SamuZai
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I am a bit disappointed how this video turned out :/ I expected a bit more of myself, but I'd like to get your opinions! and what you all think or how I could have made it better.

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Or can I have a dinosaur that shoots snacks from a laser cannon on it's back?

Can I have snacks?

I appreciate your thoughts and ideas! Hopefully if I get the chance to redo it, I will try to incorporate all these ^-^

The video is a nice concept. I think it could have used an additional visual element to it. I like writing sounds and they're amplified when you can also see the writing in progress. So instead of writing off screen you could hold up the clipboard at a slight angle so you could look both at the clipboard and at the camera as you talk to "us". You could write slowly, perhaps in an artsy style, or even do little doodles with each gift request.


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