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Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 10

This time, more My Immortal, a fan fiction about a shipping incident, and a fan fiction about a shipping incident. That's a joke you'll understand after you watch the episode!

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we have a fanfic based on the seuz canal incident. this is rich. OMG, all the grammatical errors in this part of my immortal are killing me.

simplegunner

https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/myimmortal/images/0/0f/Enoby-0.png/revision/latest?cb=20190921224731 enjoy

Remy C. (they-them)

the captain america one was so normal for so long that i was lulled into a false sense of security and when it happened it genuinely gave me whiplash

nixa

I figured out why these very sexual (gay) fanfics make Dan so uncomfortable... the characters aren't furry enough!

Griffin Samuel

The laughter was really contagious on this one! I laughed more at them cracking up than the actual stories!🤣

FuzzyOtterPaws

I... Was not expecting THAT type of sudden turn in the Captain America one...😅

FuzzyOtterPaws

anyone know where to find the captain america one i need to show a friend who would find it hilarious

Evie Willing

Dan: the professional brand-hiding cup hold Arin: I AM EATING LUCKY CHARMS

Hummingbird Hooligan

"Hand me my immortal, I need a palate cleanser" has to be the funniest thing I've heard in a while.

melissa

Omg "that happened months ago"

Jilly

Take a shot every time My Immortal says “gothic” or describes something as “sexy” and you will be dead within the hour

Emma Waters

It almost killed Arin

Emma Waters

That escalated extremely quickly, I was not prepared

Emma Waters

NEVERMIND IT GOT WEIRD

Emma Waters

I don’t if I’ve just spent too much time reading fan fiction but the Captain America one seems very normal to me

Emma Waters

When i need a cold, harsh dose of cringe to wake me up from complacency, i return to episode 2.

Aaron S

Followed by all that buildup to “VOLZEMOURT!” And then “….Eboby, thou hast failed”

Aaron S

The captain America one was actually really good 🔥. Also seeing Arin absolutely crumble under the weight of laughter and kicking his lil legs was so relatable, i couldn't breathe.

Anabelle Cardona

I’m OBSESSED with the Suez Canal/Evergreen one. Someone put so much effort into that. I want to shake their hand

Emma Waters

Oh I love Strange! She does a lot of cool deep dives on Internet and fandom culture and she has two weird little naked cats!

Emma Waters

My favorite part about the Suez Canal one is the author clearly did research for it

Emma Waters

The minute Arin read the title of the first one I outloud went “oh no”

Emma Waters

Listening to this at work and trying to keep a straight face while I work is an impossible task. I can't 😭

Ashe

And they killed themselves 😵

Kyah Faria

Aaah, the return of "frenching passively"

Morgan Robinson

My favourite "My immortal" trope is "turns out their real parents were vampires"

Morgan Robinson

Ngl, I was not expecting ABO Suez Canal

Adam Parkinson

I NEED someone to make this into a show or something, this fucking amazing!

Mopheus

The back-to-back-to-back assault of “Dumbledumb,” “I wanna shit next to her!” and “ ‘No, I do!’ shouted.” is stronger than any man

Handsome Sassage

The "I want to shit next to her" bit is really great to listen to when you've been having a bad day because Jesus that has never failed to make me laugh lol.

Liviluv 777

"You guys making martinis in there?"

Tex Tuckroll

This is fucking magical, I haven’t laughed this hard in years

Jake Roragen

“You fucking bustard, I wanna shit next to her”

RueTheKenku

Goddamnit.

littlenoodledragon

Oh my god the twist got me im so fucking mad

littlenoodledragon

I’ve listened to 30 more seconds and I CHANGED MY MIND THIS ISNT PORN WHATS HAPPENING

littlenoodledragon

I just realized I’m paying like, $5 a month to hear Dan and Arin read me porn and idk how to feel about that 😂😂😂

littlenoodledragon

Best 5$ I ever spent to see both of you weeping over your first reading of My Immortal! I assure you this gift keeps on giving. This is the kind of genius humor that is still funny even after reading it 100 times.

Silver

My therapist really likes Harry Potter. We were talking about something from the movies and she couldn't remember Dolores Umbridge. I was proud to say I remembered because of how consistently it was misspelled in this chapter.

