Neviara

Story Changelog - 6/26/23

Added 2023-06-27 03:16:44 +0000 UTC

So every once in a while, I'll be writing and realize dang, I could've done that better. Sometimes, I'll feel it so strongly that I actually go back and change things right then! For that reason, I'm gonna make these changelogs to give yall a heads up about things.

I'll try not to do this too often - especially not for massive changes or plot details. Most chapters that just have wording fixes I won't even note. But there's some important things I wanted to fix here!

Beware, ye who haven't caught up - here thar be spoilers!

Cycle 1-8, 1-10, 2-5, and : Middle of Nowhere

Shifted Kaitlyn's grades up slightly (maybe 10%, into the 30's for most of the bad failures). Still a convincing failure, but a bit less unbelievable.

Cycle 3-7: Get Rekt

Minor text fixes

Cycle 3-8: The Results Are In

Elliot is not part of Maze of Ills - instead, he's part of the (newly added) opening band.
I'm still finalizing that band's name.

Cycle 3-9: Welcome to the Show

Heather is still a fan of Maze of Ills but doesn't know the opener. That means she doesn't know who Elliot is.
Heather and Kaitlyn's interaction after the concert is mostly unchanged.
Heather still thinks Elliot is cute and wants Kaitlyn to invite him over.

Cycle 3-10: The Best Policy