Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 8
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Ebony must do so much laundry
Jeanette
2025-04-18 05:40:38 +0000 UTCSay what you will - that Mario fan fic may have been a bit weird but definitely more well written and descriptive than most.
SUPERSHASHA
2025-04-14 22:57:34 +0000 UTCI’m dumbfounded by the description of the milk jug’s “creamy hole”
islandkitties
2025-01-21 20:11:14 +0000 UTCNoooo... how could you have forgotten Bloody Mary's backstory already? lol
Kai Lucas Zachary
2025-01-19 11:41:07 +0000 UTCI'm still amazed by Dan's ability to sit on his folded legs curled up in a chair like that as an adult.
Kai Lucas Zachary
2025-01-19 11:33:05 +0000 UTCI love Dan tearing the page off rather than folding and flipping it, thus making the staple useless. I hope that one day, please, there is a super cut of the entire Immortal script. I had no idea I would enjoy it so much when paying only $5 for this content.
Kai Lucas Zachary
2025-01-19 11:22:08 +0000 UTCIt's okay, Arin. We've all woken up in the middle of the night craving the booby milk every now and then. lol
Kai Lucas Zachary
2025-01-19 11:17:40 +0000 UTCDan genuinely giggling and burying his face like a schoolgirl during that Mario milk reading is truly something else. lol
Kai Lucas Zachary
2025-01-19 11:13:09 +0000 UTCKnowing the end of the Mario milk story, I genuinely had to go back and rewatch it all just to experience Dan's emotions with him throughout. lol
Kai Lucas Zachary
2025-01-19 11:03:06 +0000 UTCMaybe I just wasn't paying attention... but is this the first episode where Arin has a bare naked foot? Doesn't he know that websites exist? lol
Kai Lucas Zachary
2025-01-19 10:59:07 +0000 UTCI used to write DBZ fanfiction back in the 2000s and I can attest to the excessive metaphors and synonyms used within the community.
Angelica Bate
2025-01-16 02:52:34 +0000 UTCArin wanted conflict, but he wasn’t ready for the rift between Raven and the author…
MasochisticSheep
2025-01-15 21:47:38 +0000 UTCWow man they really went all out on mario drinking that glass of milk. I like alot
David Edwards
2025-01-08 00:11:40 +0000 UTCI still have the Hot Topic loyalty card, and when I use it, everyone acts like its a relic of the past😂😂😂
Anna Rose
2025-01-06 15:10:11 +0000 UTC22:37 I think it was supposed to be 'Christian'.
Anonymous201K
2024-12-31 16:09:09 +0000 UTCCareful y'all, viewer excretion advised on this one!
N8Nefarious
2024-12-28 05:14:31 +0000 UTCoh dear god there’s a live action version?
Abby Beck
2024-12-25 23:43:58 +0000 UTCso based on what arin said... he spillt milk... and...
Lyzion
2024-12-16 19:53:22 +0000 UTCThe WHAT?!
Austin
2024-12-12 18:49:28 +0000 UTCI need them to watch the live-action version of My Immortal
Emmett Paul
2024-12-04 21:17:10 +0000 UTC“no smoke to hillary duff” a sentence i’m sure has never been said before
TayMarsh
2024-11-25 01:04:18 +0000 UTCI just wanna reach thru the screen and get that lil hair off of sexci Dan’s hat im going insane
Olivia Collins
2024-11-21 21:06:15 +0000 UTCWow, the first story is so unbelievably simple and yet so well described. That's actually a really good writer if you're able to do something like that. EDIT: I spoke too soon. I thought it was just a normal story😅
FuzzyOtterPaws
2024-11-19 03:03:28 +0000 UTCWow, the first story is so unbelievably simple and yet so well described. That's actually a really good writer if you're able to do something like that. EDIT: I spoke too soon. I thought it was just a normal story😅
FuzzyOtterPaws
2024-11-19 02:59:46 +0000 UTCArin just casually showing feet like we aren't all gooning.
