I loved this! But one bit of constructive criticism, I like the prey blushing like you did with this one but when you go heavy on it it looks more like sunburn or something
Madness
2023-08-08 03:43:53 +0000 UTC
Ohhh this one was right up my alley! I love reluctant/conflicted prey!! Especially prey that expresses a desire to live, but still can't help but enjoy the experience. Also, the theme of 'wasted potential' is one of my absolute favourites in vore, like when she says she is "only 18 and had so many years ahead of her". Perfect ♥
hunnterArts
2023-08-03 10:13:27 +0000 UTC
Great story, but hope you can fix the link issue on previous post EDIT: Oh I just saw. you have, awesome!
NaKa
2023-08-03 09:59:17 +0000 UTC
I could definitely go for a lot less penis in this!
Aidan
2023-08-03 09:50:49 +0000 UTC
@SimpleGreenBag no link on last week's post.
Desiree
2023-08-02 21:26:56 +0000 UTC
Heya I know this is the wrong post but last week still didn’t have a link with it,