Dialogue Update: Narration and Other Edits (Pages 7-12, 28, 34-35, 51-52)
Added 2021-08-20 20:07:46 +0000 UTCHi hi!
After further thinking on this change, I decided to remove the 4th wall narration from the edits I previously added. It just felt like...too much.
I let y'alls feedback sit for a week and I agree that less is more, and the narration detracts from the emotional impact the pages had previously. There's just something to be said about an art page with no dialogueโit hits different, ya know?
Thanks for your love and support on these changes, it means a lot to me.
-J
ยฉ James Schleisman February-March 2019 All Rights Reserved.
Comments
In the end, the most important thing is you feeling comfortable with the result. Personally, much better :P
Carlos Melero
2021-08-23 09:56:28 +0000 UTCHaha, as much as I hate to admit it cuz a part of me thought the 4th wall narration was helpful at the time, you're right. It was definitely one of those ideas where I was like "nO I wAnT iT iN My bOok" but it was garbo ๐
Jamie Schleisman
2021-08-21 15:13:44 +0000 UTC
