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EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER II - Chapter 1 [ROUGH]

Here we go friends! A few rules & reminders:

That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy Chapter 1!

Comments

Great stuff to have Book 2 approaching clean state. Well done to Bryce and contributors. As to future state, is there a timeline for when Book 3 will commence? This is simply a question and NOT meant to imply any sort of pressure, just wondering.

James C

Awesome!

Sandy

Ah. Sorry, got to reading immediately 😅. It's great. Through the first 6 so far 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

PaulBFB

Please read the rules in the post 🤗

Wraithmarked Creative

hey, don't mean to be rude, but I'm pretty sure at around 30% it should be 'more than before' instead of 'then' (about the fawning parents). more importantly - LOVE the first chapter!

PaulBFB

This is already amazing!! I can’t wait for the whole book!

Seriously!?....1 rough chapter in and I already love it

Tad

It felt so good reading this. I've been waiting and wanting to read more of this story for so long now.

Marcus

Oh man, I have been waiting to get into this!

I keep telling all my friends that Iron Prince has the most “delightful little friend group” that I’ve ever read about. I’m already LOVING the interactions between Rei and Aria as “more than friends” as well. Bravo Bryce!

Devin Jaros

Excellent opening to what feels like is going to be another excellent book. Loving the interaction between them. And the end was sweet.

there's a couple of bits in book 1 where they talk about the Lasher getting sponsored by a family and a bit where someone says to Rei that he won't get noticed/sponsored.

James McLeish

Awesome! I can't remember if it's adressed, but do CAD fighters have PR agents, sponsors and stuff like that?

LOVE IT ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Amanda Jones

So so good, cannot wait for the next one.

Zebrababies

Amazing! really love the way the chapter ended, didn't expect that.

Great stuff! Smiled the whole way through the chapter


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