N8Nefarious
2024-11-16 15:14:19 +0000 UTCI hate that the first story made me want milk lol
BeckyFalcon
2024-11-06 23:40:55 +0000 UTCI'm only 15 minutes in and I already love this editing
Pip
2024-10-25 14:44:37 +0000 UTCdidnt they get that from SMG4? Mario getting a glass of milk? I feel like that was SMG4's video
Jacob Fausett
2024-10-05 07:37:42 +0000 UTCLike number 666, Ebony would be so pruod
Alexis Bell
2024-10-04 05:26:53 +0000 UTCThe worst part about my Immortal is I can see the girl who wrote this soul and it’s so horribly similar to who I was at 14
Emma Waters
2024-10-03 01:14:11 +0000 UTCThat Mario one made feel like I walked in on something I wasn’t supposed to see
Emma Waters
2024-10-03 00:45:00 +0000 UTCI’m more invested in the fallout between Raven and MidnightEssence than the fanfic itself LOL
JustHavePunWithIt
2024-09-20 12:49:19 +0000 UTCWhy do the Mario Bros share a bed
Nikolas
2024-09-05 17:37:47 +0000 UTCI'm not related to Dan Avidan , but I wish I was cuz that guy's a fokin sex bomb!
Kyah Faria
2024-09-04 01:36:46 +0000 UTCThen Raven got murdered and her remains desecrated... but 'actually not- love you bestiiee'
Kyah Faria
2024-08-31 03:41:35 +0000 UTCWhat a roller coaster 😂
Fay Jackson
2024-08-29 14:00:05 +0000 UTCThe way she dropped the raven and changed it to tara in her ridiculously long stupid character name I truly hate this so much that I love itXD
Rin Kangamine
2024-08-18 23:23:31 +0000 UTCI could really go for a glass of milk right about now
SlothWizard
2024-08-09 15:19:08 +0000 UTCThat deep "we move on" (30:15) from Dan was so audibly pleasurable for me, I'm a straightman but damn that was hot
Tallon Spencer
2024-08-08 19:59:09 +0000 UTCAlso, she changed Ebony's name because it had Raven in it. xD
Justin Martin
2024-08-04 22:03:47 +0000 UTCIt will probably be super difficult given the obscene material they're reading
PillowDragon
2024-08-03 21:56:28 +0000 UTCLuigi: you want me to Fuck you?
Tanerite
2024-07-30 21:24:40 +0000 UTCI never thought I needed this in my life….i was wrong
stephen sammartino
2024-07-23 19:12:14 +0000 UTCeither way i agree, it was a definitely more like. erotic and sensual fic compared to the E.T or pete/goofy ones
lemonade high
2024-07-22 01:51:11 +0000 UTCim gonna be so fr i totally forgot i commented this so this reply was a bit of a jumpscare
lemonade high
2024-07-22 01:49:04 +0000 UTCHonestly, I think the Mario one was more erotic than most other fanfics. I’m pretty sure the glass of milk was some sort of symbolic dick that Mario was “drinking”. Or at least that’s how I perceived it.
Cadence Scott
2024-07-22 01:44:49 +0000 UTCsupermega saves the troops was so good
Adam
2024-07-20 13:43:31 +0000 UTCscrambles... the death... dealer
Adam
2024-07-20 13:22:37 +0000 UTCmy favourite part of My Immortal has to be when the author and Raven have a falling out so she immediately kills her insert character off in the most vile way she can think of, but then by the next chapter they've made up so the character just comes back with no explanation.
Kyle Schofield
2024-07-17 05:45:29 +0000 UTCIt would be amazing if the authors could collaborate to publish a, possibly grump themed, book of all of their work.
Will Hurt
2024-07-12 14:11:08 +0000 UTCWould it ever be possible for these fan fiction story times to be put on Youtube unlisted with a link here? I love listening to these but Patreon isn't super other-app friendly!
@Aeringirl
2024-07-10 22:41:30 +0000 UTCWhat are you doing blood related super bro?
