Found page 115
Added 2022-07-04 07:28:32 +0000 UTCHere's the original. https://www.furaffinity.net/view/7027182 I changed the dialogue quite a bit on the new page and brought it more in line with Pauls character.
I like the new page better, it shows a bit more of pauls personality, whereas in the first run through I will still sorta working that out at this stage of the comic. Anyway have the new page.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tjzyiuw4lfof84s/115.png?dl=0
Comments
Retellings are often better, much like a stew the second time around. You definitely seem more intimate with Paul's character with this new telling.
Broaster07
2022-07-05 22:45:34 +0000 UTC
