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Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 7 - DOUBLE LENGTH!

We're making these longer and reading more chapters!!! This month it's more My Immortal and Sonic High School. Enjoy!

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Comments

the way Dan said “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not” fucking killed me

Bogost

Knuckles is fuck goes hard need that on a shirt

Lucas Llz

Thank god these are getting longer, worth every one of the dollars 🤘

Maddz

I was so confused what SBO in the captions meant until I realized later it was supposed to be Espio🤣

FuzzyOtterPaws

I guarantee you, as a former maladaptive fanfiction reader, My Immortal is genuine :')

Kale Buchanan

Yes I have, and sure, they may fade with time, but it’s not like they just go poof.

Frank DB

Stahp flamming preppz

Zimvadur

Uh, clearly, youve never had any scars

Zimvadur

Just submit it Ask your friend for the link

Zimvadur

Can someone please fucking animate this. Or can I just do it? (My immortal specifically lol)

Tohster

Knuckles IS a fuck.

ArcadianForest

"I may be a student, but I am also a Satanist!" - Hargrid

Connor Strader

Y'all are as high reading these as I am watching them

Nikolas

a: i thought draco was dead d: * genuine look of disrespect * ... no, wolfmort has him bondage. pay attention the level of investment on dan's level is supreme. step it the hell up, arin

alligator haze

Who’s gonna suggest that one mcr fanfic about Gerard being the presidents son and dating frank in a mental institution It was my friends favorite but that shit was wild afXD

Rin Kangamine

Sonic Highschool sounds like it was written by an 11 year old boy that has had a very bad upbringing

PillowDragon

I was having a smoke right when he said "Sonic thought knuckes was a fuck" and I almost coughed up a lung

Erryd Sho

I love a fan fiction so dedicated to the source material that they change almost everyone’s name and character designs. I keep having to remind myself that Bloody Mary Smith is Hermoine, Vampire is Harry, and now Diabolo is Ron? Also, scars aren’t something you just grow out of.

Frank DB

sounds like something a pozer prep would say :/

Persephone

No matter how many times I hear My Immortal, it never stops giving.

April

I'm so glad my immortal was made in a pre ai world so there is no doubt a human made it

Lesbionic babeyyy

Put some respect on the name of LilSoniq! Unless it's requested that you call them Lilknuckles.

Kyah Faria

Brandon, they're not all doing research for their fanfic expose like us. Some of them are just trying to have a good time laughing at ridiculous things.

Adam Morse

What a cool community. You've made me feel very welcome, and like I for sure want to continue to engage with you. Thanks everyone!

Brandon

Yikes.

maturepopcorn

You know what? Forget I said that. It sounds aggressive and I didn't mean it to. Thank you for telling me that they said that and then saying my name at the end for, I guess impact? Your writing style and communication is immaculate and helpful, and I love you and I'm in love with you. No further comment.

Brandon

Obviously you are attuned to very specific versions of sarcasm and satire, because my comment was obviously satirical. Sard.

Brandon

they said like an episode ago that it was satire. they know it's satire. but it's considered the greatest fanfiction of all time, and it's still hilarious, so they're reading it. They're aware, Brandon.

sard

Are we really pretending My Immortal is a real fan fic? There are a lot of them where you kind of can't tell how real it is, but this one is not hard to see. It's extremely satirical and intentional. I guess it's funny, but I like the one's that are genuine because that's why they are funny. KidSonic (Or whatever his name was) actually cared about Sonic getting laid. The integrity of this show is bankrupt, and it's probably why my life is so bad. Hopefully this comment will fix everything.

Brandon

stahp flamn da story u prepzz ᕙ⁠(⁠⇀⁠‸⁠↼⁠‶⁠)⁠ᕗ (get it?)

INCREDABAD

I won't soon forget the line "you poser muggle bitch!"

Scott Asche

The “I love her for her body” line caught me so off-guard, I just sat there with a blank face for a solid two seconds before I finally fully processed it and fucking cackled

maturepopcorn

Uncut AND longer?!? YES

Brittany T. Gilbert

My immortal is amazing- I've never been so hooked into a story like this before.

Everest

bless y’all for making these longer you don’t know how happy it makes me

Shane Hamilton

I hope this continues, it's very fun

Kristen Kindle

Love the longer episodes! Since they're only once a month feels more fun to watch

Isaac Harvent

I don't think it has a set date. Just once a month. Nothing could stop them from getting to the bottom of Sonic High School and My Immortal

Kyah Faria

It's been a full month since this video was released, are we ever gonna get another installment of this series or is it like dead forever from now on?

Doktor Vem

It didn’t seem to have a set schedule like “this day every month.” No need to be snarky

Mia

Is this a serious question? Its the patreon subscription. It's every month.