Munchman
2024-07-09 11:21:59 +0000 UTCBro that whole deal with Mario drinking milk was actually really good 🤣 not even joking the detail in that story was perfect and it makes me want an ice cold glass of milk. I'm in tears laughing my ass off at this 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Tessa Nystrom
2024-07-06 05:22:12 +0000 UTCThis was a great birthday present!
Hayri
2024-07-05 22:06:15 +0000 UTCWhat an extra special ep, I am so thrilled
RandalJandal
2024-07-04 10:09:44 +0000 UTCPlease for the love of all that is good, bimonthly fanfic story times
dancerladyaqua (Olivia)
2024-07-03 21:05:42 +0000 UTCFor the love of God please read Spiderses
Josh Bartling
2024-07-03 16:53:36 +0000 UTCfan fiction story time is why i finally became a patron. No regrets
Sydney lindsey
2024-07-02 16:37:42 +0000 UTCHat tip to the excellent music editing on this one.
bigbigtruck
2024-07-02 04:23:27 +0000 UTCi donate/subscribed for the 10 mph extras and now i live for the fanfiction story times, i too desire, no, DEMAND bimonthly uploads
Shane Hamilton
2024-07-01 22:15:32 +0000 UTCCan we get 2 of these a Month, honestly my favorite piece of extra content and there’s not a enough of it
Core Spartan
2024-07-01 16:17:24 +0000 UTCI cannot express how much I love that you guys are reading these lolol
Groove Crusade
2024-06-30 21:54:20 +0000 UTCi am SO excited for more my immortal
Tyson Meakin
2024-06-30 10:38:13 +0000 UTCthe pitching a tent gag and very briefly playing the music before they got distracted were both inspired bits
Brian G.
2024-06-28 02:05:48 +0000 UTCI really appreciate how the my immortal author left in the end of the chapter at the beginning What with the two different concerts where it’s actually Voldemort
AstraLee
2024-06-27 21:09:29 +0000 UTCI want to believe that the Mario story was written as a parody of FanFiction because I REALLY don't want someone out there horny for Mario drinking milk.
TheNonchalantNacho
2024-06-24 17:23:46 +0000 UTCThat Mario story was the most well-written prose about nothing.
Rennon the Shaved
2024-06-24 06:56:44 +0000 UTC... How very Homelander of Mario ...
WheeliePhiloSlothical
2024-06-23 18:13:53 +0000 UTClol this is my favorite thing
Serial Dad Kisser
2024-06-22 23:26:47 +0000 UTCYou know,,, reading it makes more sense some how? Thank you for your comment lmao
RavishingSeas
2024-06-22 23:01:26 +0000 UTCAlright Tally, thank you for pointing me in the direction of Strange Aeons, because that deep dive is crazy interesting and also....it brings so much joy that it isn't the cut and dry "it was a joke" that I thought it was. What an absolute masterpiece.
Supersecretslug
2024-06-21 19:29:43 +0000 UTC📸
Pixeldonkey95
2024-06-21 14:33:04 +0000 UTC"Oh my Satan!"
Pixeldonkey95
2024-06-21 14:30:02 +0000 UTCstahp flamn da stroie u prepzz ok? ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ (get it?)
INCREDABAD
2024-06-21 08:41:40 +0000 UTCEvery time we get a new my immortal I feel my brain melting it's crazy how many things happen at the same time... Also Dumblydore makes me laugh cry
Sof
2024-06-21 01:49:18 +0000 UTCI understand the plot of Dark Souls more than I understand the plot of My Immortal.
Robert James
2024-06-20 23:15:17 +0000 UTCThere are two stories in My Immortal. The story and the Meta with raven and ebony
Richard Lusk
2024-06-20 12:51:00 +0000 UTCOh dang I hadn’t seen that deep dive!
Aaron S
2024-06-20 12:14:38 +0000 UTCThey should have a special My Immortal episode where the boys just read My Immortal for an hour and wear Gothic/emo outfits
heythere_shelby
2024-06-20 07:17:23 +0000 UTCThis may be the only way I can get through this atrocity.