Kyah Faria

PLEASE do a my immortal special in like some kinda gothified cosplay

Julia Osier

They should read “Harry Potter and the tumbling towers” it’s sadly exactly what you think it is

Riley Ann

Best five bucks I've ever spent.

PSOrchestra

NeVER FORGET!!!! 🇺🇸

Kyah Faria

This month's patreon FFST will be number 11. September.... 11

Kyah Faria

We need more of these episodes. 😂 I couldn't stop laughing at this.

Brandan Alfred

Please i am begging you read more garfield effect it gets so "so bad it's good"

Zachary Stevenson

more of these 30min+ ones

Roman J

Omg their first yuri…

Magicalbunbun

Honestly this series alone makes the Patreon worth it

AuBos

Well. Boats and Canals fucking was not on my bingo card for 2024

Nate Cox

i'm so glad i joined patreon ftis month

alligator haze

I don't think I've ever seen arin laugh that hard

Erik

If you want to see someone make/wear Ebony's outfits, check out Strange Æons on YouTube! She has a video called Recreating The Fashion Of My Immortal where she recreated some of Ebony's outfits and it's great, would recommend watching

heythere_shelby

Literally trying to get ready for work and I can't when there's tears on my face

SadJuggalo

I literally cannot drink my coffee while listening to this

GamerWithABlankie

I'm so glad that this series exists

Anthony Leeds

With all the typos, My Immortal could be split up into multiple different versions. And they'd all make as much sense as what was originally intended. That's some serious skill.

Jas_beforeitwascool

Honored to be the 420th like. Dumbledumb approved

Bolo Santosi

Pls x2

Cad Corpse

When y'all finish My Immortal, PLEASE do a supercut of the entire story!

Jason Madden

I CANNOT believe there's omegaverse boat smut.

Robynn_Houd

The cap/bucky fic had me confused for a second bc it was fine ,not my taste but it’s just a fic — and now i will never be able to unhear this fic

biibaby

"This is a perfectly normal Cap/Bucky fic, why are they reading it?" I thought before the universe showed me why they chose to read it

Amber Freeman

random Ville Valo mention lol

Megan

After the boat one I thought “there’s no way this next one could be weirder”

Veronica Adams

I. COULD NOT believe my ears

Elin

I haven't laughed this hard in weeks

Celeste Barstow

What a wholesome horny boat story

Naburnyurd

I NEED a link to the Stucky fic so I can send it to my friend and get their reaction

AshAmphora

I popped a FUCKING blood vessel in my eye laughing at this 😆

Cameron Floyd

I CANNOT BELIEVE YALL ACTUALLY READ THE SUEZ ONE. WESLEY AND I WERE CONTEMPLATING WHAT TO SEND IN FOR *HOURS* BEFORE DECIDING ON THAT ONE. i’m glad you got a kick out of it at least, sorry for the trauma it may have caused 😭

El

We speak not of Komakla and Elliot

Kyah Faria

if they don't make a supercut video that's just all of my immortal I will be terribly distraught

Brian G.

I just wanna say fangs 4 these. I've watched all uploads two times, and laughed equally hard both. Just pure joy and good vibes (except to ep2...)

Plantan

Literally said “Steve wouldn’t do that, that’s so out of character” out loud during the stucky fanfic, I think I’m too invested in this lmao (edit: WOAH THIS TOOK A TURN, OKAY THEN)

Miles Zvahl

I will be consumed with emptiness until another episode comes out 😂

Andrea Warren

Dumbledork is my favorite.

nebuloider

I would 100% pay cash money for a list shirt of all the ways dumbledore gets spelled wrong.

Cassie Zaccarelli

You spork it, I thought?? Am I doing it wrong?

Kyah Faria

Man these half hour videos last me about two weeks, can never make it 5 minutes in till I'm crawling the ceiling over here.

nebuloider

You're telling me you've never spiked a sporked heroine cabaret before?

Sunday Morning Hotdog

That Stucky went in a direction I was NOT expecting...

