ReVoB 12.01
Added 2020-05-16 17:11:50 +0000 UTCColored version will be uploaded later. But hey, if you squint here you can see the MSPaint.
Thanks to you guys, here's some early access on chapter 12!
Now, to remember to draw that cover page...
edit: This here's a color test.
I'm only pinging this one to see what y'all think of the style, going forward.
It's some tricks I was considering since chapter 10. It takes off the burden of detailed coloring (which was depleting my time and sanity) and could leave room for more side-content, if not move the comic along faster - I did mention there's 33 chapters, huh? I love the script to death and definitely won't abandon it, but I'm not spending eighty years faffin' around coloring bookshelves, either. Maybe this can be a compromise.
If you sweet patrons have any thoughts, let me hear 'em!
Comments
Thank you - very good point! I'll have to watch my contrast. I posted an adjustment with lighter values. Church is supposed to be near to white at this point. Sometimes I lose track, m'self. XD Thanks again! I'm always happy to hear from ya.
Myshu
2020-05-25 17:14:10 +0000 UTCThere is so much BROWN, dark brown at that, I am having difficulty seeing Tex. I'm fine with less detail coloring, but maybe switch up the background color in some of the panels Make it either darker or lighter than your characters, or conversely with your characters. Also, is Church supposed to be gray vice blue at this point? I've lost track . Great story line, great angles, and expressions, I can't wait to see more and yes, do not waste your time coloring bookshelves!
Flotster
2020-05-24 22:09:26 +0000 UTCBUT I GOTTA Thankee, Pony <3 Yeah, needed to draw the establishing shots before I can get wonky with the rest of the scene. Gwaha yeah, that bottom-left panel is a good *pause* for that reaction. *I'm so good at drawing feets* somebody call in a fetishist.
Myshu
2020-05-17 13:39:45 +0000 UTCCOVER PAGE SHMOVER PAGE. Great first page, full of a whole shitload of angles and expressions. For masochistic reasons, York in the bottom left is my favorite. Gets me right in a spot. ALSO kudos to you for drawing goddamn Church's paws in the same position like three and a half times all at different angles. Your handle on anatomy from all perspectives is inspiring <3
Pony
2020-05-17 03:42:54 +0000 UTC