Kelli Barnes
2024-06-20 06:53:38 +0000 UTCThis is exactly how I feel about milk.
littlenoodledragon
2024-06-20 05:28:44 +0000 UTCDid... Did Mario fuck the milk
Erik
2024-06-20 04:35:15 +0000 UTCmore gay sex please⁉️
lemonade high
2024-06-20 03:12:41 +0000 UTCIt's my (limited and uneducated) understanding that Willow is the authors insert of Raven(?), the irl friend of hers who is the editor mentioned in authors notes sometimes. They had some sort of falling out, I think, during the process of writing (or maybe before writing?) chapter 16, and the author rage killed her insert over it. And then they made up in time for chapter 17, and she kind of just... retconned it without mentioning it. That's my interpretation of events though.
Tally Shay
2024-06-20 02:45:28 +0000 UTCIf you wanna see someone dig WAY too deep into the lore of My Immortal, I recommend "STRANGE AEONS" on youtube, she did a whole deep dig trying to find the truth of it all, it's an absolutely fascinating video imo.
Tally Shay
2024-06-20 02:41:04 +0000 UTCWait, so willow is killed in chapter 16, but is suddenly alive again in chapter 17???
MC Dexpo
2024-06-20 02:18:00 +0000 UTCI definitely didn't spend enough time to have a solid knowledge, but the little searching I did brought up a few different people claiming to be the authors and claiming they wrote it as a "parody" of other fan fics at the time. God I truly hope it isn't a joke, it's so much more magical that way.
Supersecretslug
2024-06-19 23:47:38 +0000 UTCNo way it’s a joke. Angrily running away and being pursued by the apologetic hot guy is something that was HOT in fan fiction among emo teens in forums years ago. I wrote it in my self-insert fanfics too as a tween.
Aaron S
2024-06-19 22:44:02 +0000 UTCThat Mario story was unquestionably written by a good writer as a joke. It's too perfectly done. Everything feels intentional and perfectly placed. It truly feels like a solid writer just wanted to write about something stupid.
Justin
2024-06-19 13:33:55 +0000 UTCMario: JUST LIKE SUSAN!
Lisuru
2024-06-18 23:54:35 +0000 UTCYou know, a thought occurred to me that the person who wrote the mario milk fic, should write more. I absolutely love short stories that are just a simple plotline of someone drinking a glass of milk or something. the detail they put into the story erupted my imagination and I'm just like, this guy is going places, I hope he writes more stuff.
Lisuru
2024-06-18 23:53:31 +0000 UTC"Watch out for the bear, Graham!"
Telsor
2024-06-18 18:56:26 +0000 UTCThe Mario one feels like someone trying to make a point. Like they had an argument with someone about how you can fill a story with descriptions and detail and fluff but that doesn’t mean it’s interesting or well written and was like “I’ll show you! I’ll show you all!”
Daniel Loader
2024-06-18 18:50:46 +0000 UTCI feel like I lose brain cells every time My Immortal is read
Alexandra
2024-06-18 17:35:48 +0000 UTCFull service
jennifer anne mckay
2024-06-18 06:21:36 +0000 UTCLuigi: Mario… you want me to FUCK you?
MewKiichigo
2024-06-18 01:12:42 +0000 UTCHEY BITCH YOU LOOK KAWAII ⁺✧.(˃̶ ॣ⌣ ॣ˂̶∗̀)ɞ⁾
vaguetype
2024-06-18 00:18:06 +0000 UTCIt's perfection
Anabelle Cardona
2024-06-17 23:51:14 +0000 UTCI can't believe she had a falling out with Raven, after everything they've gone through.
Anabelle Cardona
2024-06-17 23:50:19 +0000 UTCI have no idea, it was just the only thing I could think of that would even remotely make it make sense 🤣
Buggy
2024-06-17 23:32:59 +0000 UTCMy Immortal is ruined a little after hearing that it's supposed to be a joke, but more than anything I'm just confused why guns are used in it....I'm....so confused...I spend way too much energy thinking about this.....
