ISBG Chapter 5 - Part1 (12 pages)
Added 2023-01-22 15:21:55 +0000 UTCHi, part one is here! It's 12/37 P Well, 25 pages to go lol ... This week I'll try to clear to jobs that I left in December.. So please be patient with me
Comments
Thanks for your advice, I'll take it into consideration.
Furiouzly
2023-01-26 01:05:50 +0000 UTCPage 3 for example has a few. "Why no one's here" should be "Why is no one here". and "When mortal dies" Should be either "When a mortal dies" or When mortals die."
trippersigs22
2023-01-25 20:08:09 +0000 UTCThis was very good, expanding the universe of the series, good chapter, keep up the great work - Saludos -
Mauricio Garduño M.
2023-01-22 19:27:51 +0000 UTCThank you very much for ur advice. Could u point out which sentence/page u think is off? So i could b more careful next time? Thx u.
Furiouzly
2023-01-22 17:00:20 +0000 UTCI'm not trying to be rude, but can I recommend maybe getting someone to proof read the translation? The English isn't awful, it's just a little off and makes some sentences hard to follow.
trippersigs22
2023-01-22 16:39:16 +0000 UTCThe Garden is so gruesome and beautiful 💜 I'm also loving the titan's design! Such a baddie 😍
Gio
2023-01-22 16:20:27 +0000 UTCUnexpected Mount Rushmore lol
poroball
2023-01-22 16:07:06 +0000 UTCWoah what a place of despair. This is super fantastic work!! Nice to see what happens when get killed by a power like that. So cool!!
Mr.Relish
2023-01-22 15:57:20 +0000 UTC
