ReVoB 11.16
Added 2019-12-28 16:24:35 +0000 UTCWebsite update + charged post this Tuesday!
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Gwaha, thanks! The onomatopoeia and action lines aren't things I'm strong with, so I keep making tweaks to it. That last panel is one I like a lot, and in the final the dramatic lighting really came out. But yeah! Were!Church is a monstrous fucker, not worth trying to tame, yo. We'll have to see how poor York gets out of this fix~
Myshu
2019-12-31 17:58:27 +0000 UTCOh shit! The action hasn't remotely decreased. It's undecreased! The constant RRRRRRR (with a break only to mix in a RRRIP) is amazingly effective at showing just how fuckin' *lost* Church is in this state. (Tell me again why everyone thinks boning WerewolfChurch is a good idea??) I love the panel with the crash itself -- great positioning for both boys and a *damn* solid feel of movement -> hard impact. Wash's panic/worried/angry amalgam of emotions is captured nicely, too. Ending the page on an upward angle over York's shoulder is the icing on the cake, too. Really makes it feel on-edge and puts a great, nerve-wracking feeling even as we've got our HEY moment. Lovin' it!
Pony
2019-12-29 03:41:25 +0000 UTC