Supersecretslug
2024-06-17 20:31:50 +0000 UTCFair enough!
Lucas A
2024-06-17 06:00:47 +0000 UTCI disagree lol
Kayla
2024-06-17 05:59:37 +0000 UTCA lot of people have claimed to be the author but none seem convincing and some admitted they lied. Strange Aeons did a video on it.
Kayla
2024-06-17 05:54:50 +0000 UTCIs that why she says that? 😂
Kayla
2024-06-17 05:53:22 +0000 UTCexactly
Kayla
2024-06-17 05:44:21 +0000 UTCI liked the repeated tent pitching footage.
Kayla
2024-06-17 05:36:55 +0000 UTCI now wanna see the author of my immortal write a fanfic of twilight with preppy vampires rofl
Elizabeth Kratky
2024-06-16 22:20:33 +0000 UTC“I thought Cedric was the owl.” Nearly took me OUT
Katie Marra
2024-06-16 16:38:35 +0000 UTCfinally, the meta-plot reaches its conflict 🙏
Azusa☾
2024-06-16 07:20:43 +0000 UTCI've been waiting for them to reach the AN: Raven twist and it was utterly worth hearing the heartbreak from Arin 💔
Alyssa W
2024-06-16 02:16:39 +0000 UTCthe real reason we're on Patreon
Alyssa W
2024-06-16 02:15:19 +0000 UTCSo really, when is the ".Authors Note." shirt coming?
Nukin Futs
2024-06-15 23:16:20 +0000 UTCHave I read this story many times before? Yes. Do I get so unfathomably happy when an episode of this shit drops? Yes.
Katie Swofford
2024-06-15 08:29:16 +0000 UTCShe's still at Hogwarts
Kyah Faria
2024-06-15 07:05:58 +0000 UTCThey're all Immortal. Plus, she probably gave the sweater back. So she doesn't have to DIE 🤭
Kyah Faria
2024-06-15 07:03:28 +0000 UTCGod, I wish. I'd like to write it Though I wouldn't want my work to feel derivative of the original
Kyah Faria
2024-06-15 07:01:08 +0000 UTCCan you marry eachother in co op?
Kyah Faria
2024-06-15 06:59:29 +0000 UTCDon't discourage him! Encourage Dan. Show feet K THNX BYE
Kyah Faria
2024-06-15 06:59:08 +0000 UTCDa def dealers is a sock name for a rap crew - so prolific in our culture: My Immortal
Kyah Faria
2024-06-15 06:57:45 +0000 UTCWould love to see them react to a supernatural fanfic, I just have no idea which one
Noem
2024-06-15 00:42:26 +0000 UTCArin, the bi: Sits regularly, for once Dan, the Straight: sits like a... Comfortable gentleperson. I'm with him all the way :) It's how I used (try) to read my books in college :)
Turner Strait
2024-06-15 00:38:40 +0000 UTCNo one knows who wrote it, they've never come forward. I hope they're doing well for the legacy they have created
BabyUnicorn
2024-06-14 18:17:35 +0000 UTCNah, it's fine. This is why it's patreon exclusive content!
Andrew Corner
2024-06-14 17:46:28 +0000 UTC"Hey bitch, you look kawaii" is going to sit in my head for a week
kulus_
2024-06-14 06:58:07 +0000 UTCOh he knows exactly what he's doing by letting those grippers out
Nora Hopeless
2024-06-14 05:21:46 +0000 UTCWe need like an hour long special for My Immortal cause holy shit 🤣
Kim Wetzel
2024-06-14 03:26:21 +0000 UTCGotta be careful putting those dogs out on the internet, Arin 🦶
Aria Waite
2024-06-14 01:37:19 +0000 UTCDiablo = Ron Bloody Mary = Hermione Vampire = Harry Potter Draco = Draco Dumblyedoor = dumdum man with dat hat Ebony = Ebb:)monby?!!?!?