Kyah Faria

How often are these posted? I need to know what they think of the end of My Immortal

Mia

I 've watched you guys for like 10 years and joined just now for My Immortal. Love!

Amaya Schmitt

I want more of this :(

Dana L Wilson

Espeo going "oh" after being told you can date someone outside the one night of a high school prom makes him my new favorite character. Just a dumb jock with a heart of gold

Kyah Faria

God, I was eating while watching this, and I had to pause the video because I kept almost choking. 'Sonic thought Knuckles was a fuck.' "I am going to try for the football team." ... But he had a horn on his nose and that was good for attacking people in front of him. THIS TOOK ME OUT oh my god the juxtaposition of these bizarre sentences

Ruija

"No, volfmorph has him bondage, pay attention" is one of the greatest responses ever.

Munchman

This is banger! They're only getting better and better! Keep it up, you PREPZ!

sethfullyclean

I never thought I’d say this but I want to hear you read the goofy screwing 🪛 Pete

Ana Cristina

This has to be satire

Pixeldonkey95

Good to see arin showing feet.

Narvré

This would lose so much if anyone else was reading it aloud. Dan has a certain special something that really brings out the author's true spirit

Nathan James Yuhas

It's clearly a typo, like, the author meant to say "Tom Riddle" but effed up triumelephantly, lol

Nikki-John-Wicky

Wait are you shitting me no way that blue-coat-yellow-boot mfer shows up

Dakota Miller

"STOP IT NOW YOU HORNY SIMPLETONS!" needs to be a phrase I adopt into my life regularly XD

Xai

I don't know why but it makes me so mad that they keep calling MCR a goth band ☠ like blawg 😭 like "Omg yessss MCR is my fav goth band how'd you know 😍" I would die on the spot if someone said that to me

JOEY

I agree. Also when I was an edgy middle school teen for some reason my fanfics often involved the protagonist being upset with the handsome man and the man pursuing them to make amends, which My Immortal is FILLED with.

Aaron S

No volfemore has him bondage, pay attention 💀💀💀

Aaron S

exactly my thoughts! I added one to my cart.

Kayla

I thought SHS had surprisingly good grammar, so it struck me as a young native speaker who hadn’t worked out every grammar rule yet.

Kayla

They stopped right before my favorite part with “Snaketail” I’m living for this right now.

Kayla

The outfits in My Immortal would have been my dream clothes in middle school honestly. Lmao Also, congrats to Sonic for recovering from itchy balls!

Katie Bradley

This brings me so much joy.

Christopher Tice

FLOWERS FOR ALGERNON 😭😭

folxlore

So my theory on My Immortal is that it started out as a semi-sincere self insert fanfiction by some middle school girl. I say this because the attention to clothing and little "gothic" details is just so in depth that it doesn't feel like it was written by someone who wasn't into those sort of things. I was also a middle school girl around this time, and my (thankfully unpublished) self-insert Pirates of the Caribbean fanfics were about the same caliber as the early chapters of My Immortal. However, I think pretty quickly, the author realized that the worse they made their story, the more attention it would get. Thus they, and possibly a group of friends, worked to make the story get progressively worse and worse. I then think that the hate for the fanfiction spiraled a bit out of control, which is why the author suddenly stopped writing it and never returned to it.

Katy Messenger

Wait...so 'Lupin' (sp?) was *checks notes* chewing while watching 'Ebony' naked/dressed...and then the school "constipated" the camera...got it.

AirenMarie

Normally I can fall asleep to Grumps content in a comforting way. I think this time my body is just shutting down. I think 'Ebony' may just be a psychic vampire

Da_Wynz

I don't think they have yet :)

Sophie Ward

Got the membership so i can listen to these while i work. very worth it

Kristen Kindle

I need the end of that goofyxpete fiction. It wouldn't feel right reading it myself

Fluff W0lf

Honestly and truly, I wonder what the author of "My Immortal" is up to these days. 🤣

Kim Wetzel

The way Dan just accepts the insanity of My Immortal and keeps going even when questioned is immaculate

Mallory Curtin

Probably the best patreon exclusive. I need to know how the Goofy fic ends 😂

TheNonchalantNacho

I love "Dumbleydore"! it soulds like the shitty cartoon version! XD

Sky Milton

God I love these. I'm so glad I'm giving these idiots 10$ a month to listen to them read shitty fanfics.

Andrew Holyoak

idk what it is but I really love the way Dan says “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not 😏”

yankochick38

I'm so excited to listen to more! :-)

mars

Just my head cannon My immortal was definitely written my a horny, *edgy*, pre-teen. Sonic High school was written by another pre-teen to whom English wasn't their first language. Judging on all the butt and dick jokes, they're a boy.

