blood for milk. Best part of any story ever

Namnoms

Another great way to intake it is dramatic readings with friends; I keep a copy on my phone at all times for just such occasions!

ThatBlondePerson

I love how the Count Chocula line got the biggest laugh from Arin.

Rennon the Shaved

I love that Arin and Dan have brought back “Let’s fucking go!” to be an unironic phrase.

ScrapperAlex

That's how you make a cat dog.

Dachande Wuffsteiger

I’m making banana bread while watching this! edit: i don’t want to eat this banana bread anymore. It has been tainted and I wish for gods sweet salvation in the second coming of christ.

Make-out Funeral

Tristana from league of legends jumpscare

Enrique Flores

What happened to the black flying Mercedes with 666 on the back??? Was it towed to the Hogwarts impound lot??? Dracos dad will be so pissed!!!!

Samuel Jones

i'd try watching it in-browser instead on your phone, i haven't had issues watching it that way on mobile

Steph Packard

These are amazing. Also, am I the only one having trouble with the patreon video player on mobile? It just keeps freezing and I need to restart the app.

Jon G

Arin took "Show Feet" seriously.

hostilecrayon

The author’s note pointing out that Dumbledore screamed because he had a headache (which will never matter again) is such a gift to the world.

Olof Rönn

I love the idea of goofy gradually getting infuriated trying to figure out how the daughter offed herself and getting nothing but cryptic answers

Thomas Rose

The link is in the video description. :)

GracefullyAutistic

Omg, that's so cool! My friend and I read this story five years ago on my old YouTube channel. I can't express how happy this made us lol.

Carmine

Ah, right, forgot about that(clearly). Thank you ^^

CSDX

Stock video search terms: "Dog"; "Two Dogs"; "Cat & Dog"; "Romantic couple in forest"

tin tanner

Are you someone's dad? Because if yes then he DEFINITELY will

Elles

Critic of the first story, though they have a deep knowledge of Goofy lore they had a gap of knowledge by not remembering that Slyvia actually married goofy at the end of the 2000 masterpiece An Extremely goofy Movie, really took me out of the story as a whole. 10/10 very hot would goon again

Quinn_Spooples

Love thinking about the impact of Dracula and vampire lore on our society, including that it led, in one way or another, to that breakfast order in all its glory

one-true-houselight

hating on, essentially

MJ Luna

So, remind me. What does it mean to be "flaming" in the context of the author's notes?

CSDX

Was super-distracted by the bit of crap in Dan's hair, but fab episode once again. Love these!

Merry Merrymead

It's not Goth!! It's Vamp and Vamp is lame!! Refer to the South Park episodes! Goth is cigarettes and black coffee.

Charlotte Parker

Hyuk hyuk they were ready to fuck

ToastiiGhostii

My daughter went down for a nap at the perfect time. I needed this today XD been waiting for them to get to 'Vampire'

Margarita Martinez

Missed opportunity: Harry should've called himself "Vampotter."

Keith Dieter

“Billy, what’s your favorite episode of Fan Fiction Story Time?” “The one where they talked about the link to submit fan fiction recommendations for A LOOONG TIME”.

Chris Busby

Arin will you kiss me

angy

I need one of these videos every week to keep me happy, healthy and sustained. 🥲

✨ hannah ✨

wait where are we supposed to submit fic? 🤔🤔🤔 super unclear instructions://

han moody

I've never read My Immortal before, and I'm determined to only experience it through the lads reading it to me. Please send more videos, my crops are dying and I need more regular sustainment.

Theenie

Ah, the plots thinnen!

Sarahmonster

Ah, the plots thinnen!

Sarahmonster

If they do not finish My Immortal, I will be so gosh done diddly sad

Nikki-John-Wicky

lol I commented too early. It did take em a minute haha

Tyler George

Love the stock footage of cats and dogs. Oddly weird tone over the fanfiction

Micaela Leon

I love that they didn’t realize Pete was a cat and they just assumed there was a pet in the room that spoke up every now and again 😂

Tyler George

This series made me want to read the entirety of My Immortal and I've never been so thankful for something in my life.

Scrub

Hell yeah. LFG guys

T-vis

A "visit" from Arin and Dan always makr my day oh so lovely

Nyx

This is absolutely everything to me, I'm so excited

Ashton Smith

Oh, yeah. It’s happening.

Casey.J

Do I immediately run when I see they're reading more My Immortal? Yes. Yes I do.

Melissa


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