Dungeon Mistress: Session 2
Added 2025-02-16 21:39:30 +0000 UTCAuthors Note: Here's session 2. As I mentio
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absolutely in love with this series and all of your work, thank you for writing for us!!! on the topic of character voices, i noticed the way you changed it in this session and I'm a fan!
Meep Mlp
2025-02-21 18:51:03 +0000 UTCHey, thanks! I think my writing continues to noticeably improve, so it’s definitely benefitting from that. And I appreciate the feedback about the dialogue.
Bob
2025-02-17 21:58:10 +0000 UTCFirst off, amazing chapter. This series is definitely my favorite now. And then to answer your question on the bottom I think the new way of handling names in conversation is perfect. As the reader, it's definitely understood that the characters are also role playing other characters so the conversation flows a little better in this chapter
Jake
2025-02-17 21:09:38 +0000 UTC
