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Orb Weaver Vs. The Slaughterhouse

Next Chapter should be up tonight or tomorrow night (G-daughters graduation is tomorrow). But a little snippet of an alternate future. (in the main story the S9 won't be showing up.)

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"Um...so he walked in and just turned himself in?" Assault asked.

'Yes." Armsmaster said.

"And the rest?"

"Crawler wants to be a PE teacher and the rest have checked themselves into rehab... we actually don't have a policy for kill order capes just turning themselves in."

"And why is he crying?" Assault asked.

Armsmaster handed him a thick stick of paper, at least three hundred pages, tiny script on them.

"What's this?"

"Orb Weaver."

"Um, what is it?"

"A critique of Jack's 'juvenile attempts at terror' And pointers of how he could have done much better."

"And he turned himself in. And is crying."

"....It's a really brutal critique."

Comments

think he took a vote on that.

Kitrana

i don't love that the Patreon chapter is at the same point as the public one, though the patreon is only $2 so i can't complain too much

Calico

while i know Jack and his merry band of Murderhobos wont be appearing as opponents, i cant help but want to see some scenes with Jack reading the news following OW's dismanteling of the Empire, and appreciate him as a fellow artiste (he's a one note terrorist with some cunning and a very powerful backer whispering advice into his ear, but jack doesnt want to acknowledge, or even consider that) that said i now have that image on my mind, while Jackie, or Manton, is busy driving the Slaugherhause unmarked white van(TM) to some little town at the coast near the mexican border, just on the edge of where Levi's waves hit, to spread some chaos himself.

W1lliam


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