Epic 166 complete!
Added 2022-08-02 01:53:54 +0000 UTCHey guys, I know's been a long wait so I finally got around to 166 and got it done at nearly 5k!
I'll try to be faster next time!
Love you all
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1buB5ufONOiQfCmFmm3kuaaWKJmkEoeTf6VM3uzvrWdU/edit?usp=sharing
(im joking, don't panic! I'm not punishing myself!)
Comments
Really a well done chapter, the shift between povs was tastefully made and I can’t wait to see Yattina to be impressed by Delta’s dungeon
Carcavac
2022-08-02 16:32:50 +0000 UTCYes! That sounds adorable!
Daniel Gesualdi
2022-08-02 16:01:25 +0000 UTCI feel like Deo’s group is going to get a new member!
V01D
2022-08-02 15:41:35 +0000 UTCDam that was beautiful. The two storylines built each other up so we'll. That question of what are you delta and her immediate line of I'm changing the rules... That was so powerful! I'm pumped!
Daniel Gesualdi
2022-08-02 15:01:41 +0000 UTCAyo wut? So quick? I'm in heaven T_T.
2022-08-02 06:53:02 +0000 UTCAgreed with the others, incredible speed! Also love the pivot in this chapter between Delta’s crew and Yattina, solid work! 👏🏻
Brendan O'Sullivan
2022-08-02 06:21:12 +0000 UTCI hope Yattina enters Delta and actually learns to play nice with her in return. Rather than just thinking it's a sort of exploit like the rest of the circus has. Also I really, really, really really really, wanna see how they react to Delta changing her first floor.
Owen Kasaboski
2022-08-02 05:26:59 +0000 UTCDOUBLE THE DELTA
Owen Kasaboski
2022-08-02 05:23:09 +0000 UTCDOUBLE CHAPTERS!
Owen Kasaboski
2022-08-02 05:22:52 +0000 UTC:)
Jimbo
2022-08-02 05:17:26 +0000 UTCI love this story!!! Please keep it up at a pace you are comfortable with. Don't overwork yourself.
Jimbo
2022-08-02 05:17:14 +0000 UTC