Akihime
2024-06-14 01:29:29 +0000 UTCJesus that didn't even occur to me I assumed in my brain she said it as he sang the hotel bella muerte line and she's like "omg Italian so ethnic" which is hilarious enough but you're so right it's just his jersey accent 🤣🤣🤣
Buggy
2024-06-14 01:18:34 +0000 UTCName a more iconic duo than Dan “never show feet” Avidan and Arin “always show feet” Hanson
Sean
2024-06-13 23:53:18 +0000 UTCHahaha, that was quite the interesting story. 🤣
Melissa Di Varano
2024-06-13 23:31:08 +0000 UTCI read this before I got to the end of the story... I was confused. Now I understand.
Tally Shay
2024-06-13 23:24:24 +0000 UTCCreamy hole 🤣🤣
Shelby Bird
2024-06-13 22:33:15 +0000 UTCCuz... yknow "immortal"
Kyah Faria
2024-06-13 22:11:00 +0000 UTCI enjoy that absolutely no one can remain dead in My Immortal.
Kyah Faria
2024-06-13 22:10:46 +0000 UTCEww, not like that 🥸
Kyah Faria
2024-06-13 22:10:08 +0000 UTCIt's funny that in a world where apparently "flaming" is off the table, bisexuality is still okay as long it's regarding your self insert boyfriend
Pancakes
2024-06-13 22:04:26 +0000 UTCUnlikely
Pancakes
2024-06-13 22:00:57 +0000 UTCI love how half of My Immortal is literally just describing outfits
Erica Dahlia
2024-06-13 21:50:18 +0000 UTCI was already laughing about that, but when she called his Jersey accent "ethnic", it took me out 💀
SiSi Watterson
2024-06-13 17:50:02 +0000 UTCMy first girlfriend and I wrote a Darkness x Raven fanfic
Liberty Fuchs
2024-06-13 17:35:32 +0000 UTCRight from the start of the Mario one I said "is this going to end with Mario fucking a glass of milk?" I wasn't exactly right...but close enough? 🤣
Melissa Di Varano
2024-06-13 17:21:26 +0000 UTCLiterally said the same!
Melissa Di Varano
2024-06-13 17:18:25 +0000 UTCHow can I request for them to play Stardew Valley?! I really want to see who they would pick to marry or date! And it’s co-op 😭 also seeing what voices they would give the villagers. I need it to happen
Lani Waterstrat
2024-06-13 16:12:36 +0000 UTCPlease show less feet k thx bye
CobaltTJ
2024-06-13 15:05:00 +0000 UTCOf course Arin can relate to a Mario milk fic and “I was flattened” instead of “flattered” is so funny lmao, moar soon plz, don’t be preps!!1!!
Reagan Moore
2024-06-13 14:19:05 +0000 UTCthe mario milk story my entire brain imagined it animated by shoocharu and i laughed so much more harder 😂
Elizabeth Kratky
2024-06-13 14:13:24 +0000 UTCI love it when Dan and Arin talk in silence!
Zakary Xavier Lorrain
2024-06-13 13:24:18 +0000 UTCplease put out episodes of this sooner or i will start telling people you guys are preps
mugmanisgr8
2024-06-13 09:37:32 +0000 UTCAnother fantastic episode. One note: please lower the piano music a bit. It's too loud and steps on the boys' voices
Justin
2024-06-13 04:23:46 +0000 UTCebony needs some zoloft
Ellie
2024-06-13 04:14:53 +0000 UTCI know, I do wonder though if Gerard having blue eyes was supposed to be a clue it was Volfmort in disguise or if the author just forgot what color his eyes are. Either way it's just hilarious to me that Ebony didn't think anything of the eyes being wrong since she's so obsessed with MCR 🤣
Buggy
2024-06-13 04:08:29 +0000 UTCIt was VOLCEMORE!