Tawnee Rios

Aww, Arin left out the best part of Roger explaining the voice direction. After the voice director was like, "Perfect!" Roger went in that deep voice, "You gotta be fucking kidding me." Like, I don't mind the deeper voice acting, but him saying that was hilarious.

CSDX

There is no way the author of my immortal is not intentionally trying to make this as badly written as possible.

Andrew Salans

This is my second time watching this and it won't be the last

tizzer169

I have a small request, show feet

tizzer169

I can't wait for the grumps to read fan fiction that's been written about them

Anthony K

Arin said it. "I feel like My Immortal is gas-lighting me."

Nukin Futs

I feel like we've learned a lot about the author this week

Nick McKay

everytime a fan fiction story time is posted it makes my whole month.

Lucille Braun

Thank you for all you guys do, even when it’s silly funny stuff like this it’s just nice to feel your essence

Beef

Can we get more of "Sonic's Ultimate Harem"? That was some good stuff.

Michael Pirretti

Fangs you so much for do0bling the lngth of these vids (get it) ;3

Emma Mitchell

I live for this series. As long as I get My Immortal I'm happy 😭

Anthony Leeds

Read more My Immortal and you'll meet Tom Bombadil!

Nikki-John-Wicky

Wow.

Kyah Faria

I just have a small request, can Arin put those dogs away?

Keystroke

Arin havin’ the dogs out is the *real* Patreon content Also pleeeeease continue the Goofy & Pete story

Riley Johnson

triumelephantly 😭😭😭

enderman

If theres anything we can value in this crazy world, it's that Sonic's balls no longer itch

Sean

So thankful for story time, and for the extra length story time 😻

Zakary Xavier Lorrain

I still think it would be worth getting one of the fancy bound versions of my immortal

Brian G.

I will give anything for more extra length videos PLES

AnonFromHr

so glad for the longer episodes, but would love for a little lightning round of shorter ones

Justin

My Immortal: Join Us As We Dance Madly Upon the Lip of the Volcano

Dylan Roy

this is my favorite thing in the inter-webs right now

Mary McCormack

fill us up with the long epiosdes, zaddies (im sorry)

Alyssa W

Plus, the script is basically already written! You don't need to change the dialogue (to keep it authentic, of course) though the plot might need a few tweaks to make it somewhat more coherent

Pancakes

Can you imagine getting to be that costume designer? Absolutely unhinged descriptions, it would be incredible

Ol' Biscuit

Right? No excuses, designers!

Pancakes

They won't lack any detailed descriptions, thats for sure !

Stephanie Arsenault

If they ever manage to make a film adaptation of My Immortal, the costume design for Ebony better be PHENOMENAL

Pancakes

cried laughing several times during this, thank you grumps for making my day!! 👏🖤

✨ hannah ✨

Have they read "Cupcakes" yet? I forget.

MellonBaller

this was an absolute treat. shout out to 'triumelephantly' and 'enistein'

Rachael Dutko

It's a hilarious story, but I'm genuinely lost and have no clue what's going on.

Dan Bellacero

Sonic Highschool absolutely feels like satire, no way it’s genuine!

Aria Waite

My god I should be in bed right now for work early tomorrow but I feel triumelephantly ! Thanks Grumpos.

nebuloider

"sandly" made my drink come out my nose thanks.

nebuloider

"Sonic thought Shadow was a fuck." Is the best line in any of these so far

CobaltTJ

Longer episodes are just what I need!

TheMutantCreeper

The "author" of "My Immortal" confusing emo for goth is just as cringe as their writing. lol

A Walking Contradiction

Triumelephantly is the funniest fucking thing I've ever heard oh my god

Ryan Sutherland

Is it just me or does Sonic highschool sound like it's written by a deeply closeted homeschool kid?

Thomas Garcia

This is the least comfortable comfy content I've ever experienced.

Kyah Faria

Chapter 6 of Sonic High School is going to be the greatest moment in Grumps History

Christian Grimmett

This is both the best and worst thing on the internet

Doktor Vem

Phew, these boys have NO IDEA what they're in for with Sonic Highschool. It's like the Evangelion of Fanfic stories.

Christian Grimmett

Lupin was masticating to it might be the funniest typo in this whole thing, just the image of Lupin standing there just chewing at something

Quinn_Spooples

Longer episodes?! My prayers have been answered! 😆😆😆 Can you guys finish the Goofy x Pete story next episode? And maybe read some other new stories that are shorter (like single-chapter one shot kind of stories)? Because the biggest reason why I was hoping for longer episodes was so that we can have more variety with the stories. I get wanting to read as much of My Immortal as possible, but now that the episodes are longer, you can still read plenty of My Immortal and then maybe read two or three (depending on the length) short stories. Full disclosure, I'm not sure if the submission I sent in was completely rejected, or if you just haven't gotten to it yet. I'm debating on whether I should submit it again.