Sarah Zac

i am once again asking for bimonthly fanfiction story times i will pay more money

Shane Hamilton

Laughing into tears, I can't wait for the next one

Tony Ruble

22:18 close captions auto-generated, the last line is "okay her own name" and I thought it was gonna be "okay hermione" but spelled the my immortal way, forgetting she renamed hermione

Adam

Fangs 4 da storytime u preps

Karsten Treu

HE SAID THE COCK WORD!!!!!!!!!!

lemonade high

The Dumbledore typos will never not be funny

Bex

Those first two stories really threw me for a loop, like how are these the best written two we've had that haven't been My Immortal and they're about a boat and two Marvel characters? Bless you two for reading more My Immortal, it just gets better and better, I was DYING. Thanks (or fangs) to whoever went and found the outfit drawings lmao, you rock and are not a prep!!1!

Reagan Moore

Don't lie Dan, you always have a blanket to hide that chub these tales give you

Jonnileigh Harris

“Oh god this is niche!” Birches love niches! 😚👌

Deb

Omegaverse is a blight on fiction

Howl

The Suez Canal one was flippin wild.

Unasinous

I’ll be honest, while listening to My Immortal I gradually lose the will to live, and then the moment it’s over I crave more.

Aaron S

JKR is quivering in her phobic boots

Alyssa W

I want Danny and Arin, and only Danny and Arin, to bring back "preps" as an insult

Alyssa W

This was tops the best episode. Also I'm begging you to compile every My Immortal reading into one video when it's all done.

Alex Speakman

I lost it when the fic referred to Suez as an “omega”. I did NOT expect the ship/canal fic to be omegaverse of all things.

Jezzibolt

Not only does the author of My Immortal detonate basic grammar, spelling & proper usage of adjectives to advance her Hot Topic Mary Sue fever dream, but this also might be the first time she didn't even include the name of a character who's speaking a line of dialogue. This is the legacy the incredibly successful Harry Potter franchise truly deserves

Pancakes

I couldn’t breathe. It just kept going 😂

Aaron S

“I WANT TO SHIT NEXT TO HER!”

Aaron S

My Immortal really does chip away at your psyche. I couldn't help but join them when they were losing their shit over Dumbledumb 😂😂

daytime

Not only is it a fanfic between a boat and a canal, but it's ABO?!?!? Wild

Simone Elbrecht

All of Dan's training and years of doing comedy did not prepare him for dumbledumb. I lost it at him losing it, and my cat was upset and meowed about it. Dhut up munkustrap you prep

Nicole Nostrand

This was a great episode, I was laughing so hard! 🤣 That Stucky fanfic was such an emotional rollercoaster (even better that it was a fandom that I personally recognized), and the Suez Canal one was one of those moments where I knew, but I also didn't know, what was happening. 🤣

GracefullyAutistic

God, just when I think I'll get tired of My Immortal, it keeps being funnier

thescarletpaperback

I love this. Thank you grumps

Levi M.

The freak out at 26:10 is one of my favorite gg moments ever

Plant Mage

YOU CAN GET A PAPER BACK VERSION OF MY IMMORTAL ON AMAZON FOR $10 YOU’RE WELCOME!!!!111!!

Riley Peterson

so fun fact that winter soldier story is actually canon

TheMangolorian06

The scream I scrumpt at the first fic title!

Shelby Tibbit

I know I laughed so hard I couldn’t breath 🤣

Maddibearxx

Imagine listening to this while making dinner, because that was me trying not to pee myself

Cassie Braun

I put this on to listen to while making dinner…I had to stop making dinner because I was crying laughing and almost peed myself

Cassie Braun

this series has replaced everything else as my bedtime stories Damn Arin really lost it during My Immortal

Caesar Smith

Villi Valo? She start watching Viva la Bam? lol

Matthew Madruga

I don't think I ever did

uberjNet

Getting to SEE these hysterical laughing fits just makes everything infinitely more funny!

penguinxiii

the windows movie maker lyric video was a beautiful touch

Kyleigh J

8:32 never has a colder chill run down my spine when I know this probable repeat of an arm that ends the person it's on..... and the strategic homeland(er) intervention, enforcement, and logistics division. Now question is if it's Bucky or not lol

