3 Story (To LOVE-Ru)
Added 2024-12-08 20:49:26 +0000 UTCAnime - To LOVE-Ru
Characters - Rito Yuuki, Haruna Sairenji, Run Elsie Jewelria, Risa Momioka
Description: Kou wastes no time in winning over the trusting Run.
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1:38min story 1 2:1:13 min BJ scene 3:50 sec story 2 4:22 sec orher things 1 5:118 sec other things 2 6:24 story 3 7: 20 sec preparations before sex 8:sex 1:52 sec here you have 2 sex scenes :1 is ok up to a certain point and then there are bad camera angles 2: this sex scene could have definitely been different (sex position) + bad camera angles Summary : story still too long (172 sec) you didn't learn anything, other things here that definitely overdid it (233 sec) this BJ scene could have stayed but not the rest, sex is as long as 1:52 it's definitely not enough for me (there should be better sex positions + good camera angles) and here they are not there I will repeat it once again not much has changed since the last scene, 1: story too long, 2: no I know why other things are so long, 3: sex scenes (sex positions must be different than the ones in this scene) are too short compared to the two points I wrote about Summary 2: what I'm telling you doesn't help : the story is still too long, and it's still not clear why other things are too long, from other things only the BJ scene could have been left, although it should have been shorter, the advice is: extend the sex scenes so that they are longer than the story (why would anyone need them at all, they could have been from 1 min to 1:30 min is max) other things the only good thing is BJ or TJ scenes, but they also couldn't have been longer than 40 sec max that would be all, as you can see you still have a lot to improve 3-/5
Artur
2024-12-28 21:51:48 +0000 UTC