GracefullyAutistic

Give us this day our daily fanfic

Nicole Nostrand

“gamer words for homosexuality” lmaooo

MM

40 MINUTES? :D

Sophie Ward

Fingers crossed we will get a whole video edited for just the my immortal readings. I need it to be all put together

Kalli Deines

This is my favorite series of all time I think I'm gonna throw up from laughing thank you (AN: an if ur a prep fk OFF!!1111)

Alyssa Ventrella

just me, a beer, and trying not to spit out the beer cause I’m losing my shit

Colleen Hiltonen

This was amazing especially "No, Volfmort has him; bondage. Pay attention" which slayed me. PLEASE go back to Goofy and Pete I really wanna know what happens

Buggy

Why does this feel like a punishment? lol

Matthew Madruga

My Immortal came out while I was up to my eyeballs in pharmacy school; I'd never even heard of it. Extra long episodes are gonna reduce my temptation to read ahead and going in blind has been a treat. Thanks 💜

Sara! Anne Frazier

I love this series so much. It brings so much comfort, cozy relaxed vibes, and lots of laughs. Fangs guys (get it?)

Nyx

Omg please keep doing the double length ones, it makes my whole day. My cheeks and stomach hurt from laughing.

Kailey Bosyk

This series brings me so much joy. Turns out there was a lot of insanity that I managed to block out and forget about in My Immortal, and this has been a great way to experience it all again. Hope y'all get to Legolas by Laura at some point, but I could ride the Sonic Enoby wave for a while!

Sarah Zac

“masticating” is chewing, by the way 😭😭

arī the samurai

What a blessed time to be aliv

Sarahmonster

I don't mind you riding this wave at all. Fangs guys (get it?)

Tom Small

the editing is 10/10, y'all

han moody

Double length?! Let’s GOOOOOOOO

Min

Would love to see the 2 sequels to Garfield Maximum Speed be done

Reinmaker

As a writer ... it is literally painful to listen to this 😬 And yet it's great 😅

Charlotte Parker

god this made my day thank you grumps team

Kura Kurington IV

Oh yes. Please do this for 1000 years. It's so ridiculous and yet so comforting to listen to you guys. Such a weird combo! 😂

Merry Merrymead

I think I pulled a back muscle laughing

Lucas A

I also am coming to understand why My Immortal is so iconic... I thought the joke would get old after the first chapter or so but. I am riveted.

Tegan

The way Dan said "No, Volfmore has him bondage" with such a straight face when Arin asked if Draco died is absolutely hilarious

Kiersten

“really? are you sure that’s the analogy you want?” LOL

Ellie

God I want these stories animated so much. Nonsensically of course

Richard Lusk

Doing eyeliner while listening to all the misspellings of Dumbledore, entitles me to a purple heart.

Shelby Bird

I love this series so much! Thank you guys

Tyler George

Arin’s foot.

Casey.J

I like listening to these while I work and the "No, volfemort has him bondage, pay attention" bit had me screwing up my face in tears from trying not to scream laugh in the middle of the office.

Lauren Dautrich

“Abra Kadavra” is one of my favorite My-Immortal-isms

Claire

I honestly thought I accidentally went back in the video when thr scar thing happened again. Dan reads everything the same way. It's amazing

RadicalSniperHD RADI

I'm also where an MCR shirt today. Very my immortal 😆

Marissa Mason

Thank you, Dan for suffering through that reading. I feel like Im having a stroke just reading it.

Rachel Fischer

You guys rock. This series is why I joined the patreon and its not disappointing in the slightest.

Marissa Mason

my favorite part was the main character essentially going "I started crying. he started crying too. what a little bitch"

clockwork doodles

I cannot BELIEVE I forgot about triumelephantly. The pure joy I felt when Dan read it was something else

AshAmphora

YEEESSSSSS. I'M SO EXCITED.

Jessica Capocy

Oh no...

Pete Morgan

This is exactly what I need to get through the rest of my day :)

Lyraniath

Please do the goofy story next time please??

deathoftheendless .

Something to look forward too when I get out of work

Strawberry

Ahhh Let’s Go!

Maddibearxx

as soon as the notification hit me i yelled im so ready for this

Shane Hamilton

YIPPIEEEE

Ari Wolf

just in time for my lunch 😘✌🏼

Hope Gilbert

We are truly blessed today with this double length episode

Delia McDade


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