Aaron S
2024-06-13 03:46:16 +0000 UTCLmao fr like “oh hey bestie you look kawaii” to the defiled corpse of her best friend
Aaron S
2024-06-13 03:31:43 +0000 UTCI look forward to the My Immortal chapters every time, it's like some form of psychotherapy I swear
Sara Dara
2024-06-13 02:38:09 +0000 UTCI've read My Immortal many times in the past, what with it being a classic and all. Seeing Dan and Arin go through it for the first time is making it all new for me too, and I'm loving it. Worth every cent.
Sarah Zac
2024-06-13 01:06:08 +0000 UTCDan calling it the My Chemical Romance story hour made me submit unholyverse 💜
Buggy
2024-06-13 01:04:30 +0000 UTCAlso I'm dying for someone obsessed with MCR and somehow didn't know Gerard doesn't have blue eyes. Like enoby, get your shit together that was an obvious fake Gerard!
Buggy
2024-06-13 00:56:27 +0000 UTCCant overstate enough how grateful I am to you guys reading My Immortal bc I'm dyslexic and haven't been able to get past chapter two myself, it's too difficult to parse and I'm so happy I get to endure this finally and with the Grumps taking me through! Also please please more Goofy and Pete I'm dying my crops are failing my chinchillas are depressed
Buggy
2024-06-13 00:47:12 +0000 UTCArin wrote that first story.
Charlotte Parker
2024-06-13 00:35:37 +0000 UTCCan someone please tell me where the author of my immortal is today? I'm actually a little concerned.
Ray Ostempowski
2024-06-13 00:13:38 +0000 UTCRon is Diablo
Aaron S
2024-06-13 00:09:09 +0000 UTCCrazy how the writer killed off Willow and had her dead body screwed by a pedophile (which was her insert of Raven) and then when things are better with Raven she was like "Willow is so cute :)"
IamSage 88
2024-06-13 00:05:22 +0000 UTCPatreon is worth it just to see Arin's piggies.
Charlotte Parker
2024-06-13 00:01:45 +0000 UTCI think Ron is Diablo
IamSage 88
2024-06-13 00:00:05 +0000 UTCI found out I'm a late in life gay and I'm NEVER going to stop flaming!
Matthew Madruga
2024-06-12 23:49:29 +0000 UTCThe author's note drama between Raven and Midnight is the story I'm actually here for lmao
Michael Alonso
2024-06-12 23:35:47 +0000 UTCViolently shaking
D
2024-06-12 23:28:44 +0000 UTCI really wonder where the author of My Immortal is at right now and what they're doing with their life...
I'm Clifford Today
2024-06-12 23:27:32 +0000 UTCNot unless we replace elf on the shelf with a vinyl Lionel
D
2024-06-12 23:26:03 +0000 UTCMario, looming in the study
D
2024-06-12 23:24:06 +0000 UTCWhere is the ten foot vinyl Mario set piece
D
2024-06-12 23:23:42 +0000 UTCI love everything about My Immortal and how without Raven to edit it, it deteriorates into absolute madness
Aaron S
2024-06-12 23:13:32 +0000 UTCMy Immortal is still the gift that keeps on giving all these years later
Keirik
2024-06-12 22:54:15 +0000 UTCWhen Arin thought Draco was dead again I instinctively said “NO, Volfemor has him, bondage!”
Aaron S
2024-06-12 22:42:07 +0000 UTCThis is okay, but where are all the daddy fan fics!? Gosh-uh!
Serial Dad Kisser
2024-06-12 22:22:59 +0000 UTCI love My Immortal, but I am also so very confused.
KatrinaK
2024-06-12 22:17:35 +0000 UTCThe author of My Immortal is becoming more & more undone with each chapter
Pancakes
2024-06-12 22:07:03 +0000 UTCMy fucking god, this story is so utterly horrible and so entertaining at the same time. All the shitty spelling combined with the 30 authors notes per chapter, it's really remarkable that they've kept going for this long, you just can't help but respect it Btw Dans ability to flawlessly read all the misspellings and actually pronounce them "correctly" without slowing down or losing track of the story is really impressive
Doktor Vem
2024-06-12 21:25:39 +0000 UTCLMAO i don’t remember ron being mentioned at all no, i just remember that harry is vampire
kat
2024-06-12 21:13:51 +0000 UTCI've never clicked so fast
Megera Clark
2024-06-12 21:12:30 +0000 UTCThat would explain a bit, thank you. Is Ron also in this story or does the author think he's too much of a "fucking prep" whatever that means?