Matthew Madruga

I read all the comments beforehand and still lost it at Chapter 23

Leo Fitzwilliam

I somehow did not expect a story about a boat to provocatively use the term "knot" 🫥

Kyah Faria

I listened to this while I was working and it took every ounce of strength I had to not fall down laughing at Dumbledumb

Alex Pehmoeller

The camera is a character in a lot of old Nintendo games- and it is constantly murdering you

Kyah Faria

This is what they're talking about when film snobs talk about the camera being a character

Liberty Fuchs

Nice to know there's another Quinn on this Patreon because I definitely don't remember submitting the CapXBucky story (though I totally would have)

Quinn_Spooples

"You've never had your dead robot boyfriend show up and rip your dick off?" Please make this a sticker. I WOULD BUY TWO.

Nikki-John-Wicky

the absolute giggledicks these two become when it's My Immortal time

Kyle Schofield

As soon as Arin said the words “robot arm with a mind of its own” I immediately knew it was a Stucky fic

Nothingtoseehere

I think Enoby needs to get her eyes checked, that’s a lot of crying blood

Jamie Haack

i swear i never laugh as hard as when i watch these

kat

"real life shipping incident" AYYYYYY

bigbigtruck

Once again, this series proves itself to be the absolute best and absolute worst thing on the internet

Doktor Vem

Is there a word for when a deus ex machina trope gets subverted like that?

Justin

I was laughing just as hard as Arin and Dan when Dumbledumb came up 🤣 it had me in tears!

Maddibearxx

The Suez one, was not only insane, but also a fucking omegaverse! XD

Ingra

Loooooooooooooooove the fanfics!!!

Victor Blas

I wasn’t expecting that second story but I knew exactly where it was going

Zebizenette

I had a feeling that the robot arm would tear the dick off, and I stayed and had it to be revealed as true 🙈 Skipped right to my immortal

Shembear

Wholly expecting them to have to stop at Dumbledumb.

Rachel Fischer

My Immortal readings are my favorite part of a new month now. Thanks Dumbledumb

Zoe S

Ugh this is the best so far I was nearly in tears omfg😭😭dumbledumb... I can't wait till next month ‼️🔥

Kaida

I’m so in love with you guys reading these. Never stop!!!

Aria Waite

If I have to go longer than a month without hearing Danny read My Immortal, I swear to Satan I will slit my wrists! And after that I might do something really crazy!

Uncoolest_Evar

I don’t even know what is happening in My Immortal anymore but I’m here for it

Bear

not gonna lie i was hoping i would get to watch someone on the staff explain A/B/O dynamics to them after that first fic

Valerie M

That stucky fic was something else LMAOOO

Sof

Gosh, All this time Dan has really held onto his composure while reading My Immortal, and now Dumbledumb broke him 😂😂😂 God, everytime Arin just explodes into writhing laughter fills me with so much joy.

Ruija

"...your former best friend you thought was dead..." necrophilia plot twist...? "..especially when he has a robot arm with a mind of its own." *freaky* necrophilia plot twist...?? "SHIELD was compromised-" OH MY GOD NO

juggerNOTtoday

was anyone else really hoping the second fic would be a postgame komahina fic 😪…

Rumi

Their laughs are so contagious. 😄

Marissa Mason

I haven't clicked anything so fast

Megera Clark

Never in my life did I think I'd hear an ABO fic about the Suez Canal blockage but here I am.

Megan Maginnis

We’re so back

Ben Schubert

Hey that stucky fic sounds like a regular fic to me- hoH MY GOD

Henry Fortner

my favorite thing about these is before the fan fictions go crazy and dan is so sincerely listening to the stories

Kenna Mitchell

Dan don't cover your lower half up with the blanket with one hand underneath 😂 No live gooning!

Merry Merrymead

The shriek I shrumped when I saw this notification. I’m so excited!

Aaron S

Based on the description I’m gonna guess they’re reading fanfic about that Evergreen ship getting stuck in the Suez Canal.

Andre D

Is there a way I can watch this on a chromecast easily?

Leoné Jordan

Goon! Goon! Goon! Goon!

Casey.J

time for gooning

Anna


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