Doktor Vem
2024-06-12 21:09:43 +0000 UTCI have never heard or read more than the first few chapters of My Immortal because I thought that’s all there way. Lucky me that there’s more
Mama Rei
2024-06-12 20:52:25 +0000 UTCThe Emos of Azkaban dance on the west side: The story.
Casey.J
2024-06-12 20:39:29 +0000 UTCThe writer of this fan fiction has a gang mentality. Focuses on the negative aspects to people who don’t appreciate her ideology. Cute. Looking forward to more.
Casey.J
2024-06-12 20:36:51 +0000 UTCI wish Satan made me less beautiful, too
Robert Poole
2024-06-12 20:33:28 +0000 UTCi just relistened to all the fanfic story times i’m so jazzed there’s a new episode!!
Shane Hamilton
2024-06-12 20:28:51 +0000 UTCI would love to know where my immortals author is now? I feel like we would have gotten along in middle school.
Marissa Mason
2024-06-12 20:28:49 +0000 UTCAs always, fucking funny, the mario one made me tear up laughing xD
Greet Charpentier
2024-06-12 20:24:01 +0000 UTCfull service, just like Vampire
PanPrimary
2024-06-12 20:17:13 +0000 UTCI’ve never felt more like I’ve walked into someone’s fantasy as viscerally as i did with that Mario one. That was an experience. Speechless.
biibaby
2024-06-12 20:15:45 +0000 UTCI love this series!
Matthew Jenkins
2024-06-12 20:01:26 +0000 UTCThe only thing in my mind as Mario splooshed the milk all over himself was his Mario voice "Ohh Noo"
Nyx
2024-06-12 19:57:53 +0000 UTCbloody mary is hermoine i think
kat
2024-06-12 19:57:26 +0000 UTCthere were so many twists and turns in todays ep 😭😭
enderman
2024-06-12 19:48:24 +0000 UTCThat’s what went through my head when I heard that 🤣🤣🤣
Cassie Braun
2024-06-12 19:38:49 +0000 UTCI could swear I zoned out for a 2 full minutes after he grabbed the milk and when I tuned back in he still hadn't started drinking lol
Brennan Bova
2024-06-12 19:38:38 +0000 UTCFangs guys!
0mie
2024-06-12 19:25:19 +0000 UTCAnthony, you expect me to fuck you??
Hyde
2024-06-12 19:24:38 +0000 UTCDid a lot of sighing during the mario one
Ana Cristina
2024-06-12 19:17:04 +0000 UTCYou cockteases, I need more Sonic Highschool
Christian Grimmett
2024-06-12 19:13:55 +0000 UTCFuck yes! After 5 weeks of absence I was worried this series was over and I'm so glad to see I was wrong! :D
Doktor Vem
2024-06-12 19:11:23 +0000 UTCLFG SOB'S
Mark Blythe
2024-06-12 19:09:58 +0000 UTCBeen looking forward to this since June 1. Thank you guys
Clarisa Wright
2024-06-12 19:09:50 +0000 UTCSeeing this notification pop up on my phone just brought me so much joy 🥲🩵🩷
Maddibearxx
2024-06-12 19:07:46 +0000 UTCThis Mario milk story was a dud, gotta be honest. I get the joke, but it's not a great one, especially for how drawn out it was. My Immortal, on the other hand: always a winner.
Lucas A
2024-06-12 19:07:46 +0000 UTCOhhhh let’s fucking go
Duck Todd
2024-06-12 19:07:18 +0000 UTCI look forward to this every single time. Thank you grumps
Mallow
2024-06-12 19:05:54 +0000 UTC
